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Reviews for Monkey Shine

By : karikara
  • From JadedGothButterfly on November 04, 2008
    Also,Speaking Of Your Last Question : I'm Interesting In None.Homosexual Behavior,Whether It Be in Lit. Or RL,Is Of No Interest To Me As I Find It,I'm Sorry,Revolting.

    Please,Forgive Me If You Think,Or Any Yaoi/Yuri Lover Thinks,My Words Are Blasphemous.I Have Nothing Against Them...I Tend To Not Bring It Up And Prefer To Keep It To Myself.
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on November 04, 2008
    Oh,My,GOD!I So Loved This!I Was ROFLing & LMAOing Like Never Before!OK,I HAVE ROFLed & LMAOed But Very Few Times.

    I Just Cracked Up When Hinata Thought, 'A fellow wall-flower!'.Just Too Cute For Words!

    And This Sentence - I Drowned In My Sea Of Laughter : 'Neji was dressed like a knight; perhaps he would live up to his outfit and rescue her.'

    Oh,God.I Still Have Tears Of Mirth In My Eyes.

    And The Drinking Contest...Brilliant!Who Would've Thought...

    Yes,A Little OOC...But i Can Imagine Gaara & Hinata Acting That Way,At Some Point.

    This Was Adorable.

    I Would LOVE To Be Able To Be In Contact With You,If You Need A Beta-Reader.

    You Can Add Me On :

    Yukiko Hosokoawa @ AIM/AOL
    chrysallis_reborn@hotmail.com

    Update,Soon! =)
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  • From ANON - Robyn on May 02, 2007
    I thought the pairing was very cute. Ive never seen Gaara as sexy in any light but I may change my mind.
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  • From ANON - zzzz... on April 20, 2007
    love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it! LOOOVVEEEE IIIITTTTT!!!!!!!!!!....seriously i love it an dont worry abt them bein OOC cuz i think thats exactly how they wud act..an the scene where she goes:

    “You’re not wearing a costume, are you?” Hinata asked, quietly.

    Gaara slowly shook his head.

    ...priceless i tell ya...an it wud be reeallly cool if you could continue this.....kinda sad abt no sex bein in this..
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2007
    This story was amazing!! Please keep it going!! I LOVE the setup. It was fantastic. GaaHina is one of my favorite pairings and some people don't know how to mix their personalities. True they're both more mature than in the manga but they have to grow up sometime. You did an excellent job!
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  • From ANON - morwen re on April 02, 2007
    that was fucking awesome! i can't wait to read the next chapter! there is going to be one, right? and i don't really think that they were out of character that much, considering that they were drunk...
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  • From SkippingAlice on March 03, 2007
    “Are you supposed to be Sabaku no Gaara?” Oh god, I was laughing so hard throughout the entire story! Great job, no smexy scenes, but then it didn't need them.
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  • From on February 04, 2007
    I love this, especially how you handled the two main characters. Gaara, in particular. I think a lot of people have trouble pinpointing his personality. You got it spot on. Please continue. :)
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  • From FlameTwirler on February 03, 2007
    This story was interesting. I sure wasn't expecting Gaara to be paired up with Hinata and I was very skeptical at first (although I love alternate pairings for some reason it's hard for me to see her with anyone other than Naruto) but you had me convinced by the end. Her character was a lot looser than I imagined from what I've viewed in the manga, but everyone grows up and changes so I think if it's aimed a couple years in the future then you're spot on. It was a nice set up.

    And thank you so much for making fun of the song "Humps." *shivers*

    As far as your last question goes...I think that those particular genres of fan-lit neither further nor deter. From my experience it seems that people differentiate completely between what is fiction and what is reality. What someone likes on paper doesn't always translate to the real world. (Similar to how people will read about witchcraft and be entertained but completely against real witchcraft outside the book, and other such instances.) A girl may like reading about two boys kissing but if she sees it happen in front of her she may even get jealous - it goes into the whole realm of 'one less on their team' sort of thing. Guys don't seem to have as much problem with that part of it (they have their own that I won't bother to go into), but they also read much less fanfiction than females do. Anyhow, all this to say I think some people will be turned off by it, some will be opened up by it, but the majority will have it locked away in a room in their brain that says 'fiction' which is far far away from the room of 'reality.' Wow, that was long. Bleh.
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  • From doxtater on January 31, 2007
    This is one of a funniest, most entertaining stories I've read in a long time and I love the pairing, I've never read a story with this pairing before and you did a really good job with it. Rock Lee is my idol, "I CHALLENGE YOU TO A DANCE OFF!" I was laughing hysterically at several parts of the story and that was one. Fantastic job, it would be interesting to read if you continued with it but it's great as a oneshot!
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