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Reviews for Rehab

By : UzumakiLover
  • From Midnightstorm on February 07, 2007
    hey sweety!! long time no see. i like this fic....i want to see where it goes, so please update soon!! how have you been other than that? i wonder where sasuke comes into this...anyway see you when you update!! ja ne!
    Taka
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  • From on February 04, 2007
    wow. this looks like it's going to be an amazing story. i really can not wait to see what you have planned for this story. you've offered a prologue that does its job beautifully. you pique the reader's curiosity with the poetry of your words and you draw the reader into the story with the depth of emotion flowing within each paragraph. great job and i look forward to more!

    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From on February 04, 2007
    *takes off glasses and fluffs hair*

    *glances around to make sure roommate is asleep*

    *clears throat*

    SQUEE! OH WOW THIS IS REALLY INTERESTING AND COOL!! I LIKE THAT YOU ARE INCLUDING SAI AND STUFF! But poor Naru-chan!! T_T That's so sad and what is he addicted to, and is some pretty bishie gonna come and save him from himself (coughSASUKEcough)???

    OMFG like you need to update and really quick and stuff!!

    ^_^

    *ahem*

    *puts glasses back on*

    *pulls hair back in ponytail*

    Damn, I hate it when that happens...well don't be scared by my inner-fangirl escaping. I hope to see an update relatively soon. Continue to watch for spelling errors and your use of present participles (-ing verbs). There were a couple of places where you were using -ing verbs when you needed to use just a regular past tense. You also have a habit of switching letters in a word around. Like I know in one of your fics you wrote easers--context of the sentence indicates you meant erases. No biggie, but if your working on your writing skills (which aren't bad currently), I just thought I'd let you know. You won't hear about grammar from me again unless you WANT to hear about it.

    La de da. I'm out of things to say.

    here's your review

    ^_^
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  • From omgladyfiend on February 03, 2007
    Wow. I really like it so far...well, I don't like Naru-chan being raped *cried hysterically* but it made the first chapter a true attention grabber and shows that- yes- Naruto has a VERY big problem. Out of curiosity...are we going to know ahead of time what the pairings are or is that something we'll end up seeing for ourselves?

    anyways...i can't wait for your next update. hope it's soon!
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  • From Stacy on January 31, 2007
    HAHA I like it! *that's from the movie with chevy chase(did i spell his name right)? Anyway, I love it so update soon!
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