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Reviews for An Indecent Affair

By : ClaireBear
  • From ANON - Tyra on April 18, 2007
    Awwh. Yeah.
    The chapter 7 was really good. Amusing.
    I just love Sasuke when he's being an ass like that. xDD
    And Neji.. Aawww, he's so cute! He didn't know what 'commando' means? Awh. Again I must say.. Poor Neji-chan. I would pinch him if I could! :D
    Good that Sasuke and Neji are getting along so well already, thought Neji is still little scared. (Who wouldn't be after being raped by their boss?)
    Hmm. Haven't heard anything about Ten-Ten recently. Good! xDD Hah. I don't really like the pairing (NejiTen) :P

    Really good, goood story and very, veeeryyyy well written.:D
    I hope you update soon. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
    Heh!
    KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON.

    And did I forget to mention.. GOOD STORY !
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  • From yersifanel on April 18, 2007
    I absolutely loved this chapter!

    Was so freaking awesome to read the interaction of Neji and Sasuke, is just great! Sasuke's personality against Neji's and how they are, in a way or another, to improve their relationship somehow, but I can see Sasuke is the one having even more troubles since Neji is just too afraid right now.

    OMG! Neji didn't know what commando was? That was so cute, really, just so damn cute, jajaja.

    So, I read that you will keep Orochimaru lurking by the way but not just now, well, that’s interesting, I just want to keep reading the story, I love the way it is going! I have to say that your fics are the most interesting I’m reading right now…

    Well, My BETA is better now, she just had not finish the chapter; I hope she get it done soon jajaja.

    Take care!!

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  • From Kare on April 17, 2007
    aww, poor Neji baby *hugs Neji* i hope sasuke makes him feel better...and that he breaks up with ten-ten >.>
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  • From ANON - silver on April 15, 2007
    Please write more on this! This Sasuke is really great! I love how you wrote him. I can't wait to see Itachi.
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  • From ANON - Casandra on April 12, 2007
    I really like this story and the abusing Neji thing is something I also love even if I do love Neji he is just too fun to mess with!

    I hope to read more of this!
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  • From ANON - waltari on April 11, 2007
    I love love love this story. And i really love the neji/sasuke banter that has started. EXCELLENT!! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - someone on April 08, 2007
    Wow, this story is really good so far^-^ I enjoy the bits where Sasuke picks on Neji... he should take it up as a hobby. Just a guess, but I don't think that having security guards after him will keep Orochimaru from bothering Neji(please don't let it, you write his freakishness better than almost anyone>.
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  • From ANON - Tyra on April 04, 2007
    Yaaay !
    Aah. So Neji's now working for Sasuke? Well, that's good. Sasuke's much better than Orochimaru. xD
    It was kind of funny that Sasuke was actually sitting on a Nejis desk. Heh.
    Poor Neji, will you ever get away from Orochi? I hope so. And aah, Sasuke's so brave.. -dreamy smile-

    Update soon. I love your story.
    Sorry, this review was kind of.. lame? xDD

    KEEP WRITING !! UPDATE SOON ! -SMOOCH !! -
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  • From yersifanel on April 04, 2007
    This chapter was great!

    I like a lot the way Sasuke is trying more and more to know Neji and how he seems to like the Opal eyed boy a lot and how poor Neji is all confused by the circumstance around him.

    I think I like this Sasuke, is very entertaining to read him, he has that kind of attitude that makes me think the words:

    Someone: “Why?”
    Sasuke: “Why not? *roll eyes*”

    Yeah, something like that. I also enjoy Neji’s inner battle, he is still afraid and now that he is in somehow different scenario he does not know what to do or how to exactly do it and well, the plot concerning the crash of Sasuke’s and Neji’s personality is something really good.

    Well, as you can see I’m still here reading your story, jeje, don’t worry I promise to write too so I’m not the only one reading. I haven’t update ADC because my beta is sick =( but I hope she gets better.

    Take care!

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  • From Gabo0 on March 14, 2007
    OH my, Neji has some memory
    Please, psot more soon!
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  • From Gabo0 on March 14, 2007
    Oh.. Neji broke the card, that's too bad.
    Please, post more soon!
    GaB
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  • From Gabo0 on March 14, 2007
    Oh please, post more soon!
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  • From ANON - dragonslayer1 on March 06, 2007
    *eyes watery* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this story is sooooooo touching!!!! Oh I don't want to wait, but I know I have to CURSE YOU GOD!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - b on February 26, 2007
    Very interesting, I don't understand why he didn't report the rape, he has no history of anal sex and rape is damn easy to spot medically but then there would be no story.I like it alot.Intreguing (sp?).More please!
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  • From on February 23, 2007
    you know, i was a little hesitant to read this because most neji/sasuke isn't done very well, but i'm very happy that i've done so. this story is absolutely amazing. your characterization was done amazingly well, the reader, understands and knows the character, they feel everything that's happening as it happens. you're prose is surprisingly poetic.

    this is a painful story. i feel so sorry for neji, i want to take him away from everything and i want to hide him from orochimaru. by the way, your portrayal of him, absolutely stunningly disturbing. i love the way you have sasuke as well, the perfect bastard. i'm very interested in the next update and certainly hope that it comes quickly. great job!

    ~hanyou-elf
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