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By : Zrina
  • From ANON - makkura arashi on February 10, 2007
    oh god, this was so much fun!!! poor poor sasuke!! gah i feel so bad for him!! idiot should check the number....i wonder what naruto will do!! see ya soon ja ne!
    Taka
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  • From ANON - me on February 10, 2007
    wonderfully done! I'm so glad you finished, and this story was perfect until the end. thanks so much for this! great job and I hope you continue to write more!
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  • From ladygizarme on February 10, 2007
    hahaha, that was awesome, this story was great. so hot, yet hilarious at the same time. i sorta really like how sasuke's plans for their first date bombed. i like thinking that, even though he's hot, he doesn't really know what he's doing. so many people often assume that just because he's *sasuke* he'll be perfect with everything, but really i don't always see sasuke as great with human interactions like "wooing" and dating.

    so, getting to the actual reviews for these last 2 chapters: the date was funny, it was another one of those nail biting, wanting to watch through my fingers things, almost on par with sasuke following the "dating advice" (but not quite, lol, idk WHAT can compare to that XD) also, it's cute how, once again, kiba had to step in to get things on the right track. and when sasuke was putting his bags on the table and explaining what everything was, i giggled when he said "alcohol" and "alcohol's friend"--that was cute. it sorta felt like a comparison between him and naruto to me, too. like how, at the restaurant, he had wine and naruto had cherry coke--it seemed like THEM. oh yeah, and i giggled at sasuke saying "you bet my sweet ass" (lol, instead of "your sweet ass"--was he already implying he would bottom or was he just being sasuke :p either way, it was cute and funny)

    and after all that, omg, the sex was HAWTTTTTT; omg, i so love uke sasuke >.> i love them both, but gahhh sasUKE is SO HOT!! like when sasuke was giving naru head and naru said "fuck, sasuke!" and he paused to say "yes, please." *drool, nosebleed* also, it was refreshing that they used a condom.

    and then: "So, what do we do now?" Naruto asked softly.

    "We fall asleep together. And in the morning, we wake up together," Sasuke said just as quietly.

    "So that neither one of us will ever be alone again," Naruto finished with a tender smile.

    omg, that's so sweeeet! nice bit o' fluff mixed with all the *funny* and *hot* ^______^

    and then, the epilogue!! omg, i saw it coming, but it still cracked me the hell up. as soon as he started doing the same thing naruto had done to begin with, and got distracted by the burning popcorn, i knew he was dialing sakura's number. lmaoooooo omg, greatness. great job, fucking awesome. you rock my socks

    ~ lg
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  • From yeagerbomb on February 10, 2007
    that was perfect. it couldn't have ended better. 20++++++++ stars. good job.~
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  • From Starryeyedstar on February 10, 2007
    That was the perfect ending! XDDD

    I can't stop laughing!
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  • From barara on February 10, 2007
    HAHAHHA that was fricken awesome!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 10, 2007
    how did i know that was coming? ^.^ this was a great story! quite humorous. when you finally finish Sound of Dreams, you should totally do another comedy. till next time!
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  • From ANON - severedwings on February 10, 2007
    :GAK:...that was...so MEAN! Arg...poor Sasuke-kun! You are a verra mean mean author goddess. BUT, I must say...I didn't see that coming. Way to go!

    Thanks ya for finishing this!
    Ja,
    SW
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  • From ANON - animehead on February 10, 2007
    Finally! I feel complete! ::glomps Zrina:: This was a wonderful, hilarious, sexy, little story. I'm so happy you wrote it. Poor Sasuke, calling Sakura at the end! LOL! Awesome. Just plain awesome!
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  • From Adi on February 10, 2007
    so i wrote a super long review this morning BEFORE ANYONE ELSE HAD REVIWED and then aff.net decided it was their "daily moment of downtime" and my review got lost in cyberspace and it was sad and stuff :( and i couldnt write another one till now because i was gonna be late for work, and i had yet to brush my teeth (see how far reading your fic is on my priority list? XD)
    aww it sucks you're ill!! BUT YAY YOU UPDATED WITH SMUT!!!! and the funniest epilogue in the history of epilogues XD
    thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!
    :D
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  • From marquesgue1 on February 10, 2007
    Hehe, the ending was fitting I think loool, but you almost made me choke with the restaurat scene. I was eating lol when I read the bit where Naruto said the slime thing it was hilarious loool. Nice, I thought it was a good fic! Thanks for posting it.

    Ja! xXxx
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on February 10, 2007
    This was sooooo much fun to read. Sasuke's cluelessness and the way he *actually followed* the dating advice meant for girls was hilarious. What a disastrous date!

    The hot sexing in chapter 4 was just... yum.

    I will be reading The Sound of Dreams very soon.
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  • From ANON - Total Truth on February 10, 2007
    Aww I loved this. I laughed so hard at Sasuke at the end. I love your stories, they are absolutely great!
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  • From ANON - TsukiUchiha666 on February 10, 2007

    this is how much i liked this fic... I tried to login to post under my actual penname here on Aff.net. And I couldnt... And i really wanted to post under my actual ID... And I spent the last half hour trying to login...

    And finally decided to just review. Somethign I haven't done in SO long.

    BUT, this fic deserved it. It was just too funny and too shocking someties the things that happened. And at the very end, i couldn't stop laughing. Beautiful job. I also am in love with the Sound of Dreams. You're a good writer.

    I'm waiting for another update on that story of course!
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  • From ANON - b on February 10, 2007
    Hysterical..hot..perfect really. The end was really scary.
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