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Reviews for An Indecent Affair

By : ClaireBear
  • From nm1716 on January 30, 2008
    I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From candywise on January 29, 2008
    this is such a beautiful story. keep writing and I'll keep reading. poor neji
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  • From yersifanel on January 27, 2008
    This chapter was nice,
    It's a Shame Neji was having a panic attak that strong, but it was very razonable, I wonder what's going to be Orochimaru's move in the future.... and what are going to do the Uchiha Brothers about it?
    I really want to know.

    See you next time!
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  • From ANON - Chaos on January 26, 2008
    Oh, geez... I didn't get to beta this one. My laptop went up and died on me a few months ago, so I can only get on the computer two or three times a week at best. I'm so sorry. ;-;

    I liked this chapter, though. I love Sasuke's childishness that he just WON'T get over because he's a biotch, and I love the fact that you make Itachi likable. =] And Orochimaru is a creepy rapist, as usual.

    But I giggled at the name Mr. Ishida... heh. Ishida.

    So yeah, I didn't deliberately try to ignore you. My computer is just crap. Much love to you.
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  • From ANON - Grey on January 26, 2008
    Mmmm, first time reviewing on aff.net, but I figured your stories more than earned it. =) You have no idea how excited I was to check your profile for updates to find TWO stories updated. I actually cheered at my computer.

    Ahhh, uke Neji. So hard to find good stories with him in that position, but you do it well. Even though he's supposed to be A-Ranked I still think you pull off his personality pretty well, I mean you're allowed to take some slack with it because this is AU after all, but aside from his break downs, which are understandable, you capture his attitude fairly well I think. It's more relaxed, but seeing as he isn't a ninja in this story that would make sense.

    =) Keep it up! I love all of your stories and I'm glad to see you haven't let them die.
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  • From Twiggies on January 25, 2008
    Oh wow.
    I really like this chapter!
    Poor Neji. That nastu, long tongued snake Orochimaru.
    Even seeing him makes Neji scared so bad. xO
    But it was good that Itachi appeared. And Sasuke too!
    Awh, and Sasuka called Neji ''baby''. -gigglegiggle-
    That's so cute.
    And Neji asked him to hold him again.
    Ah, does he even know what he is doing to Sasuke with his cuteness? xDD

    Pfft, I wonder what Naruto and Gaara did to get arrested. xD
    Those two really are spoiled rotten.. We shall blame Itachi! xDD
    No way. Those two are always so hilarious.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    I'm so loving you and your fic!
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  • From ANON - tekremp06 on January 15, 2008
    This is one of the best fanfics ever. I have been watching it constantly to wait for an update. I wants more!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Jien on January 01, 2008
    I know this isn't a fanart...but since your story inspired this one it's only fair that I give you a link http://zenith-kaitou.deviantart.com/art/Haku-Hyuuga-73465135 and I gave you credits.

    Really awesome fic you have here, please update soon =^.^=
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  • From ANON - dragonslayer1 on November 28, 2007
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WHY HAVEN'T YOU CONTIUNED THIS YET I LOOOOOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH PLEASE DON'T STOP!!!
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  • From ANON - stalkerocandies on October 23, 2007
    While I've read many, many stories at AFF, this is the first time I've felt compelled to write a review. I am enjoying your story very much. I'm a very serious uke!Neji fan, and you write him sooo well. Thought I'd bring up that people who experience something as traumatic as rape (and in this case multiple rapes...gah!) end up with a syndrome called Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, or PTSD. They have nightmares about the abusive person and when the incident is severely brutal victims relive their experiences when conscious, their memories totally overwhelming reality around them.

    Pardon me if you already know this. I thought it would add a touch of both reality and interest to your story (and because I also lub an abused!Neji). *winks*

    stalkerocandies~
    Thanks for sharing your ficcies. BBFN.
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  • From Twiggies on October 01, 2007
    Ooh la la!
    Well that was something!
    The second lesson was great. A little touching here and there already.
    And it seemed that Neji enjoyed it very much, not even able to get back to his work. xD
    And what about Sasuke then? Poor him, not being able to sleep 'cause his too horny!
    It was seriously great.
    Hahah, And 'Pajama Day'.. I remember when there was once that kind of day in my school. xD

    Heh, and Naruto and Gaara? Those two are hilarious!
    I can see it clearly in my head just how cute Gaara looks! xDD
    Hmm, I think Neji would look pretty good too, in that kind of clothes! xD

    Meh, I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    I love ya and your story!!!
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  • From ANON - silver on September 15, 2007
    As always, a wonderful update. This is so good. It was a bit surprising about Haku b/c I've never thought he and Neji looked alike. That phone conversation was priceless. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - inuyashalove on September 09, 2007
    *sigh* Did you have to cut it off there? I was hooked into this chapter, hoping for some more of Sasuke's 'therapy' lessons. Or...with the phone conversation more detail on Sasuke's side. But the part where Sasuke threatened Orochimaru made me smile. I was waiting for that to show up. I can't help but wonder what Itachi is planning...so I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out. ;)
    Good work on keeping my attention and curiosity on your story.
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  • From Twiggies on September 08, 2007
    Yaay!
    Update so soon? Me likes! :D

    Really good chapter once again!
    I loved Sasuke and Neji's chat!
    It was pretty funny too! xD
    Neji talking with Sasuke on the phone. Naked. And he told him that, too! xD
    Neji's just feeding Sasuke's perverted side. xD

    Awwh. It's so good to know that Neji really trusts Sasuke.
    It was so cute when Neji was crying in the bathroom in the last chapter, thinking that Sasuke saw Haku in him. xD

    Well, I really hope Sasuke sees sweet dreams. xD Neji has that effect on people, eh? xDD

    I hope you update soon again and keep writing!
    I love you, this fic, and all of your other fics too. ^^
    Keep writing.

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  • From yersifanel on September 08, 2007
    *Is jumping while babeling nosense about to many things* AHHH!!!
    That was fantastic! I knew it was Haku but since you asked to not say, I respect it! jajaja
    YAY! I love tha chapter the explination, it was just so cool! I mean, bth Itachi and Sasuke sure were a pair of fools doind something like that to their mother, but the thing is, now they see it, too bad is too late (but grat to the plot)
    OROCHIMARU!!! HOHOHOH!!! I can sense something really cool coming and I have to ask you to continue soon!!!(even thinking I have small chances to see it happen...*sweatdrop*)
    ...pretty please?

    Awesome Chapter!
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