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By : KungFuu
  • From ForgottenPrincess on January 02, 2009
    I can't wait for the next chapter. I love Kakashi, I wonder what he is going to do now. Still try to get his way into Iruka's heart, and how will Naruto's first day of school go. Ah! I hate Mizuki, but for some reason the way he is in this story. The way you portray him, I can't find myself hating him as much as I normally do. I admit, I want Naruto and Sasuke to be friends, but I always do.
    Will Iruka tell Kakashi about his former life? Will more people find out about Naruto being the demon fox? Will Mizuki spill the beens about Iruka's past? Will Naruto find out? I have too many questions. I will be checking out your livejournal. How can I resist with such a good story.
    Hope you mangage to update soon, as I can't wait. Please don't mind the spelling errors I am sure I left in this review. Its 537am and i have yet to go to sleep. Had to wait for aaf's downtime before I could finish reading.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on January 02, 2009
    I had planed on writing my review after I had finished reading the chapter you have posted. However, I am 1/3 of the ways finished with chapter three and I have to tell you what a good story this is. How much I am enjoying this.

    "It sounded cruel even to him, but Kakashi was kicking himself for telling Iruka he would never force him into sex by using his past against him. He’d only said that because he didn’t think it would be necessary anymore! "

    In fact that whole section is great. Can't wait to read more, as such I will give a proper review after I am done. Or maybe I will feel the need to write another one before I finish.

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  • From Vague on March 01, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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  • From justdancing on February 25, 2007
    aaaaaahhhh hurry and write more! haha me like!
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  • From ednial on February 19, 2007
    i loves joo...O.o..... more i crave for more!!!
    you write like a god.

    ~ally~
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  • From ALD on February 12, 2007
    Wow, so many chapters, and they were all great. I feel so bad for Iruka, but at the same time I'm like "what the hell?!", his thought process concerning Mizuki is so messed up. I was originally pissed at how Kakashi was acting in the intial chapters, but now I totally feel for him, he has so many obstacles to overcome. Hopefully Iruka will see that he should be with someone that treats him right and doesn't play on his weaknesses. Can't wait for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2007
    cool chapter! Please continue!!
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  • From Hestia on February 12, 2007
    Yeah--new chapters!!!! Mizuke is so evil! Kakashi's lesson was great--and that nosebleed of his was awesome!

    Wow--the flowers--it's getting romantic!

    Iruka, Iruka--please don't let him sleep with that Mizuke a-hole again! And if you must have Mizuke rape Iruka again, please have him interrupted if possible.

    I love your story--it's got me so sad, but also Iruka and Naruto are so wonderful. The Kaka-Iruka sex is good too!
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  • From bears24 on February 12, 2007
    I like the whole twisted relationship between Mizuki and Iruka. I think you did a good job of initially portraying him as a sweet and caring old friend of Iruka's and then showing what he's really like. In this way, the reader got to see how Iruka saw him, relief and nostalgia at first, and then being snapped back to reality after. I also like the Kakashi and Naruto interaction. I think it's necessary for Kakashi to see Naruto as something other than an obnoxious brat for his and Iruka's relationship to develop. Overall, I'm really enjoying this story and I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update!
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  • From Hen on February 12, 2007
    Hurray! A new chapter. This story just keeps getting more and more intriguing! I love it!
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  • From Onawa on February 09, 2007
    Ah! I love IruKashi! I am looking forward to how this story turns out. Hopefully Iruka will get a break financially, and that Kakashi will realize what a treasure he is (instead of the only available lay). Sigh...
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  • From Karuka on February 06, 2007
    I'm not usually a fan of AU, but this is wonderful! I really love how emotionally-charged this story is. You've got me hooked! Little Naruto is so cute, and I love how Iruka works so hard from him to the point where he throws his own self-respect away in order to support him. I hope they find a much better life soon. Great writing!
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  • From Hen on February 05, 2007
    This is a great fanfic! I really like the way you're presenting Kakashi and Iruka's characters. And your lemon scenes are hot!
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  • From Hestia on February 04, 2007
    Wow--it's been a long time since I read Chapter 1--yea--new chapters!!! Thanks for posting! So good!
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  • From cloudydayz on February 04, 2007
    I like the pace of this story generally. It seems consistent with a story that starts with Kakashi and Iruka having sex (even if through prostitution). It seems to me that one of the possible difficulties of turning a one-night stand into a relationship is that the pace is always sporadic and unstable (please, don't ask me how I know...;-) And in the case of turning a trick into a relationship the problem of pacing must be even more problematic (now, this is only speculation :-).

    In any event, I think this is a very good story. I love the premise. I love the misunderstandings and misgivings they both have about each other and their would-be, could-be relationship. I love the sporadic pace. Five steps forward and eight steps back seems very realistic for me ("yep," I think noding with a thoughtful expression, "very realistic"). I will definitely be reading your story until the end. I can't wait for your next update
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