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Reviews for Close Up

By : MsTrick
  • From ANON - tesame on February 08, 2014
    still my favorite. well written smutt is the best kind :) and this is the best.
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  • From RyuuOokami on November 30, 2009
    Oh I loved it! *snicker* Liked Kiba and Neji, oh Neji! *laugh*
    I'm not good at reviewing so I'm just gonna throw you some of the things I liked:

    As she wandered closer for a better view she noticed her polar opposite, the school’s ultimate badass heartthrob Uchiha Sasuke, sauntering towards her crush and his best friend.

    The thing with Sasuke being her polar opposite. *smile*

    Funny thing was that he was about as untouched as Hinata, except his isolation was gleefully self-imposed.

    *snicker*

    Neji would never have let him touch her anyway, she thought sullenly, wondering if she should do the teen movie thing and cry in a bathroom stall.

    Such an awesome awesome line XD

    “What?” Sakura said, pulling back all of a sudden. “I can’t have Sasuke. And you can’t have Naruto. We’re not for them, right? So I want something I can have. I can’t have Sasuke. And you can have this instead. ‘Cause otherwise, y’know, Neji. And me, there’s, there’s nothing. For us, ‘cept...”

    Sakura's drunken logic is fantastic. XD

    And I really liked the whole sex-scene. And the ending. Sakura stealing Hinata's panties was too awesome. XD

    Thanks for writing and sharing. *grin*
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  • From harus on August 11, 2008
    Man you're awesome...there isn't enough good SakuHina out there. It was really sexy. And there was even bonus SasuNaru. It wasn't just about fan service though, it was well written!
    How did you know I was jacking off? jk jk, not really >_>.
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  • From MagicalReality on May 16, 2008
    Wow....That was quite...I don't know. But I really did like it. XD I hope to read more of your fics in the near future.
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  • From lucrecia89 on May 01, 2008
    Oh my god. That was probably the hottest story I've ever read...and I've read a lot. It makes me ashamed of mine o.q Good job. Very very good job.
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  • From CaffeineBurnout on March 14, 2008
    God damn, that was hot.

    I normally only read sakura/ino fics, but this has to be the best naruto yuri that I've read to date. I loved the way you portrayed the characters, even if some of them were slightly out of character. Instead of using the generic "Oh, I've loved you for a long time, oh me too, let's screw" sex-scene setup, yours was much more original, and much more believable.
    Even though it's not in her nature, drunken Sakura was a great choice as the dominant girl.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
    that was fucken hot...
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  • From bimorgan on July 07, 2007
    good story you should write more stories in this universe make it a series ill read and review them all if you do cuz this is the only au i actualy like i look forward to reading more
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  • From Warkon on June 09, 2007
    Damn!!! I used up a whole lot of tissues while reading this story! Needless to say I'm a huge fan of yuri and I really liked it. I'm looking forward to whatever stories you may write in the future.
    Oh, and LONG LIVE EVERYTHING YURI!!!
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  • From Intelligo on June 04, 2007
    Good chapter. Pretty hot and the alcohol certainly makes for a better explanation than "Oh Hinata...I never noticed, but all of a sudden I love you enough to turn lesbian".
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  • From Geddian on May 16, 2007
    Mmm, good yuri. Considering the quality of most PWP yuri fics, you might as well just proclaim lordship of the section right now. The only competition I can think of was a nicely done Tema/TenTen, but that has apparently vanished, so pwnage to you. Write more :p
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  • From DrkLazarus on May 15, 2007
    I don't know if I've reviewed this before, I forgot to check. And, frankly, I don't care. I'm disgusted with myself for not having done so earlier when I read this originally.

    Anyway, I'll do it now. This is a flawless piece. I love the interaction. All I can say is, since this is a oneshot, I hope for a sequel. While the pairing isn't believable by any sense of canon, it's one of my favorites regardless. I just hate the fics where it's Naru/Sasu, and Sakura gets relegated to some kind of third wheel who's happy for them both. A boy who loves you, and the boy you love, and they've *both* decided to be with each other over you? It's quite the ego crushing blow, and who would begrudge Sakura a little human comfort?

    Matter of fact, I encourage it. Wholeheartedly, if it keeps turning out like this.

    Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing. ;)
    ~LZ
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  • From RainFallsSoDoDreams on March 10, 2007
    Damn, that was erotic. I loved it, it must be the best HinaSaku I've ever read.... I loved what Sakura did in the ending, and I love Neji's whole protecitve bit
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on March 03, 2007
    Wow! Great fucking Yuri!
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  • From HyuugaHinata on January 27, 2007
    That was really great! I hope you can do a Tenten x Hinata like this one!
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