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Reviews for Watch My Back

By : KandKL
  • From SubmissiveGirl on September 23, 2009
    OH I love this story! ~ I hope you update soon! ! ! ! I am new to adultfanfiction and unsure on how to subscribe to your story for updates so i was wondering if you could email me when you have updated? It would be greatly appreciated.
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  • From ANON - E.Bo on April 16, 2008
    This was really really good. I wish you would continue it.
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  • From SkippingAlice on May 18, 2007
    Great job, though I hope you might consider taking this somewhere besides a one shot, but it'll be fine staying that way.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2007
    Aww KandKL, this was really really good. I'm not even just saying that. Like, this is really great character analysis, and something I haven't thought of. I liked that you did it from Saku's POV, and even so, the little quips between Naruto and Sasuke were really amusing. I snorted at least four times. The best part was that she was practicing her chakra training (something she's really good at btw, better than the boys!) and here the other two get all the attention. And she's not even bitter or upset about it, which really gives Sakura credit. Granted, Sakura was... annoying before the Chuunin exam, she gets better and better even if she lags behind the boys in strength.

    But I thought it was really sweet and a different angle on what she has to go through. It would be kind of hard, not only is she a girl ninja, but she's on a team with two of Konoha's potentially most powerful ninjas. It would be kind of hard to be in their shadow. And I think, as a writer, it's super important to have stories like these where you get to understand more where the character comes from. It makes it a lot easier when you write a longer fic (not that I need to tell you that). Anyway, yay, it was good. And I agree, Sakura does get bashed a lot, I try to steer clear of that, because like that other reviewer said, Sakura has a chance to grow. She won't be the same Sasuke-crazed girl in time-skip. Plus now she kicks butt :)
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on January 23, 2007
    i loved this. sakura is my favorite character and a lot of people dis her but i feel your fic really did get inside her head i applaud you on a job well done keep up the good work
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  • From KrickItat on January 22, 2007
    hey i just wanted to say that i love your perspective on sakura!

    To many people seem to think such sttrabge things about sakura but all these girls who are writing all those (mostly) awful yaoi with all their sakura bashing seem to have forgotten one very critical fact.......everysingle 12 yr old girl under the sun acts like that. Even them

    Oh yes i myself harken back to the excruciatingly embarassing days of Corey norman (imagine sasuke but blond). so horrifying to think of all the things i did to get his attention, But we cant paint every one with the same pen i mean if we all stayed the person we were when we were twelve....?

    I dont think its right when people write sakura in a future tense and seem to forget the fact that people grow up, you get nore mature and you want different things, people talk on and on to me when i write that sakura wouldnt just give up on sasuke and let me tell you from personal expirence that thats just bot true. Maybe back in the day iw as passionatly in love with corey norman but that dosnt stop me today from having meaningful relationships.
    Besdies AFF right now seems to be yaoi crazy and it kinda pisses me off. la sigh not that i dont like yaoi there is just so much BAD yaoi
    Ok ive rambled to much cause i have really strong opinions on this.

    Thank you for doibng a very lovely and well written short.

    Happy writing and try writing somthing a little longer next time that would be great.

    P.S: You might make it a little easier for people to review if you went to your profile and turned off the anonymous review blocker, its on automatic right now so alot of people forget.
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