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Reviews for Team Gai: Chronicles

By : Erisabesu
  • From rebelrevolution on May 10, 2021

    Lovely, lovely. I got tons of ideas for drawings to create. Thank you for creating this work. 


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  • From ANON - Agito_Wasashiro on December 22, 2008
    Wonderful, wonderful story. I read it out of boredom, but so glad I did. The way you wrote was flowing and beautiful and made me unable to stop.

    This story deserves a lot more recognition as far as I'm concerned.
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  • From Saitochan on October 06, 2008
    My god, that was... beautiful! I hadn't thought there could be a threesome between those three, since it's always either one or the other.
    I'm a huge fan of fics involving Team Gai members, especially if they end up together.

    One little detail though... Your story was amazing, but unbelievably long, especially for a single chapter...
    You ever thought of breaking it down on chapters?
    It'd make the reading much easier!
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  • From ANON - vic on March 05, 2008
    i love this story but i am not sure if that was a hapy ending or a sad ending.
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  • From UbakeNeko on December 10, 2007
    Wow. That is all I can really say, I think... I didn't think it was possible for Lee to be sexy, but you managed it nicely. I especially liked the way you built the dynamics there.... Those kinds of relationships can either be beautiful in a good way (like you did) or in a angsty way, which is much easier. You did a lovely job. Bravo!
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  • From Tricia1224 on May 14, 2007
    I forgot to say that I don't consider what you wrote smutt because it was more than just sex. Not overly graphic and very tastefully done. Is that the right word for it. Anyway...
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  • From Tricia1224 on May 14, 2007
    This story is beautiful. Not full of smutt. So full of love, emotions and other things that I don't quite have the words to describe. The way that they interact with eachother and other teams. The closeness of them and how their relationship progresses over time to love. I will say this again this is a beautiful story.
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  • From edwee42 on April 14, 2007
    That was amazing. I love this pairing now. Thank you!
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  • From thetaintedrose on March 19, 2007
    This is just purely amazing. You've captured not only images of romance, love and much more, but my heart as well! Your writing is clear cut - no fumbling with words, every sentence and paragraph phrased in such away it grips the reader's heart and urges them to keep reading! Your use of imagery is masterful, I've not read better. Keep it up!
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  • From animelovergirl on February 03, 2007
    That was an awsome fic. I never would've thought I could like a fic with Tenten and Lee in it but I read it because I'm 'little' bit Neji-obsessive ^^ And what do I find? A wonderful fanfic that is beautifully written and even with the times changing never loses its flow. Great work! Especially the way you discribe Neji at the end of the story where he has to decide wether to stay with his lovers or to finally become a headfamily member.
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  • From Kerobinson01 on January 31, 2007
    Wow! I loved it!!! Not just for the very frequent and intense bouts of sex (threesomes galore!!) but for the intimate relationship between them, everyone got something they needed from the relationship, something precious which gave them a sense of stability, something to rely on. Especially Neiji in my eyes. Anyway.... twas brilliant, keep it up!
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  • From bean1498 on January 28, 2007
    Oh that was just wonderful! I was so afraid that he'd go back to his clan! I'm glad that it all worked out. Beautifully written and wonderfully sensual. I absolutely adored this one. :) Good work.
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