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Reviews for Dealing with Love (Complete)

By : Midnightstorm
  • From TakiTenshi on April 11, 2007
    Those who read and don't review must be burned! Yes! They must all perish!! *manical laughter*

    Yes...anyway...umm...yeah...ignore the above. I just wanted to say...again, that I just love that twist you pulled with Arashi liking Naruto in a non-fatherly way. It's real new, refreshing, all-in-all a FANTASTIC idea!! And I love you for it!!

    But, he is a bit on the psychotic side, isn't he? No matter, that makes him all the moe appealing, hahaha...what am I saying? *glances at can of gatorade and reads ingredients then tosses it over shoulder* I swear that thing isn't healthy for me...enough!

    Here's your review...and all the things a writer wants to hear:

    You are awesome in your writing skill, it's awesomeness-ness never ceases to amaze me!! No, really. I really like this story and I hope you update soon nevermind the people who are reading and not reviewing, they are just lazy, yeah? If you're still getting lots of hits then it means people like your story and are continuing to read it even though they're too lazy to review!

    CHA!

    So just gon'head and keep bringing us more chaos and insane madness-ness...(courtesy of Arashi). And - oh dear! I really do hope you haven't killed Sasuke off. Or he shows up but has forgotten all about Naruto and what he is and...all that stuff. That will break poor Naru-chan's heart.

    Ja, update soon...for me? *big chibi puppy dog eyes*



    Ki`Tara
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  • From hikageame on April 10, 2007
    This story is pretty good it seems to focus more on the plot than the lemon, which can be good or bad thing depending on the story.I think if you kill Sasuke the interest in your story will go way down. You have good writing skills and I love your plot line. I really don't think you'll kill Sasuke as it would kinda ruin the entire story. But if you do it was still good. Try to keep writing!
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  • From ANON - animehead on April 10, 2007
    I think you have a good story going here. Don't let the number of reviews (which isn't bad by the way) discourage you. Some people just don't know what to say I suppose. I know I have that problem a lot, although I do try to at least say something in a review. I think this story is interesting. It weird to see the fourth as a bad guy, but I like it. It's different. I hope you inspiration picks back up. I do want to see what happens next in this story.

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  • From sh0rtstr4w on April 10, 2007
    Sorry I don't review as often as I should. But I really do love your fic. A LOT.
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  • From dragonite2388 on April 10, 2007
    this chapter's great... hope you'll update soon... (^^,
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  • From on April 10, 2007
    This story is amazing! PLEASE don't stop writing! You would make me depressed for like a month. At least! I worship you!
    This chapter was fantastic! I'm dying to know what happens next, so please update as soon as you can!
    xoxo,
    Yukino
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  • From Trollmia on April 10, 2007
    I've enjoyed this story from the start. And I'm still enjoying it. It belongs to one of those I jump in joy when I see an update :)

    A few pointers of the two last chapters though:
    “I’m hurt...I came here to see you…got Uzumaki’s number from Orochimaru…they told me you were hear and gave me your number…Naruto-san left it at the reception. I need you here, Sasuke-kun, I came to ask for cash, but I need to get to a hospital fast.” Is one of the small things I reacted on (my guess is it should be "where you were".) ... small errors that can catch your attention. A tip - if you have the possibility to do so - print out the chapter, read it over (mark things you see is misspelled)... And then change them. I will not go into English grammar because that is something I probably suck at anyway... but small misspellings... that I can see sometimes (I know I have them too even if I read the same chapter over and over again...)

    Still - this is one of the most "bestest" stories I've read in my life. So don't let the "misspelling"-note above take down your writing-sprit.

    Until next time....
    Live long and prosper as Mr. Spock would say.
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  • From emp78 on April 10, 2007
    More please! Need to know if Sasuke is going to be rescued, and Naruto's reaction, if he finds out, to his father.
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  • From narutovixen383 on April 10, 2007
    This story is actually one of my favorites to read and I would probably go crazy even more (not just from leaving me hanging on your last chapter) but if you didn't continue the story. You have a nice style of writing and it really drew me in to enjoy the story you depict of both Naruto and Sasuke. I mean, this is what you wanted to deliver and you definitely made a lot of people stuck on it! Smile and keep up the good work!
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  • From Onyxwillo on April 10, 2007
    "Don't Leave Me Hanging" is a very good chapter and it's title describes how I feel right now. Don't fail any of your classes but come out with the next one soon! ^_^ The story is really well done. Keep it up!
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  • From LycheeTea on April 10, 2007
    OMG you can't leave us hanging like that!! Please update soon! I realy want to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2007
    I hope Sai can help Sasuke. Now that Naruto knows that Sasuke love him, what will he do? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From puccachu on April 07, 2007
    i love your characters personalities~
    so cute
    i dun actually care about sai but in your story~
    his so much better~
    i wish there were more parts where naruto confuses sasuke even more~
    cuz vunerable sasuke is so hard to come by these days lol
    like it, love it~!
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  • From LycheeTea on April 05, 2007
    Great chapter, but gosh Sasuke is falling but Naruto is like a rock that won't budge past Kyuubi, I know she's dead but I still don't like her.
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on April 04, 2007
    i am a new reader. and i am liking it so for so heep it up. please update soon.
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