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Reviews for Fragile Little Blossom

By : emeraldfire84
  • From KrickItat on February 23, 2007
    i honestly dont remember if i have reviewed this before


    so anyways i do like this one and stories like this one arent so uncommon it is just uncommonly well written XD


    anyways very enjoyable and i cant wait for your eventual updates on your other stuff
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  • From ANON - Mina on February 11, 2007
    I think you shouuld continue this story. I know it's a little twisted but I would like to see were you could go with this story. I think your writing style really works for the story you begun and I want to see the new Ideas you come up with.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on February 04, 2007
    I love Naruto.
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  • From Laurachan on February 03, 2007
    I liked it: it was hot, twisted and dark... even if I am a Sasuke/Sakura fan, I didn't mind Orochimaru's presence here (I must admit I don't like him very much).
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on January 13, 2007
    well i haven't seen this trio together and like always great job with this fic you are truly on of my favorite authors on this site i look forward to seeing more of your work
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  • From ANON - Ayare on January 13, 2007
    That has to be the most disturbing thing you have ever posted. I mean, "Let Me In" had its moments, but this...
    it was so disturbing it was a turnoff and a turnon! Good writing! I applaud your unflinching approach to such an uncofortable topic. Spit out more of this stuff soon!
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  • From ANON - ochiba on January 11, 2007
    I'm actually glad you're not continuing it, because it's flawless as a hentai one-shot and making a longer story might take away from this fact. I like the way Sasuke took advantage of Sakura's weakness for him... what a bastard! I also like the fact that he was quite frank about how he'd kill her if he didn't have plans to use her. When it comes to smutworks I prefer yaoi to hentai, but this was too fun to pass up! It was like watching a hentai OVA *laughs* classic ending! I can see the credits cue right after the close up of the cursed seal!

    One crit though... your lemons--albeit wonderfully perverlicious--are a bit repetitive. I read your Party of Three and it kinda felt like all you had to do was substitute Naruto for Orochimaru to get the same story. I like this fic better because it's a one shot.
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  • From ANON - me on January 11, 2007
    oh my oh me...he...you, i..it..oh dearie...definately different from your usual. But ya kno, i think it just proves that you hav the ability to write any genre you please, now thats talent. It was beautifully written, very angsty-ish? But im not gonna lie...i almost died choking on my spit everytime i read orochi-chans name...ew...yucky...however, you still managed to turn me on, no matter how repulsive that man is...i bet you had an effin field day writing about that tongue of his, shit, i would...ya kno, if i had yur talent. You chose an extremely difficult character to write and did a spectacular job writing it. None of the characters seemed ooc and you really put everything in the mood. Congratulations, it was a success, yu kno i love the male domination thing, its the smex...just, orochi-chan isnt the most appealing character to me, that is all. But yu write about whoever your little heart desires, cough cough, sasuke, cough...lol, update POT (haha, Party of three....haha)

    PS: You should think about writing some more oneshots, you cant test out the chemistry between the characters and maybe try different ideas or genres, good luck
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2007
    YOU HAVE TO DO MORE CHAPATERS FOR THIS BUT AS LONG AS YOU DON'T FORGET THE OTHERS AS WELL.
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  • From ANON - marsgoddess on January 11, 2007
    I thought it was great. Don't tell me this is a one shot. It was really good, and HOTTTTTTT!!!!
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  • From ANON - MizzNewbooty on January 11, 2007
    Wow, pretty F-U-C-Ked. Thank God its only an anime
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  • From ANON - akane on January 10, 2007
    truly, you are a very good writer. Regardless of the situation you write about, it is very well rendered. I will be anxiously waiting your nest story!
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  • From ANON - raefire on January 10, 2007
    I am speechless, that was intense!! That was one messed up pairing, You're my new hero!!!!
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  • From ANON - Penny on January 10, 2007
    That... was hot. Even if there was Orochimaru in there... Not many Sakura and him togethor makes it seem unordinary... but yet hot :D Friggen awsome!
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  • From ANON - Moo Moo cow on January 10, 2007
    O_O wow.... I never looked at something so intense yet so good... I swear I was on the edge of my chair... BRILLIANT any pairing with Sakura made by u is BRILLIANT! LUVED IT!
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