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By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Danya on February 02, 2007
    *dies from laughing* That was great! I can't wait to see how the date goes.....Update soon!
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  • From Limericks on February 02, 2007
    I love this story! Its so funny and sweet. LOL poor Sasuke reading dating advice for girls, hilarious! You are doing an amazing job. Keep up the good work:D
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  • From tovah on February 02, 2007
    I swear this story gets better with every chapter. Please keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - animehead on February 02, 2007
    I have never laughed so much when reading a fan fiction...and out loud like some sort of freakish nut! Hmm I think this is going to be a SasuNaru story, which I like. Hell, I like NaraSasu too. I don't care to be honest!

    Now, I must say that you work fast. I thought I would have my next chapter posted before you had this one done (it's done, I'm just waiting on my beta). I felt like I had to put some smut in it after reading your stories...so I did! LOL.

    Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter's for your stories. I have become addicted to your writing..

    Now for the actual review: What I liked most about this chapter was how you allowed it to flow, like switching to different days and stuff. The fact that Sasuke went researching was GREAT, and having him attempt to lure in his blond was hilarious and brillant. Oh! and him copying Naruto, but not being as gross as him, and Naruto's amusement from the whole situation had laughing and grinning like an idiot. *sigh* I'm almost sorry that this story is coming to an end...not too many stores out there that make me laugh like this one.

    Oh well...Great as usual!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mikra on February 02, 2007
    Oh, and I would really like this to be NaruSasu 'cause after everything that happened in this fic, I don't really see Sasuke on top. And then there is the fact that I'm generally a NaruSasu-fan... XD
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  • From ANON - Mikra on February 02, 2007
    Oh God. I couldn't even read all of it. Had to skip a few sentences, I felt so mortified for Sasuke's sake. He's such an idiot.
    Great work :)
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  • From ladygizarme on February 02, 2007
    omfg that was fucking hilarious. poor, clueless sasuke.. lmao, omg it was almost hard to read as sasuke went about blatantly embarrassing himself while trying to woo his dobe XD i kept wanting to cover my eyes and peek through my fingers at him lol (especially during the 'mimic naruto's actions' part hahaha) poor guy.. yeah, i'd be hoping it was all really worth it in the end too :p as for 'who gets to top' i don't mind too much either way, i like both too (i just tend to get excited about narusasu more since sasunaru is so much more prevalent) and here it's kinda hard to decide.. on the one hand, sasuke was turned on to begin with by what naruto had said on the phone, which suggests naruto should 'top', but sasuke is the one doing all this 'research' and making the effort to go after him (even if he's following advice for girls...) so maybe it should come down to who knows better what they're doing.. though in this situation just cuz sasuke may research it doesn't mean he'd know what he's doing lol.. so whatever you end up going with will be cool with me :p
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  • From marquesgue1 on February 02, 2007
    Wow - that has to be the worst.. courtship(?) ever looooooooool, poor Sasuke, I loved the bit in the library where Naruto went 'I was just waiting for you to put your make up on' hehe, classic :D

    can't wait for the next part ;)

    Hina xXxx
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  • From honZeldaFitz on February 02, 2007
    This is hilarious. I love this.
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  • From Touya06 on February 02, 2007
    The 3rd chapter was...hmmmm...

    The first two started out okay...but the third just didn't really portray Sasuke's personalityb. I know you said Sasuke was acting OOC, but I don't think he would even try acting like that. It just didn't feel right.

    Bright side: Everyone else's personalities and reactions to the situations were great.



    Thanks for the update, and I look forward to the IC Sasuke. :) *thumbs up*

    Ja!
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  • From on February 01, 2007
    You are awesome and that's final!
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  • From SeveredWings on February 01, 2007
    AWWWWW....Kiba is such a cool friend. *Sighes*...I want someone like him!

    Tanksya for the update! I really enjoy reading your writing style. You're truly talented me' lassie!

    Ja na,
    Severedwings
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  • From LuthienWildglen on February 01, 2007
    Oh now that’s just not nice! I thought I was going to get some smut in this chapter, and seeing as you were extremely cruel in “Sound of Dreams”, ending the last chapter just as the smut was getting started, one would think that you would at least give us a little something in the second chapter of what is now going to be a four-shot. I suppose though after an extremely sexy first chapter, one has to do something to “build the suspense”. Anyway, all I’m really saying is that I loved this chapter as well, even if there wasn’t any smut. I especially like the line “He was shocked, he was confused and he was as hard as a quantum physics thesis.”-a wonderful analogy that totally set the tone for the chapter as well as the mood. Anyway though, just a quick, or not so quick note. My best wishes for you and your writing.
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  • From barara on February 01, 2007
    BAH! i love this story >_< u must post a new chappie soon~~~
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  • From ANON - mimi on February 01, 2007
    until you finish this story, your days will be numbered.............

    ah, just kidding. heehee. great job. that was certainly a little twist there, in having Sasuke's POV. please continue soon!!!!
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