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By : MuseMistress
  • From wolfkin59 on June 12, 2008
    My god, that was awesome.... Please continue....
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  • From manicandyshumway on May 05, 2007
    Beautiful. Simply beautiful. *applauds*
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  • From Julissis on March 24, 2007
    This fanfiction totally rocks. ^^ I'm glad that i found out about you while reading A tenious grasp's reviews. *g*
    I enjoy reading your writing style immensely. : ) Had to laugh hard a few times. (especially when Gai was involved)
    You are not rushing anything, giving the characters time to think and sort out their feelings.
    And poor Hayate. : ( Reading about him makes me sad every time.
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on February 07, 2007
    HOT and SEXY.

    Momentarily putting aside my huge thing I have for Kakashi *snickers*, Genma is the GREATEST. The "Pretty good" scene was genius. I giggled all the way through all the parts about Gai. That poor fellow! Scorned by Love in the Springtime of his Youth! The flowers...ha ha ha! Ha ha! Other than that, sexy man-sex, great dialogue, great build-up, and how did only one other person review this wonderful story?!?!
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  • From ShayBoo on January 25, 2007
    I love this story, I really really enjoyed reading it.

    Genma needs more love, I love you for giving it to him.

    Please tell me there are more chapters to this story *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - oztan on January 08, 2007
    For some reason I feel sorry for Gai.
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  • From ANON - NeoMT on December 20, 2006
    I can't say that I love or hate this fic... it's nice to see something with Gai in it, so that is a plus BUT you went on the fanon thing that Gai's nature points to a deficiency is sexual knowledge and stuff and that is a minus.
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  • From Hestia on December 02, 2006
    I was so excited when I realized there was a sequel, I decide to reread this one first. My god--this was your first fiction--that's amazing--you're a natural! That sofa scene is so hot. But it's the romance that's the best part--so, so wonderful! This one is a classic. I don't know how you can top it, but I'm off to read the sequel--thanks again!!
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  • From promise2003 on November 17, 2006
    I should be sewing a cosplay outfit for my friend, but damn you and your great Kakashi/Genma fic...really DAMN YOU. I couldn't stop...I couldn't just bookmark it and leave it for later. No...I had to read the whole stupid (and by stupid I mean absolutely fantastic) thing instead. Darn...now my friend will be mad. Must go sew. Please write more, anything, I LOVE IT! You are definitely going into my bookmark folder of favorite authors.
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on November 17, 2006
    I was like what the hell... you know with the weird pairing but I started reading it and i couldn't stop. It was like crack...you know the good kind. I like how you moved from one part of the story and then back to the main charactors. It was really good. I hope to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Reily on November 16, 2006
    Normally Kaka/Gai makes me shudder but I just had to read for the Genma action and it was definitely delicious! I thought it was funny that it actually took them years to realize that they might actually have real feelings for each other. I really like it so far, is there going to be more?
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  • From ANON - Hestia on November 16, 2006
    Oh fabulous! I'm so glad it was Genma who got Kakashi! Oh and the line about kissing scars and then the kiss of his scar. I love stories were broken, scarred disillusioned men decide to take a risk and fall in love again. I loved the bit about Kakashi's pants--great touch! The bar flashback was great too.
    That line of Anko's was awesome also. I really enjoyed this one--Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Kerrisa on November 16, 2006
    You are insane to call this an odd pairing! Out of the box pairings are the best! And how you wrote it... wow, it just goes to show that with great talent you can write about anything and it will stil come out awesome. i thoroughly enjoyed this story. I hope to read more from you!
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  • From ANON - crazyforkakashi on November 15, 2006
    That was sweet. Kakashi slept with Gai . Off to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - SweetDisparity on November 15, 2006
    Oh wow, this is so good! I just loved the way it flowed, and the pairing was just fun! Definately worth a read or three.
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