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Reviews for The Right Way

By : nayru
  • From Onawa on March 15, 2007
    OK, now I have to check how often you update. Great story - lots of fun to read - the lemons are hot. looking forward to the rest of the story!!!
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  • From ALD on March 13, 2007
    Oh man, only three more chapters?! :( I love this story, I really hope you'll consider writing another one. I liked this chapter, glad to see some hospital bed cuddling. I haven't gotten this far in the timeline yet, so not sure what parts are actually from Naruto, but I couldn't care less b/c I really like the way you write, it's so smooth. Someone else reviewed that you weave aspects of the series into your story really well and I have to agree w/them. Good job overall and can't wait to see the next chapters.
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  • From crazychemgeek on March 13, 2007
    lol - I love how you blend the events of the series around Kakashi and Iruka's developing relationship. I just can't wait to see what happens to them next. You write them so well.
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  • From Hestia on March 09, 2007
    I love the new chapter, although I don't like that Kakashi might do his job badly. But I love how the nurse thought he was under a jutsu! And he finally said it!!
    So adorable!! Awesome chapter!!
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  • From ALD on March 08, 2007
    Great chapter, really cute. I love how adorable they are w/each other, and soooo glad nothing serious happened to Iruka. I would've loved if Kakashi decided to stay and hold Iruka in the hospital bed, but he's gotta go do the nin thing first. Anyway, hope to see more soon.
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  • From marquesgue1 on March 08, 2007
    “Kakashi and Iruka”, Iruka murmured, “Iruka and Kakashi. And Iruka. And Kakashi.”

    That bit just made me go awwww Iruka's so friggin lovable!!! And poor Kakashi he was worried sick! And I loved how Iruka was asking if they could do 'it' again loool, when he got better. :d Little Iruka is coming out of his shell, ne?

    It was a great chp. ^_^ I'll be on the look out for the next one like always

    Hina xXxx
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  • From KansouAme on March 08, 2007
    Although I have not reviewed this story before, but I have to tell you that it is one of my favorites and everytime you update my heart soars. I too have reread it several times and fall in love with Iruka and Kakashi over and over again with every word. Please keep up this wonderful story and know that you have an avid fan in me! (and many others I am sure!)
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  • From flameofthenight on March 08, 2007
    First off, I just wanted to let you know that you're a terrible person - how DARE you write a story that I have to keep on rereading and how DARE you write a story that makes me laugh. And I just wanted to let you know that I was upset when the last chapter ended. I hope you feel properly ashamed. So THERE!
    ~The Flame Reviews~

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  • From emp78 on March 06, 2007
    ROFLMAO! That kitchen scene was just too funny! Course, the blowjobs weren't bad either.
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  • From Hestia on March 05, 2007
    Oh yeah! an update! Oh, I can actually say something useful for a change--I'll found one should be I'll find one. I think I'm in a proofreading groove--I just found a million in two of my stories, some real horrors. Oh, well, back to the review--I love Pakkun!!! There isn't enough Pakkun stories! OMG--I have to go write a challenge for a Pakkun/Akamaru, but that's an aside. I loved the egg seperation!!! And the baking powder!! And the comment about Sasuke needing to sleep in his own bed! This one was so cute! Is this the last one? I hope there is at least one more chapter!!! Please???
    Thanks!
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  • From ALD on March 05, 2007
    To be totally melodramatic, I've had a bunch of craptacular days recently and have been looking for updates to my fave stories here. Your's didn't disappoint, it was so funny and hot. I really like the way you portray the lemons, they're really good but not over done, I enjoy a good pwp when that's exactly what it is, but for the pace of your story I think they're done just right. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens to our couple with the events that are about to crop up.
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  • From Hen on March 05, 2007
    This series is so sweet and so hot! I loved this last chapter! I have a bad feeling though that the next chapter won't be so happy, considering what happens during the Chunnin exams.
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  • From marquesgue1 on March 05, 2007
    AWWW poor Kakashi - all that effort and he forgot the baking powder? LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL - oh it's okay it's okay, it's the thought that counts and Iruka definitely rewarded him for that heh :D Nice ^_6 keem 'em coming!!!

    ^_^Hina
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  • From Hestia on March 02, 2007
    Oh--I'm so glad you didn't seperate the couple--I wasn't suggesting that, I was just going into doom and gloom--you said something bad would happen, and I immediately assumed a break-up and heartache. I like how you work in the "canon"! I loved the internal dialogue in this chapter. The info on Kakashi thinking he wasn't ready to be a chuunin was interesting--did you mean jounin, since his eye was his jounin gift and the whole disaster that lost him his best friend was his first jouin mission? But of course he could also have not been ready for chuunin either! Oh, no, now I'm panicking that I have misremembered the whole Kakashi Gaiden thing--was it chuunin? Oh, well, that's what wikipedia is for, but I'm off topic now . . .

    I'm glad Pakkun will resurface--I have a feeling he can get spill the beans on how truly crazy Kakashi is for Iruka. Gosh, I sort of forget the details and would have to reread the early chapters, but wasn't there some lie about Pakkun and cooking to get Iruka to come over or stay over--is that going to damn poor Kakashi--or reveal how desperate and inept he is at dating?

    I'm really enjoying this; Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From ALD on February 27, 2007
    Glad that they didn't fight for too long. Are we going to see anymore angst in the future though? Good chapter, can't wait for Pakkun.
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