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Reviews for It Wouldn't Work

By : NinPao
  • From lexjamandme on October 22, 2007
    Poor Naruto in the middle of a serious indentiy crisis. Imagine if he knew it was HIM that start the whole his two sensai's together! Looking forward to the next
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  • From BelleDragon on October 22, 2007
    Am very much enjoying this story. Kakashi and Tenzou er..Yamato are very hot together. Nice transition from the 'shy, embarrassed, unsure' Yamato to the sexy, agressive 'predator' in this last chapter :)
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  • From frijoles on June 28, 2007

    If this is not working then I don't know what will cause this was just hot.

    This was my first time ever reading a Kakashi x Yamato fic and I am impressed . Who would have thought thought those words spoken out of concern would have led to the coupling of these two delicious men in the follow chapter!! I Want MAWR!

    P.S Wonderful job done on the characterisations = )
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  • From marquesgue1 on April 19, 2007
    loool - heh, now instead of telling Kakashi just to call him Yamato he's giving him a hoice hn, lool significant change? and porr naruto, going to find sakura just so he can forget the dreams, i guess they'd freak me out too. anyway - hotness between kakashi and yamato again hehe XD i liked it. Cool chp.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From Shirozaki on April 17, 2007
    HARLEY
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  • From shohei on April 16, 2007

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  • From manicandyshumway on April 16, 2007
    Oooh! Hot lemony goodness! Please update soon!
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  • From marquesgue1 on April 15, 2007
    just found this fic and thought i'd say XD me like very very much :D and the next update is coming out today you say - heh good to know :D

    Ja!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From promise2003 on April 13, 2007
    Kakashi...Yamato...KakashiYamato...OMG Lemon Drops is SOLD! I loved this fic. I haven't been around the community other than to post in so long that I missed really good stories while I was gone. Not only that, but I don't have the patience to go searching through the archives with horrid story after horrid story lurking and waiting to hurt my poor little fanfic loving heart with their piss-poor grammar and writing. That is why I am so grateful, so very, very grateful, that you decided to review Hot Sand. I followed your author link and found this little gem waiting for me. And it was hot. Like OMG, that is DAMN smexy, hot. XD

    I can't wait for more from you, and I do hope you write some more KakashiYamato, cause your Kakashi is priceless. You have him down to a T, and your dialogue he uses is so spot on that I am completely jealous of you. Thank you for writing this, it made my day.
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  • From on February 01, 2007
    you deserve more reviews. this was way better than the stories ive been choosing to read on account of their hundreds of reviews. its stupid how that happens, eh? anyway, very cute. i havent really seen any of yamato yet since i dont read the um manga, but his character was adorable in this. thanks for the good read mate.
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  • From llyoung on January 30, 2007
    Your story is great. It's the first one I read with this pairing.
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  • From MuseMistress on January 30, 2007
    I think I've read this before. Oh well. I don't mind rereading fics if they're good. One thing I want to bring up is the break-up of the story. It could have very well been a one-shot instead of a multi-chaptered fic and the effect probably would have been better for the whole "sudden revelation" theme you had.
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  • From ANON - marcee on January 02, 2007
    will there be mor? i like it alot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2006
    zha shu le que? le magnifique!
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  • From ANON - none on November 17, 2006
    rocksome
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