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Reviews for Warmth

By : Tellkalia
  • From Calcifer on January 18, 2009
    Well done. Very nicely written.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - sethfc on August 10, 2007
    please please make the next one i beg you *gets on his knees* please


    i love your work brillient good detail please continue it


    till next time .seth.
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  • From saiyanprince1 on July 24, 2007
    lol any more?
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  • From Dynamo on July 16, 2007
    YES yes please continue! its realy good!
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  • From promise2003 on June 30, 2007
    What you did right:
    I think the fic has a really cute premise. I love fluff in any way, shape, or form. XD I really like how you set up the characters and how they interact.

    What you can improve on:
    I do think that a bit of editing and working on pacing would really help this story. It feels like it goes far too quickly at some points. Sometimes it loses focus and jumps around from thought to thought. Drawing out the moments of cute fluff would help immensely; and conversely, I think the sex scene was far too "wam, bam, thank you ma'am" and should be slowed down as well. Play out more on emotions, because usually emotional sex and fluff go hand in hand.

    I'm not harping. On fics that are poorly written (or show no promise at all) I don't review and just rate them accordingly. I believe that you have a fic that could be very good if revised.
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  • From elaynabrooks on June 26, 2007
    *whistles* Hoo boy, was that hot. Can't wait for some more. take as much time as you need so it's just as good as the last!
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  • From CasaHouse on June 25, 2007
    Please keep this going! NaruSaku is easily my favorite pairing, but there is an intense lack of Het fics here... Well written, unique angle to kick things off, overall, well done.
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  • From wildkit on June 25, 2007
    continue. Now!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From SecretQuill on May 01, 2007
    please continue!!!!! i love it!
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  • From ANON - virginia on April 28, 2007
    ^__^v loves this so much! plz continue!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on April 26, 2007
    Yes it was good for me to.
    >.>

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  • From ANON - Tleilaxu on April 14, 2007
    I MUST know what happened with him and Kiba... and we need more NaruXsaku sex with her gettin g preggo, and of course Kyuubi Action.
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  • From ANON - narusakufan on April 10, 2007
    O.O
    that was amazing!
    i really loved it, it's short and probably the sweetest little fanfic for naruto and sakura.
    CONTINUE THIS PLEASEEEE.
    and if not then i think you should make a new one ^____^
    GREAT job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2007
    AWESOME!!! Ero-Sennin Approved!!! **^_~
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  • From ANON - N/A on February 13, 2007
    Kiba? WTF?
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