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Reviews for We Intertwined

By : AubreyWitch
  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2007
    I love this :) It's a new (for me) take on my favorite pairing in Naruto, and I love the way it works. For some reason, it seems natural - Sasuke being a little withdrawn, yet sort of silently agressive and encouraging in his own way, and Sakura is the pushiest one - because she is already sure about Sasuke and she does know how much Naruto crushes on her. I love the way she's so confident in her sexuality too. :) And Naruto being eager yet extremely nervous, because I do believe he would be. He would be utterly afraid to lose not just one of them but both of them at the same time. It's like a dream come true yet scaryscaryscary, because he must feel like he's walking on thin ice. And you showed it perfectly. It feels so *right*. The little funny moments here and there are adorable. *__*
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2007
    you are, like, the BEST threesome writer ever. i jes hope you know that.
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on May 31, 2007
    that last line was hilarious...i hope this is not the end....great work on this i really do hope it continues
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  • From ANON - Reba on May 30, 2007
    exellently writen! Nice job keeping every one in character. I accually liked Sakura and this coming from a Sakura basher. Keep up the amazingness.
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  • From ANON - hey-nonny-nonny on May 30, 2007
    OMG!! You must continue; i love the way that you're explaining Naruto's state of mind, and the smut is great!
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  • From ANON - kyu000 on May 30, 2007
    this is so hot! please keep it going and update soon! im a huge sasunaru fan but the way you threw sakura in there was 'kay. most people who write a sasu/naru/saku fic make naruto completly crazy over sakura and that ends up ruining it for us sasunaru fans! thanks for keeping naruto's 'curiosity' going for both of them =) (makes 3 or 4 different 'fan clubs' all happy, ya' know?) i can't wait till you update again ill be looking out for this fic! ja ne!
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  • From ANON - mary on May 29, 2007
    OH NO YOU DID NOT!!! you left a horny cliffy!!!! NOT FAIR!!!! please finish with this!!! *massive nosebleed central*
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2007
    I like it a lot, though I usually prefer longer stories with lots of plot involved. :D
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  • From ANON - Sutashii on February 25, 2007
    Damned Im not usually one for Sakura/Sasuke/Naruto fics this would be my first but I think im definitely going to be reading more of these if there like this one! Wonderful job
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  • From nekochannya on February 04, 2007
    I want more... please?? this was so well written... I loved the halfhearted protests... and the forcefully tender way they made him theirs... continue? I wanna know if it was only a one time thing or if it continued...ne?
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on January 24, 2007
    I loved, loved, loved this story. I loved how Naruto whimpered, and whined, and how he was the most nervous of the three. I loved the way Sasuke kissed Naruto with passion, and how Sakura rode on top of Naruto. I love how Sakura and Sasuke were both a little dominant over Naruto. There's so many nuances to this fic that tickle me in just the right way.
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  • From on January 20, 2007
    *poke, poke* You could continue this if you wanted. ^_^
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  • From ANON - beccapattytwo on January 20, 2007
    amazinggg ! I absolutely love team 7 threesomes.. my all time fav pairing! hehe hope u make some more id love to read em hehe keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - meadowspeak on January 19, 2007
    Wonderful pwp. i love team 7 so i think thats why, but still it was a great story. write more?
    meadow
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  • From ANON - elict on January 19, 2007
    You've made me want to draw Team 7 aftermath art. And it's one in the morning, so I can't. Damn you!

    Very sweet. I liked how awkward and doubtful (kind of ^^'';) Naruto was. It feels like a healthy reaction to suddenly having you teammates gang up on you like that.


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