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By : nayru
  • From ALD on February 24, 2007
    Finally some answers as to why Iruka's so hesitant. I wonder, even though the audience knows, if Kakashi figured out who it was who hurt Iruka. Hopefully, whatever you have planned next chapter doesn't do too much damage to our lovely couple. Nice chapter, update soon.
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  • From Hestia on February 24, 2007
    Dammit--why'd you go and say the next chapter was going to be a downer? I was feeling happy and full of hope for the lovely couple.
    Oh well--love the internal dialogue with Kaka. If you are going to split our couple for a while, maybe you can have Pakkun come talk to Iruka?
    I never get tired of Kaka and Iruka . . .
    Thanks for the new chaper!
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  • From GoldenSensei on February 23, 2007
    Awww, adorable! I was wondering who messed Iruka up at first, now I know! This story is so freakin' cute it makes me wanna squeal!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 23, 2007
    it was Mizuki!! but what is kakashi going to do? let's see, the chuunin exams are coming up... is it that he's going to abandon naruto in order to train sasuke? oh well, i'll just look forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ffpandayaoi on February 23, 2007
    VERY funny! Gai is amazing hilarious!!!!!

    Exam time - poor Iruka. I'm looking forward to seeing how you deal with it!
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  • From ALD on February 18, 2007
    What I wanna know is, where I can get an Iruka-pillow? Great chapter, the pace of the lemon was good, not to much-just enought to keep it HOT. If the extra time means we get delicious chapters like this one, then by all means take your time. The hesitancy on Iruka's part intrigues me. Hopefully we get to learn what happened in his past to make him so insecure, or am I reading too much into it and he's just really shy? Either way, can't wait for the next update.
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  • From Hestia on February 18, 2007
    Everything worked--excellent, worth waiting for, even better after all the build up!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 18, 2007
    i think it was perfect. this was just so sweet. i mean, iruka's shyness and kakashi's halting confession... *sigh* i really enjoy the pace of this piece, and just all the fluff you manage to get in there. great job. i look forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on February 18, 2007
    Heee!

    This story is so much fun to read. Cute, sweet, fun, yummy!

    I love this part:
    “I’m… I’m manly.”
    Kakashi grinned. “Somebody very cute told me showering helps against that.”

    And I would definitely eat chocolate fish with onions, if Iruka cooked it for me. Yum!
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  • From flameofthenight on February 18, 2007
    While the chapter was good and very enjoyable, I couldn't help but feel that it was just a teeny bit too sweet. Mainly an overdose in the "my Iruka"'s. I like them, but there were just too many. The sex was quite nummy though and the shower scene very well done. You're also very good at incorporating the idea of smell into your story. Most writers ignore that. Kudos for you! :)
    My favorite line was "Iruka-pillow. Best pillow ever."
    I hope this review helps you in your writing. You've got a good thing going and I can't wait to read more. Please keep up with the constant updates.
    ~The Flame Reviews~
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  • From marquesgue1 on February 18, 2007
    You're right it was much 'yummier' as you put it, now let me tell you how I put it 'HELL YEAH! IRUKA AND KAKASHI IN THE SHOWER' heh - can we say nosebleed? Two fine specimen doing things to eachother whilst wet... okay okay *pulls out a tissue for nose* let me stop there before I suffer from severe blood loss, ne? Now on a more SANE note lol, I liked it, just like I liked the previous chp ^_^ it was very good and I hope you update soon ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ALD on February 13, 2007
    Great! One of my favorite chapters by far. There was so much I liked about it,like Kakashi's inner dialogue after someone said something. I loved Genma,he's one of my faves and I wish he would show up in more ficcage. I love when others are interested in Iruka,since he's so loveable,but he chooses Kakashi anyway. Naruto gets on my nerves though,can't wait to see how Iruka makes it up to Kakashi. Update soon! :)
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  • From Hestia on February 13, 2007
    Bad Bad Genma! I hope at one point Iruka puts him in his place which would make Kakashi feel so loved.
    How sweet of Kakashi to give up his date--I love the constant use of the counting down to the date!
    Bakashi--hysterical!!

    Please, more soon! This is so funny, sexy, cute, WAFFy!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 13, 2007
    this was so incredilby cute! it's about time kakashi realized he has to share. and genma is such a perv. ^.^ i look foward to the next update!
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  • From marquesgue1 on February 13, 2007
    That had me laughing so much - lol, poor Iruka - what a situation and Kakashi - I love the 'Bakashi' sensei thing and genma was great hehehe :d. Nice ;) Update when you can, ne?

    Hina xXxx
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