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Reviews for Fighting Dreamers

By : KungFuu
  • From ALD on February 04, 2007
    Great chapter. I'm glad this story is going to go on for awhile. There's a real shortage of good Iruka/Kakashi stories. Kakashi's characterization is good, but his attitude is pissing me off. Does he really like Iruka or is he just the only alternative. And Naruto is not my favorite character from the series, but you've written him in a way that's hard not to like him, he's just too cute. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2007
    I hope pick up for Iruka financially. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From pasc55 on February 04, 2007
    it's good !!!
    kakashi is for hard work lol !
    soon iruka would have him in his knees
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  • From MuseMistress on February 04, 2007
    Better. Much better. I didn't want to sound bossy, I just don't like to see stories unecessarily rushed when you can get so much out of little encounters between characters. A lot comes out of interaction, not just inner thoughts. Those are important, of course, but you really understand character through a combination of both. Keep going.
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  • From honZeldaFitz on February 04, 2007
    I like how you set up the tone for the future of their relationship. Kakashi will have his work cut out for him if he hopes to win Iruka's heart, even if he doesn't realize he wants it at this point. This was a nice chapter.
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  • From ursweetheartless on February 03, 2007
    that was cuuuute ... well as cute as a prostitute and a pervert can be together :p *runs off to friend on lj to wait for more fics* :D
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  • From ALD on February 02, 2007
    Just like your other story posted here,I really like it. There's this great balance between plot and lemon,a developed plot and just enough lemon to make it HOT! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2007
    This story is great! Please continue!!
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  • From SevensSeraphim on February 02, 2007
    This is very promising. I like how you characterized Iruka and Kakashi. Hope to see more in the future.
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  • From crazyforkakashi on February 02, 2007
    I wonted to say wow. I like the plot you have going on and can't wait for more.
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  • From MuseMistress on February 02, 2007
    Not bad so far. Things feel like they're happening really quickly, and I'm not sure if that'a good or bad yet. In any case, I'll be reading the next chapter to see what happens.
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