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Reviews for Dealing with Love (Complete)

By : Midnightstorm
  • From on February 20, 2007
    AHHHH Cliffy!!!!

    Wow I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!
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  • From sh0rtstr4w on February 19, 2007
    Arg! Cliffies! Anyways, I like the story all though at times Arashi really creeps me out (but I guess that is what you are trying to accomplish). I hope you get a surge of motivation and plow through the remaining chapters, but I understand what it is like to just not want to do the work. Love the story. Ja!
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  • From girlhero on February 19, 2007
    Cool story! Update soon! ;)
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  • From ANON - animehead on February 19, 2007
    It must be a day for cliffies! I'm glad yo uupdated! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. So suspenseful! You just got to love Naruto and Sasuke...I am loving this story so much!
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  • From celticfx on February 18, 2007
    Wow, there are so many questions I can't wait to see answered! Why is Arashi so obsessed with Naruto? Why does Naruto hate his father? I'm guessing he was probably responsible for Kyuubi's death (his threat to Sasuke lead me to that conclusion). But most importantly..is Sasuke okay!?

    I also love how you've developed Sasuke and Naruto's relationship into something believable. They have the right amount of chemistry for a new relationship and I love the subtle moments where they find themselves growing more and more attracted to each other. You've done a wonderful job keeping them in character and I can't wait to see their relationship bloom! (:
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 18, 2007
    jesus, you can't leave it at that!!!! oh, this chapter was so charming, and cute, and sweet (loved the plushie part... so fav), and then that cliffie!! no! i'd never thought i'd say this but damn arashi!! omg, update soon, because i reeeeeeeaaaaaly want to know what happens!!
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  • From barara on February 18, 2007
    i dunno why, but the thought of Arashi and Naruto is kinda.. hot ._.; SO I WANNA SEE SOME OF THAT!^^;
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  • From sasunaru89 on February 08, 2007
    SasuNaru 4ever!!!!! Guys look at Naruto does he really seems seme material!!!! He's way too adorable to be seme while Sasuke is way more macho!!!!!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 06, 2007
    their family is so screwed up! and what makes it even more screwed is arashi going after naruto. but i still love this story. you make things so interesting!! i look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - animehead on February 06, 2007
    All in all, I think it was a good chapter. I am also happy that you decided to let both Naruto and Sasuke have their turns at topping. I can't wait to see what you have stored in the future for this story. You are awesome!
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  • From Menow on February 03, 2007
    This is good, but take this out: (Lemon has almost ended. Last line must be read.)
    It disrupts the flow, and right at the end of it. Trust in your readers to get that last line, and if they miss it, then it's their own fault for being hasty.
    Sorry, but Author's notes in the middle of a story are a big pet peeve for me because of the flow dispution it causes. Think of it like this; you're all comfortable in your special little place with your nice smutty little daydream and then RING, RING, the damn phone jolts you right out of it. Then, whether you answer the phone or not, it takes you a minute to really get back into your daydream, if you can at all. Author's notes in the middle of a story are just like that damn phone.
    That's why I turn my ringer off :)
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  • From roely on February 03, 2007
    great chapter! hot sex scene and it has to be Narusasuke becasue Sasuke is more submissive in ur story than Naruto!
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  • From Allys on February 02, 2007
    Oh and I forget to say, about the NaruSasu/SasuNaru question I vote switch (meaning they should mix it up). By all accounts Sasuke is supposed to be expertly trained so, he should be able to be a great lay on both ends of the spectrum. I'd need more info on character traits and circumstances to make a decision on who would be on top their first time. My advice is go with the flow of the story and let the circumstances of their encounters and how the story develops guide you, it's still too early for me to make a choice.
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  • From Allys on February 02, 2007
    Wow, where to start? Okay the fight - that hurt my heart, and I have to ask after Sasuke hit Naruto the first time, when Naruto hit him back you started to refer to him as the slave again. Did you do that on purpose cause it made the fight so much more painful, it was like you took away his humanity, excellent literary usage if you did it on purpose if you didn't, amazing intuition on your part. Okay next loving the development of the relationship between those two, it's such a great set up having Naruto show Sasuke "how to be in love". Then Yondy - Oh cripes, that shit just sucks, I was so hoping it wasn't gonna be him, but I'm waiting patiently to see why he's nutty, oh and I'm not mad about or flaming, I just think it sucks, but hey sometimes life sucks. Poor kakashi that is totally not a cool situation and definitely poor Naruto. Does Naruto know that his dad was behind Kyuubi's death is that why he doesn't like him? I don't hink that's it cause I think he would be even more opposed to him than he is now if he did know, so then is it that he knows about his dad's creepy obsession with him?? That's still all eeewy in my mind and I have to say from now a great bIG THANK YOU that you are NOT putting any AraNaru in there, him calling out Naruto's name at the end there was icky enough. Still love this story and I think you're a fabulous writer, keep up the good work.
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  • From on February 02, 2007
    I LOVE it!! Poor insane Arashi...

    Yay KakaIruka!!!

    Well thinking logically... I'd have to say NaruSasu. Naruto should be seme... At least for the first time.
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