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Reviews for Chicken Ramen

By : SilverPhantom
  • From tasukigirl on May 22, 2007
    This is cute. I think it's funny though that you keep writing about chicken ramen. I don't know anyone who likes it XD Pork is generally the standard, unless you're eating something instant. The town next to mine is famous for chicken ramen, but everyone says it tastes bad. >
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  • From ALD on May 01, 2007
    I thought chapter 4 was the last, glad I was wrong. This chapter was very warm and fluffy; I loved the dream sequence. Hope more chapters "come to you".
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 01, 2007
    I loved this. All bubblegum and ice-cream made even sweeter by the bitterness of sadness.
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  • From ALD on April 27, 2007
    Such a sweet chapter, and a happy ending. I'd like to see the first chapter of your new story. Will it be AU w/this pairing, or will deal w/another couple? Overall, very nice story. Post another when you get a chance.
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  • From ffpandayaoi on March 06, 2007
    Very good three chapters, very enjoyable, and a nice followup to the mission fic. I have only one complaint. Your use of the word "thing". A THING of rice. A THING of ramen (I think...). It makes it seem like you were in a rush to put out the chapter and couldn't be bothered with remembering the proper word. It breaks the flow of the story. BUT, that is my one and ONLY issue - your story is quite wonderful!!!
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  • From ALD on March 05, 2007
    Cute chapter, now I'm hungry for ramen. Can't wait for the more "intense" scenes.
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  • From llyoung on March 05, 2007
    These stories are so sweet. I love them.
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  • From ffpandayaoi on February 27, 2007
    I LOVE this! Your story, Escort Duty, was such a well crafted tale, and this one is adorable so far! Please continue!!
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  • From Onawa on February 07, 2007
    Such a sweet set of stories! Relatively light, well written and nice to read. Looking forward to future snippets.
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  • From ALD on January 24, 2007
    This was cute. Being from the south, when I went to school in the north, I so had to learn that walk you're talking about. I liked it, can't wait 'til the next one. ;)
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  • From ANON - Reily on January 24, 2007
    The idea of Kakashi flailing on the ice is extremely funny especially since you would think he would be more graceful than a ten year old. I've really enjoyed the stories so far so I'm glad you're going to continue with them! Sorry to hear about the ditch that must have been extremely nerve-racking hope your okay.
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  • From ANON - Reily on January 12, 2007
    It's nice to see you writing these two again I really enjoyed Escort Duty and this was a fun little read. I think a series of oneshots would be a great way to show how their relationship has developed, yes that was definitely a hint for more!
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  • From ANON - ALD on January 12, 2007
    I really liked Escort Duty, and this was good too. :)
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  • From ANON - llyoung on January 12, 2007
    These two are my favorite pairing. Your story was very cute and sweet. Hope you write more stories soon.
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