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Reviews for It Wouldn't Work

By : NinPao
  • From ANON - Schala on November 06, 2006
    interesting piece there.
    different from your Naru/Sasu but just as good.
    Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve.
    ^-^
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  • From ANON - jess on November 04, 2006
    ahhh! that adorable and HOT!!!! ^_^ thank you much! i loved the pairing! very unique and fun. *HUG*
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2006
    Great story! That's a pairing I hadn't thought of before to be honest, but it does work. Yamato is so creepy in ways, but so cool too, heh. I like the way Kakashi aggressively approached him to dispel Yamato's belief that teamwork would suffer. If nothing, the fact that Naruto and Sasuke work so well together proves that's not true. Good writing and flows well. :) Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2006
    lol so funny and so kawaii. Yamato blushing.....right, but that bitch aint stealing away my kakashi. Hes mine, ALL MINE! hehehe
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on November 01, 2006
    How fun to read about a different pairing, and you made kakashi really sexy with how he twisted all Yamato's words around. And I like how you pulled in some SasuNaru stuff. LOL and what Naruto said at the end in his sleep after what he said before. That was very good!
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