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Reviews for An Indecent Affair

By : ClaireBear

From Twiggies on September 06, 2007
Oh yes!
Really great update!
Itachi and Sasuke's past was really interesting! Well, I know it was just one part of it, but it was still good!
And the story about Haku too! The way you described Haku in that photo.. You made him sound so cute and innocent. I like it, especially if Neji looks like that too. xD

Gosh, that Orochimaru really is crazy! Insane! I mean, the way he just lost it and started throwing things in his office! Heh... Creepy, I'm loving it.
The ending: �The Hyuuga was his and his alone. He wouldn�t let anyone else have him. And if he couldn�t have him�then no one could.� That sounded really scary!
And I loved how compassionate and..kind Itachi was. And Sasuke is quite sexy when he's so angry and dangerous. xD
But I guess it just scares the hell out of Neji. :O

Really good update and awesome story!
I hope you continue writing! I love this fic, just as I love all your other fics.
LOVA YA TOO! :D
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From on July 25, 2007
ZOMG I LOVE IT!!!! *huggles ClaireBear* You have to post soon yeah! I like the fact the you made Sasuke considerate of Neji's phobia nad that he's trying to help. Personally, I think that Orochimaru is an evil back, but there's nothing I love more that a Neji with problems. Yes him being a tormented teen is very sexy. *nods*
Update soon! Oh, can you e-mail me or let me know when a new chapter is added? If you can e-mail me at DarkNinaRuler@hotmail.com or WingedLyra@yahoo.com

GREAT STORY!!!

-Pen
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From yersifanel on July 22, 2007
Hello darling!
I'm here again and ready for give you my review, yeah!
Okay, this chapter was pretty nice, I like the way Sasuke is traying to help Neji, and even if is hard for him, It's nice to see how Neji is slowly trusting Sasuke...and to be honest I melt in kawaiiness (is that even a word?...who cares?! XD) when Sasuke finally hug Neji, jeje.
Yay, Neji has the Uchiha borhters as his Divine Guardian Devils! (Fear me and my paradox of doom! lol)
It's a shame that actually almost any outhor can be around for too long (*it's being hit by rocks and cans 'cuz she has not update yet, actually*) but if we try to not *puff* from the ff universe for too long and come back with a nice chapter (like this one, jaja) then we are safe, aren't we? jajaja

Well, keep going and if you need something I can help you with, just email me!
See you soon then.
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From ANON - soft_touches on July 21, 2007
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
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From ANON - soft_touches on July 21, 2007
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
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From ANON - soft_touches on July 21, 2007
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
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From ANON - soft_touches on July 21, 2007
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
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From Twiggies on July 21, 2007
Yay!!
This chapter was seriously cool!
I love it when Sasuke is so patient with Neji. He really likes him, doesn't he? So adorable.
I'm glad that Sasuke is trying to get Neji to his feet again..I mean, Neji's not weak or anything, but.. I'm glad Sasuke's healing Neji's wounds! That sounds better. xD
And it was so cute how Neji didn't get Sasuke out of his thoughts after that!
I hope you update soon again!
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Can't wait can't wait!!

UPDATE !
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From ANON - Chaos on July 20, 2007
(Ooh, I think I got the 2000th hit! xD)
I did love this chapter, and the start of touchy-touchy for Sasuke's libido made me grin devilishly. :x *pervert* Besides the fact that Neji really WANTED him to stay... hee, pure happiness.
But I'm glad to get stuff done fast for you. I think I am quite enjoying my job. :3
*uber love for you and your writing*

And the only reason I read all those chapters in one day is because I couldn't STOP. ADDICTION, I say! xD
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From ANON - soft_touches on July 12, 2007
*starts singing some song from The Lion King* 'can you feel the love tonight blah blah blaaah blah blah' ok i'll stop singing and get serious, this is my favorite chapter because its cute funny and sweet all at once. the only thing i noticed was when sasuke doodles on neji's forehead then they go to the shooting range its like he still has it on his head... you know lol when i was reading the peanut m&m part my ipod shuffled to Big Balls by AC/DC so it keeps a smile on my face every time i think about it. later ; )
aeternum,
~soft_touches~
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From ANON - soft_touches on July 12, 2007
*starts singing some song from the Lion King* 'can you feel the love tonight blah blah blaaah blah blaaahhh' ok i'm done singing and i'll be serious now. this is my favorite chapter, its cute sweet and funny, lol i woke my roomate up just to read 'peanut m&m' part and then she was like "wtf its 3 a.m." started laughing and then she went back to bed. it reminded me of Big Balls by AC/DC. the only thing that kinda weird is when sasuke doodles on neji's forehead, before waking him up to go to the shooting range. i assumed neji wiped it of but... its like he its still there. undonno.
chicken n' gravy
soft_touches
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From ANON - soft_touches on July 12, 2007
*starts singing some song from the Lion King* 'can you feel the love tonight blah blah blaaah blah blaaahhh' ok i'm done singing and i'll be serious now. this is my favorite chapter, its cute sweet and funny, lol i woke my roomate up just to read 'peanut m&m' part and then she was like "wtf its 3 a.m." started laughing and then she went back to bed. it reminded me of Big Balls by AC/DC. the only thing that kinda weird is when sasuke doodles on neji's forehead, before waking him up to go to the shooting range. i assumed neji wiped it of but... its like he its still there. undonno.
chicken n' gravy
soft_touches
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From yersifanel on July 10, 2007
This chapter was truly amazing.

It's nice to see that Neji is somehow trusting Sasuke and how Sasuke wants to protect Neji (along with Itachi, for what I can see).

I liked this chapter a lot for the great interaction and details, it was too much fun to read (and Sasuke doodling on Neji's forehead, I was all "ROFL" jiji)

I'm glad you are continuing this story, I liked it a lot, and to be honest, I just can't wait for more.

See you soon!

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From ANON - Tyra on July 10, 2007
Oh, this chapter was so cool! It really was. The guns and all.

Awh, poor Neji, sleeping at work! xD Sasuke was really nice to him, letting him sleep the day away ^^
And then the shooting. I loved the way you wrote about Neji and Sasuke, especially about their feeling and all.
I hope you update soon again!
Neji's beginning to trust Sasuke, eh? That's a good thing too.
Now that Sasuke's taking Neji home (to Neji's home, I mean!), is he going to.. Well, obviously he's going to find out where Neji lives, but is he going inside or does he just drop him off there? xD Or maybe he's going to just visit him some weekend? xDD

Well, we'll see, ne? I hope you update soon again! Keep writing! Loved the long chapter! -hearts- xD
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From ANON - Chaos on July 10, 2007
Yay, I'm wonderful. :D
But anyway, I'm glad to beta for you anytime you want! I had a fun time being able to look it over, and it's a great chapter! You already got my compliments, though. x3 Actually, I'm sorry it took me a few days because my grandfather had a heart attack, so I wasn't able to access a computer due to being quite occupied with my family. I actually the editing in an hour or two. xD
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