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Reviews for Dealing with Love (Complete)

By : Midnightstorm
  • From on January 27, 2007
    Nani?!? All that over bunny?? I don't understand! What is going on? Who is the one who is obsessing over Naruto and 'took care' of Kyuubi? How is Sasuke going to react? Why does Sasuke decide to say bunny?--What was he remembering from his family life?--or is that utterly insignificant? What's he gonna do? Is he going to run after Naruto, leading to an all-out fist fight (followedbyhotsteamyboysexrawr)? *ahem* Anywho, great chappie. Naruto is very erratic, but I can see it going somewhere so I'll wait and see what you do next. Very possibly could be my new favorite story by you (though the Guardian is still right up there)
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  • From Natha on January 21, 2007
    Uhhh, amazingly enough I remembered my password to log in so I can provide you with a review :-)

    The setting is interesting and refreshing. The momentary lack of smut good - after all Naruto said that Sasuke don't have to do things he doen't want to (though I hope he wants to do some things in the near future :D). Though a little something is missing. I cannot exactly put my finger on it but sometimes the "reading flow" seems to be interrupted. For instance the scence in the plane when Naruto "introduced" his family. Even if Naruto is loudmouthed and... just Naruto I don't think he would present Tsunade and Jiraiya this way.

    On a little side note: You don't have many spelling or grammatical mistakes in you story but the following one gave me trouble:
    "[...] My company is a big software company…we design games too, so all you have to do is think of fun games and leave it to the rest to design it. We’ve all ready taken you on. So know one will know the difference.”[...]"
    I don't know what the sentence before the last actually means and in the last it should be "noone", or? It took me 5 minutes to decipher that (actually till I read it out loud :-)... I'm not ever the brightest crayon in the box ;-)).

    Anyway, I like the story so far
    Nathaniel

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  • From Kaishiou on January 21, 2007
    this is very interesting. would like to read the next chapter soon! ^^
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  • From obsidianazul on January 19, 2007
    Good story. Fairly well written and very interesting. Good flow and plot is excellent.
    I am soooo glad there is no smut yet. Mostly that stuff comes way too fast int he stories - call me old fashioned.
    Can't wait to see what you get up to next.
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  • From on January 18, 2007
    I like this story it sounds very promising!
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  • From UzumakiLover on January 18, 2007
    A very splendid idea dear, your creativity never ceases to amaze me in the least. I like where this is going! I look forward to the continuing of it. On other matters, I want to say how sorry I am for the delay in the fic we planned together. I would most certainly like to continue it if you are still interested. Sadly this New Year as only brought pain and heartache to my family, and it would be a refreshing step in the right direction to have something to take my mind off of it. You have my e-mail address feel free to reply anytime, and I will do all I can to update in a timely manner.
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  • From MsKeller on January 18, 2007
    Yeah! I love this story. So far it's been written wonderfully and you've set up some great tension both in regards to Naruto's path and between him and Sasuke. I like how Sasuke's not all 'grr, revenge' I can't wait to see what happens after the kiss! Keep up the great work!
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  • From pooh on January 18, 2007
    how can you stop at that point ._.''
    update soooon pretty please!!

    oh, and i dont care if they are ooc...i should just match within the plot!
    the thing with kyuubi sounds interesting quite interesting.
    i'm really curious :3
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  • From roely on January 18, 2007
    so kyuubi was his girl ! so did she get kill? i hope sasuke falls hard for naruto for a change
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  • From Allys on January 18, 2007
    This is awesome, movie like even. I love that Kyuubi, was his fiance, that's a new twist, and actually after I heard about her I stopped worrying about why Naruto hadn't gotten close to anybody recently, the love of your life dying on you is definitely enough. I love this story, and how it's developing, I especially love how you made the characters, it'll be a nice little reverse to see Sasuke work to get through Naruto's barriers. Oh and I CAN'T WAIT to see how Naruto reacts to that kiss!!!! Update SOOON... PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 18, 2007
    w00t!! another chapter of another awesome story. and who cares if they're ooc? it gives the story a fresh new spin! i can't wait to delve into naruto's past!! update soon!
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  • From on January 18, 2007
    So Naruto's a near narcoleptic (at least during car rides) and has crazy mood swings. Sasuke is oblivious to some things in the world, and other things he know's more than his fair share.

    The details thus far are fantastic. I feel like I'm getting bits here and there, and you're not giving everything away at once! Which is cool. I liked Sasuke catching Tsunade's punch, and that panic mode=kissing is nice...very nice XD

    I think you are perfectly justified and slipping in some details before developing the story further. It's important for character development. A lot of things are still mysterious, like his dad, Otogakure, and now his fiancee and her death! *gasp*

    How will Naruto react to the kiss? How will Sasuke react to the kiss? How will Tsunade react to the kiss? Will Naruto concede to sharing a bed with Sasuke? Will Sasuke feel up Naruto while he's sleeping *rawr*?

    Are Jiraiya brother and sister or brother-in-law and sister-in-law?

    Keep updating this one! It's the best since the Guardian!! (hmm...which also needs in update).
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  • From poppyseed on January 16, 2007
    Hey, I think this story has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see where you take this. I'll keep my eye for an update, so update!
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  • From conquerorsstar on January 15, 2007
    oooh sasuke on aphrodesiac ^_^ this sounds interesting. cant wait for next chapter
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  • From ANON - Allys on January 15, 2007
    What? Stop??!! DON"T YOU DARE!!! Please Please PLEASE, you HAVE to continue, I LOVE this. Yes it is a little different, but it's definitely eye grabbing. This was the first time I ever wanted to thank Orichimaru - WOW, talk about HOTT, Boiling! I love it, please Update Soon.
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