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Reviews for Trigger

By : Abyssmyancestor
  • From ultistarmon on January 09, 2008
    Holy sshhhiiiit! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I like how you keep changing the POV from person to person! I always thought that the rookie 9 and Gai's team should revolt or something like that! What happened to the Godaime and where the hell is Konohamaru? You better have not killed him off! Pretty please update soon!
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  • From Dreamfool on September 13, 2007
    This is so beautiful. Will it ever be continued.
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  • From ktaztrofee on February 15, 2007
    hi there
    just wanted to tell what a fantastic fic this is. I first read it on TONFA thinking "WOW...that is just really cool!!" I've never really seen a storyline like this so it's really refreshing to actually see a story that has truly got something very worthwhile and captivating. I truly hope you continue this fic because it really is very very good. Sasuke's evilish/possessive character rocks!! Better than many others I have see lol ^-^!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on February 04, 2007
    Great story! So sad though that Iruka died. I can't wait to find out what things Naruto has had to endure because of the new hokage.
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  • From ANON - Yami on January 13, 2007
    TT_TT Poor Kakashi~
    He's lost just as many important people in his life as Naruto.....
    Don't worry Kaka-san! It'll get better

    O_O Oh, and i'm loving the story so far, excellent writing, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Damp on January 12, 2007
    Abyssmyancestor, my eyes were so WATERY!!! That's like the frst time any other story apart from this other story called "Living a Lie" BY:Dhampir (EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS STORY!!!If you've read it already...THEN READ IT AGAIN!!) You didn't make me cry...but that's the first time since that story (living a lie) that any other story made me come CLOSE...CRAP YOU MADE ME START CRYING!! *goes to blow her nose and wipe her tears*
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  • From ANON - dut on January 12, 2007
    Gosh my tears almost fell... Its so sad to lose Iruka.. Very passionate.. I love it..
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  • From ANON - riddle_me_yellow on January 12, 2007
    The SasuNaru bit was BEAUTIFUL! Very well done! I adore how it left so many questions on the extent of the Seme/Uke relationship. I know Naruto Uke but its fun to guess about HOW uke he is gonna be and how loving towards Naruto Sasuke will be. Thats the biggest question for me. i dunno why, im strange. Anyways, great fic! Longer chapters perhapps though? Just cause I wanna read LOTS of this fic hehe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2007
    NNUUUUU! IRUKA! Holy crap! This is the first fic i have read where he dies! Im not really sure what to think...Great chapter though, nicely written. I LOVE the plot, its great! And there is just so many dynamics to the Sasunaru relationship in here that im not to sure what to think of that either. Like, is Naruto gonna be totaly submisive? Is Sasuke gonna be a bastard who only whants Naruto in theory but not for love? Gr, is Naruto gonna allow himself to be pushed around and then when he finaly breaks, is Sasuke gonna not rreaallyy say sorry, and th issue will be dissmissed? GAH! SO MANY WAYS TO GO WITH THIS! I LOVE IT! ITS CCRRAAZZYYY! Geez, im sorry if im rambling. You are doing an amazing job, please please continue! I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on January 12, 2007
    naruto wants sasuke right? so why is he so mad cause of the kiss?
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  • From ANON - dana on January 12, 2007
    still loving your story and since the next chapter is about sakura please tell me she is going to get whored (may all people who are mean to naruto die). no questions just impatient for the update.
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  • From ANON - lo on January 11, 2007
    AWWWW that was sad. Nice job!! This is really tugs at the 'ol heart strings.
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  • From nekochannya on January 11, 2007
    Gods... you are really good... You broke my heart into little pieces.... Iruka dead? Ambushed by the Hokage's men? I want that asshole dead, you hear? Dead! How could he... poor Iruka... poor Kakashi and poor, poor Naruto... Man, you really got me where it hurts and I take off my hat to you... really. Now please... promise me one thing....
    You will kill that bastard in the most painfully way possible... yes, my usually pacific side is screaming for blood, so please... dont be quick when you off him, ne? Pretty please? *bribes with cookies* And yes, keep up the good work. *goes to find tissue paper for her stuffed nose.* Bye!
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  • From nekochannya on January 11, 2007
    I love the way Hinata and Neji turned out... very nice nyan... The atmosphere you created was really effective, dark and mysterious... at least that's what it seemed like...ne? I approve... so please update as soon as you can and you will be having a happy kitten on your hands... *purrs*

    Oh, btw... there are a few problems with the spelling... 'they’re home' when it should be 'their home', 'straitened' for 'straightened' and a lost word... 'My bottom trembled,' I think there should go 'My bottom lip trembled' right? Um, the rest was beautifully rendered... I really like this story... so please dont be offended by my words, ne?
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  • From ANON - animehead on January 11, 2007
    Things for the warning, it was so sad. I almost cried...okay...i did cry...so sad. Poor Iruka, poor Kakashi, poor Naruto. It's still a good story. I look forward to your next update.
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