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Reviews for An Indecent Affair

By : ClaireBear

From ANON - Tyra on February 22, 2007
Wihii!
Another update.
I don't really care about Ten-Ten, but somehow I feel a little bad for her.
It's creepy to think that when you kiss someone, you see such a creepy face in your mind.. O_o
Heheh. Update soon. I wanna read more of this. I just love to see Neji suffer. And I love to see the smuggy Sasuke and creepy Orochimaru.. Yeah, even Orochimaru.
KEEP WRITING.
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From yersifanel on February 22, 2007
*Gasp!* Neji is having mental issues, ha! Must be very dificult to him to deal wit his hum...Master-wanna be and ten trie to go back to normal only to find is not easy.

Tentes really worries about him in this story (but I still like more Sasuke to him, muhahaha...*sigh*) and I found really caring of Neji to tried to not hurt her, even if him is the one hurt at the end. (Someone said Angst? lol)

You know, I was coming back from school when I went here and saw you had update, I was all "YAY!" because, honestly, your story had just caught me, period XD.

I also have a lot of ideas and stuff in my head and I want to write them all, I wish I could do it as easy as say it, jajaja. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, take care!
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From ANON - random_reader on February 19, 2007
This story gets better and better! Hope you'll update soon :3 oh and who's the corps Oro was having 'fun' with before Neji? o.O (are you even planning to reveal that xD? *curious curious*) and I still don't quite get why Sasuke is so interested in Neji (yeah yeah it's an SasukexNeji fic but there's gotta be a reason right o.o; *feels dumb ._.*) nya~ waiting for the next chapter x3
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From ANON - Tyra on February 18, 2007
Yay! You updated (obviously..) !
Good chappie! More raping and Sasukeeee!
Ah, Orochimaru is such a creepy guy. I like it. xD
Good that Sasuke and Neji actually talked to each other in this chapter. Interesting, indeed.
Maah! Update soon. I wanna know what happens next. Will Sasuke be in the next chapter? If he is, is he going to be with Neji..? OMG WHAT HAPPENS??! UPDATE SOOOOON !

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From yersifanel on February 18, 2007
Thank you very much for continue!

So, Neji got the guts to fight and in the end found himself in a death end, too bad but that only makes things more interesting (Yes, I love to see Neji suffer in a good plot, so what? lol)
Orochimaru is such a evil physco and you write him so cool! the way he thinks of Neji and how he wants to control it, it's just very good, since you write it so cool it makes the story even more interesting (something well done is more cool to read)
Now I get why Sasuke was upset with Neji, in the end he was kind of wanting to help him but Neji's impresion of the Uchihas is not good so the good bey to the card and lest just wait and see for more of this so cool story.

Now, about the comments on the first part. I know how you feel, I often had to write and re-write chapter until I like them and I also have so many ideas on my head and I want to write them all! I hope you find you way to write all you want and more important, enjoy doing it!

Take care!

PS: I like the comic you made
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From ANON - dragonslayer1 on February 18, 2007
OH MY GOD THIS IS TURNING OUT GREAT PLEASE CONTIUNE THIS IS SOOO PROMISING! but on other note. I totally understand the feeling. I guess I rather wait weeks and get a good chapter than wait a day or two and get a crapy one. So no rush, but know that I"m eagerly waiting the next chapter ^_^
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From PasuterEnogu on February 17, 2007
Poor Neji. I feel really bad for him, but I am loving his pain. How mean of me. ^-^ Ochi is one sick mother, though. I will be looking foward to read what Neji does. You are doing an awesome job.
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From yersifanel on February 17, 2007
Hello (again) I just read your story (again, 'cuz I like it) and I'm just wating for an update, jajaja, I love your evil *coug* I mean nice plot! jejeje... *seawtdrop* Anyways, I hope you continue, take care!
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From PasuterEnogu on February 16, 2007
Wow, okay. You really need to continue this story. I haven't read any Sasuke/Neji stories before, and so far I am liking this story. I always love to see my favorite characters suffer...^-^;; Update soon! Please.
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From ANON - Tyra on February 14, 2007
OOOH YES !
I love this story!! I think I'm going to say that in every review.
Poor Neji.. Suffering so badly (How sweet.. Mmm..). Don't worry Neji, the ''good Uchiha's'' are going to help you.. I think. Heh.
Update soon. I wanna see (read) why Orochi wanted Neji to his office again. 8D
Keep writing.
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From ANON - inuyashalove on February 11, 2007
I like your story. Although, Orochimaru is a little creepy and obsessive of Neji; it's still a good story. I can't wait to read more.
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From yersifanel on February 05, 2007
And the youngest of the Uchihas enters the picture!

My my, Sasuke is really something here; Even if I can�t say that I meet a lot of f his character I did get some important things. I have to say that the part when he reached Neji and looked of the bruise of his neck leave me with a �What the?...� face, it confused me, also the sudden rage after Neji was call, I think the right choice of question is �Does he knows something or what?...and if he does, how?� mystery, jajaja

You say you are not good at angst? But you do it so nice, really *thumps up and Lee-trade-mark-smile* you are doing a great work here.

I can see that now Neji is entering in that kind of situation in witch he does not know what to and still he can�t do almost a thing. Hey, the end o this chapter gave me that feeling in the stomach that just leaved me waiting for more *hint, hint* My God I can picture Neji walking those stairs, awww much like a cliffhanger.

Thanks for another chapter, take care!!

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From yersifanel on February 01, 2007
You continue the story! That�s so cool because I am very hooked to it, really.

The story is hardcore (at least to your standards you said) but is very nice wrote and the plot is very interesting (well, for me it is. What can I said? I like the good Neji-angst like this, nice) this chapter was shorter than the last one but it gave some points about Neji�s character and details of what you did not wrote after Orochimaru took him into the limo (even thinking that we *knew* what was going to happen) You know, I was listening to Radioheade�s �Talk show host� while reading this chapter it was fitting somehow, it made me think in both Neji and Sasuke. The first part of Neji and somehow the second more about what I think Sasuke is going to be here and Itachi (even thinking you had not write about ten just yet, but hey, next chapter will come and I have a feeling about those two, thanks to the hints you gave in the long summary)

As I expected some of my questions have and answer mow, like Neji�s family, you made a hint there so that is cover, if it came latter will be just because of what you have in that mind of yours.

Really, I�m glad you are going to continue this, I had been so long looking for another SasuNeji stories and both of yours are so cool, I just like to read about them so much.

So, thanks for continue and for not leave me in the cliffhanger and angsty about it, LOL.

Take care, see you next chapter (horray!)

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From yersifanel on February 01, 2007
I was cheking your profile when I saw this story, I was wondering why I didn't read it, then I saw that you just publish it, so that was why! I started to read it and I just have one thing to say...I like it!

Onces I read that you (and I quote) "enjoying abusing Neji" well, I do too, come o, we both know that its fun, I can't help it (if you have read my stories you know that, I'm evil with him, can't help it! I like him too much) so I was inmediatly caought by the summary.

Anoter interesting story! I like how you write about Neji (and Sasuke, and both together) ad you can surely say that I'll bereading your story!.

I have some question but since you had only publich one hapter, I'll wait and then make them! so, thanks for sharing, take care and see ya!

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From Twiggies on January 24, 2007
I like this story, too. Hell, I like all SasuNeji stories..
xD I hope Sasuke will show up in the next chapter. Soo, Uchiha Oro.. Interesting.
Is it wrong if I like that Neji got raped by Orochimaru? :X
Update soon.
You like the pairing too, huh? This is your second fic correct? I LOVE BOTH !
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