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Reviews for Editing! Gaara's Dream (new chapter added!)

By : Aoekae
  • From RavenShantor on April 01, 2007
    Interesting story so far. Over all I've got to say that I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out. There is however one minor problem that I found. You forgot tthe word "have" when she says "you'll the demon of KONOHA to deal with."

    LOL Other then that good job.
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  • From Sadakoyamamura on March 15, 2007
    where is the hentai
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  • From SnowLeopard on February 06, 2007
    EXCELLENT!! The story is starting to pick up and is getting good. A few minor typos that need to be beta'd out but great job. I plan to follow this piece.
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  • From Kilrath on February 04, 2007
    This is a very good start but i would suggest a few things, a little more detail and if possible that the chapters be a little bit longer.

    Overall though its still good
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  • From SnowLeopard on February 03, 2007
    I like the title...I was thinking along the lines of the same thing. I hope you will be able to continue this story. It has a lot of potential to be an awesome piece! Please e-mail me if you needed help with the beta-ing.

    Xenobia (snleopard@hotmail.com)
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  • From SnowLeopard on January 28, 2007
    Hmmm...this is a good story and I'd love to help you with a title. But, honestly, I think I need one more chapter to come up with it.

    Can you send me an e-mail with spoiler details...I really want to help.

    snleopard@hotmail.com
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