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Reviews for December

By : MuseMistress
  • From KiaraNxiar on January 24, 2007
    Totally loved the story! It's really unique and interesting. I like the interaction between Itachi's reactions towards Kisame while at work, it's kind of funny. I like how you developed Sasuke's character - naive and curious. I can't wait to see how it turns out. So, please update soon, bye.
    P.s. I hope you'll be able to update your other stories soon. You are a really good writer!

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  • From roely on January 21, 2007
    realy good story! so sad!
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  • From Menow on January 19, 2007
    This is a fabulous endeavor. It flows so smoothly, as well. I look forward to seeing more.
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  • From ANON - eepmonster on January 03, 2007
    You are excellent at making characters believable. Your stories always feel so grounded and real. You are a wonderful writer, so please continue when you have the time. Thanks so much! *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Hey! on December 26, 2006
    How sad. I though at the first chapter, thet Itachi and Kakashi had a hidden relationship, because Itachi kept slapping him. Hihi
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  • From ANON - d on December 26, 2006
    I like your writing. It's beautiful. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - mari on December 26, 2006
    so sorry, my review got all screwed up i see. Oh well, screw it then. D: I can still explain the html in an email or something, if it IS html this site need, i dunno. i'm not used to this site. x.x *noob*

    eh. megasob@hotmail.com?
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  • From ANON - mari on December 26, 2006
    i must say i like your writing style a whole lot. it's deep in a way, without making it complicated to understand and it makes it beautiful. gives pretty images i can recognize in real life and relate to and so on. what you write feels very true in a way ne. ^o^ and this story makes me feel oddly satisfied to read considering its sad undertone. it all flows and is a lot of love and keep it up! D: w>;?

    and uhm.. if you still don't know how to make text italic, if it's html you need it's quite simple. ^^

    hi i'm a text in italic :DDD
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  • From ANON - Aleesha on December 17, 2006
    That was a really good story, you kept true to the characters and it really was really good. I mena that. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Ichigo's island on December 15, 2006
    Wow! wow! woW! this is the firts time I review a ficc in months. In fact, it's the firts time since I known adultfanfiction.net that I review a ficc. But this one...I love it! i love your style of writting, its very original and really deep.

    I love whenever you write Sasuke POV. I love the way you combine his curiosity, his innocence and yet all the knowledge he has for a 9 year old. The last paragraph of the second chapter was so amazing, i loved it! And everypoint of view is so different, it makes you have an idea of everything thats happening.

    I could go on and on about your greatnesss, jajaaja. Hope you keep updating because this story is great.
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  • From ANON - lll on December 15, 2006
    ah, here's my addi °_~ -> limelikelemon@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - lll on December 15, 2006
    What I love about the story is defenitely that so many trying to invade itachi's personal space. What I love even more is that you manage to write sad and funny and cute all at the same time - I was already really impressed after the first chapter and hoped that the story would continue like that, funny thing is, I like it even more now.

    Well, while I'm at it: Meh lovez itachi. Very few stories 'bout him. The ones that do exist are often some murderer's mind excuse, but really, I like your itachi so far. He truly is fourteen/fifeteen. *thumbs up*

    Keep up the good work ^__^
    (and please mail me teh new chapter~)
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  • From ANON - teeta on December 14, 2006
    So, the second chapter's up. It got me into my silent mode. It got me thinking. It's ... I don't know what to call it, but it's definitely a good thing. You let everyone see a little more of Itachi and Kakashi (I like your Kakashi) and I can't wait to see more of all of them. Thank you for the chapter.
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  • From ANON - lll on December 10, 2006
    Beautiful, absolutely and breathtakingly pretty and hurt. It's been long since I've read a story so carefully thought and written, I can only hope time allows you tow write further 8)
    Your alternative universe is quite like the ones I like to put them in, somehow only the added details and time more that mine lack ... or I could just say I utterly love the story >u< yay 4 itachicentric!
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  • From teeta on December 09, 2006
    A very intersting beginning. You really got me thinking what happened to Itachi (though you already stated it was a rape, most probably). I like the fact that you want to show Itachi as a human being and not a villain who selfishly kills his family. What's more, Itachi was not my favorite character in "Naruto" saga but you already made me like him. And guess what ... my birthday is on 17th Dec.
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