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Reviews for An Indecent Affair

By : ClaireBear
  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2007
    DOING GREAT, I LOVE YOUR STORIES HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON. IS THERE GOING TO BE ANOTHER NEJI RAPE SCENE WITH OROCHIMARU THAT WOULD BE COOL.
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  • From ANON - inuyashalove on July 01, 2007
    Good story so far. I just found it and decided to check it out. I love how you have everyone acting. It's different, but nothing outlandish. Good work with this chapter too. You could have made the break-up longer and drawn out; but I like it short and sweet. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From yersifanel on June 25, 2007
    Hooray!! You're back again!
    I liked this chapter, was nice to see the impact of Neji's change in his life and then how Orochimaru shows up being all evil and stuff (nice, really) and his new EVIL plan, hooo, you just write him so nice, I like it!.
    Well, even if the chapter was short, the point was clear, so it's okay!

    Now. you are correct, English is not my mother language, It's Spanish. But I'm doing better and I founf a nice and really nice BETA, so I'll be fine.

    Thanks for the update!!, keep going.
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  • From ANON - Chaos on June 25, 2007
    Wow, so stupid that I didn't realize e-mail addresses were hidden. *smacks self*
    riomasu@prodigy.net
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  • From ANON - Chaos on June 25, 2007
    Oh. My. God.
    I love your writing so much that it's not even funny! xD (Your fic "Inbred" had fifty chapters when I started it and I read it all in one day. >>) Anyway, I love the way your portray all of the characters, and I love that Neji and TenTen finally broke up. TenTen = cool; TenTen + Neji = LAME. Orochimaru is such a creepy SOB, which you recreate so well that it makes me believe that he's gonna rape Neji on the show or something. xD I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up your amazing writing for it makes me so happy. Good fics can be really hard to find.
    By the way, you say that you need a beta? I wouldn't call myself any sort of professional, but I'm very good with grammatics and making suggestions in writing. I can always be a back up help if you want it. Just contact me! :3
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  • From ANON - soft_touches on June 24, 2007
    Yo, I'M SO PROUD OF YOU (statement coming from the bottom of my heart) and i'm glad your proud of yourself. i woke up this morning already late for work and i was excited to read your email and i was happy the whole day even though it sucked. finally i get around to reading this, it really made my day. remeber this your story so steer where ever you want i'll be passenger. thanks for the dedication, it kept me smilling all day.*stands and claps for you* soft_touches
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  • From ANON - soft_touches on June 24, 2007
    Yo, I'M SO PROUD OF YOU (statement coming from the bottom of my heart) and i'm glad your proud of yourself. i woke up this morning already late for work and i was excited to read your email and i was happy the whole day even though it sucked. finally i get around to reading this, it really made my day. remeber this your story so steer where ever you want i'll be passenger. thanks for the dedication, it kept me smilling all day.
    soft_touches
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  • From Twiggies on June 24, 2007
    Yes!
    Great chapter once again! And it wasn't that short.
    Ha! Finally Neji broke up with Ten-ten! ..Umm.. Heh.. Somehow I don't feel bad for her anymore.
    Neji, indeed, belongs to Sasuke and he knows it himself! :D

    And I must say, I LOVE Orochimaru's new plan!
    ''…when he was lulled into a false sense of security, just when he thought he was finally safe, Orochimaru would strike and destroy him all over again'' -droooooool-
    Awesome.
    I hope you update soon again. I wanna see what happens next!!
    Is Neji going to tell Sasuke about Orochimaru? (He did touch Neji's cheek!) And poor Neji passed out, I wonder is he going to wake up, I mean, is he going to make to work in time? :DD
    UPDATE SOON AND KEEP WRITIING! LOVE YA!
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on June 23, 2007
    MOAR, I NEED MOAR!
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on June 23, 2007
    *fapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfap*
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  • From ANON - soft_touches on June 20, 2007
    Hey hey hey, how you been? sorry for missing almost all of this story i've been hiding under a rock and living with insane room mates but some how were like family its great. Anyway, the story has a good plot to it and when you read it from start to end the chapters move smoothly together. lol getto-goth gaara, i was in tears with my imagination going wild trying to figure gaara wearing G-unit. I guess the big question is if sasuke's going to watch the tape? Oh, did he know about the tape or did Itachi just "find" it and wanted to show sasuke. Hn, i can wait for the next chapter so take your time because i'll be on every friday but i would appreciate it if you could e-mail me when you update any of your stories or if you want to cuss me out for some odd reason. I'll review for Inbred soon. peace.
    ~soft_touches~
    honeybumblebee5@yahoo.com
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  • From emp78 on May 30, 2007
    I love your writing style, and I love this story! Sasuke being an ass and having a foot fetish is sooo funny! What are his other erotic fetishes?
    Itachi as always...YUM! His 'pets' are cute, too.
    Weak, angsty Neji is adorable, so much better than he is in the manga.
    Orochimaru is just EWWW! Always has been, always will be. BTW, the person Neji looks like, is that who Orochimaru referred to as the dead person he kissed?
    Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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  • From ANON - dragonslayer1 on May 29, 2007
    Hurray another new chapter I just love this story to death. I've read the whole thing three times today just because I thought it was sooooooo goood. As much as I would like this to be updated soon. oooh PLEASE PLEASE WORK ON THIS MORE so that it maybe done sooner!!! WAAAAAAAAAAA. Okay I"m cool I"m cool keep up the goood work please. I like more good quality work from you hurray!
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  • From Twiggies on May 26, 2007
    Heheh. This chapter was cool also!
    Itachi was nice.. should I say gentleman? Naruto and Gaara.. Well, I like them. :D

    Really good chapter I must say.
    It was so funny when Sasuke said that he had thrown Nejis shoes away. xD
    At least Neji got new ones.

    Bam Chicka Wah Wah! I hope you update soon again. I can't wait to read what happens next!
    I absolutely love your fics! :D

    I wuv you!
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  • From yersifanel on May 25, 2007
    YES! You update this story, double YES!

    Well, I have to say that this chapter is one of the most interesting until now, Itachi had show up and I like him already (well, I normally like Itachi, because he rocks, yay) and I love the way he freaked out Neji by being all nice to him yet with his normal spooky self is fun to see, also I noticed that he took a lot of interest in Neji too, well, everydoby has a thing for Neji here (jajaja) and I like it, lol.

    Gaara and Naruto are, well, interesting. So, Itachi "owns" them? I think will be interesting to know more about the Uchiha brothers and their peculiar world.

    Don't get so lost, I missed you! (no, really. It's hard to find good stories)
    Ho, and I lost my Beta, she's so bussy she can help me now and I have the next two chapters of ADC un-betaed, *angst* and I'm starting aa new couple of stories (sweet, sweet inspiration) I'll ned to find some help...

    Anyway, I hope to see reading more of you (hey, I don't lose a thing for dreaming, right?) Take care!!
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