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Reviews for December

By : MuseMistress
  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
    I'm intrigued....continue!
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  • From ANON - orangepie on December 08, 2006
    Oh my goodness grashious mee (lolz, cant spell to save my life)!! Totally awesome story! :D I beg of you to update and I'll be checking back everyday! ;)
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  • From ANON - burr on December 07, 2006
    whoaa! this caught my attention. you write long chapters, which is good (i hate short stories with grammar errors and typos!). character development is also going to be interesting.. i can only wish you luck with the fic and wait for an update :).

    (btw, i like calling sasuke "sassy", too :))
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  • From ANON - justdancing on December 07, 2006
    I love your style of writing. It flows nicely. And I like how the points of view change subtly for the different characters. Too many authors change points of view too often and it just sounds the same so you forget who's s'pose to be telling you the story. One little thing that I have to point out because my linguistics prof would hate me if I didn't: the saying "for all INTENTS and PURPOSES" is commonly heard as "for all INTENSIVE PURPOSES" which is why you probably use the saying "intensive purposes". Just thought you'd be interested in knowing that :) I think it's interesting. But then I'm a linguistics major :) hehe Again, love your stories. Especially Tripwire.
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