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Reviews for Ame (Rain)

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    Aww, that’s cute: “my beautiful, strong brother.” That’s adoration for you. :heart: (My hearts aren’t working well. T_T) . . . . Heh. Sasuke’s a little uncertain this time, I take it. . . . Man, he’s full of adoration, isn’t he? . . . . Sasuke’s so cute. Since it’s from his POV, it gives a feel of love and vulnerability. And Itachi takes full advantage of that. . . . Aww, “scary new Sharingan.” It is scary. (Though Sasuke doesn’t yet know how scary.) . . . . Nice effect: “flashes of lightning revealing his expression to me.” Eerie. (You spelled “lightning” as “lightening” by the way.) . . . . Man. Darkly erotic. . . . And Sasuke knows it’s “twisted love”. . . . Aww, that’s melancholy, how he’s gone in the morning. And it’s even sadder when we (the readers) remember what happens the next night. It was the last time there was love between them.

    That was pretty good for your first Uchihacest fic. =) :heart:
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  • From Rosebud on October 08, 2007
    Wow... that was awesome! Really that's all I can say... (Speechless)
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  • From sienta on June 02, 2007
    That was so good! The Uchiha brothers are so dirty and slutty with each other LOL
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 25, 2007
    There's something about this fic that keeps me coming back to read it, over and over. I just read the reviews, and I realized I never posted one! I thought I did, the first time I read it. Sorry... -_- I feel bad now. So - here's the review!

    Gorgeous. I love the storm outside, such a dramatic setting for the last tender moment between the young Uchiha brothers. And heartbreaking to think that what Itachi tells Sasuke the next day is the truth - that he was always just acting the part of the brother Sasuke wanted him to be. (I don't believe that, anyway, but--) Sasuke's desperate devotion to his older brother is so sweet, he's trying so hard to make him happy... And, God, but I can't help it, it's so freaking HOT. Ah, my weakness for young-Uchihacest, my need for it is so utterly slaked by this perfect little fic. I love it when Itachi loses his cool and it's believable. And that line he says when he's coming... I think I saw spots in front of my eyes the first time I read it. Love. This. Freaking. Story.

    I will be reading it again, and again, and again, I'm sure. Yeah, you should totally write more Ita/Sasu.
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  • From ANON - ms.yuki on March 13, 2007
    Aww, I love this paring a lot too. I thought you did a really good job.
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  • From danixx on March 12, 2007
    That was... beautiful. *tear*

    Geez, I don't know what it is about those two, but those brothers drive me crazy. You did a wonderful job. (: I hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - oztan on February 04, 2007
    I like this. I hope there chapter two in this.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on January 12, 2007
    Wow, that was great!! O_O I hope you'll write more uchihacest. x3 I love it! =D Very few, if any, errors.. ^^

    ~Jamie
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  • From Carola on January 11, 2007
    Though I usually prefer Uchihacest-fics where Sasuke is a teen, I loved this one!
    It was so well written, from the general flow of the language, to the lemon itself. And of course the way you described their relationship.
    And of course, Itachi was dead sexy *giggle*
    Keep writing! ^___^

    Best wishes, Carola ^.^
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  • From ANON - Yumi-Yume on January 10, 2007
    I really enjoyed this piece. It was sweet and not to long as for it to drag on forever. The ending suited very well too. Very well written.

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  • From ANON - Sekre on January 10, 2007
    Oh, I loved it :) Hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - chelzi on January 10, 2007
    this was very well written and i was very pleased with the plot. the lemon was pretty good, and i liked how you showed their relationship. i think it was quite in-character for them, so congrats on that. a lot of people can't do that very well.~
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on January 09, 2007
    W-Woa... *flush* T-That was some hot Uchihacest *pink pink* WOOT! How sexily dominting was Itachi! And Sasuke was so adorable XD!! *dreamy sigh* The whole Otouto and Aniki thing is so flustering *daze daze*

    I love it!!! *love love*

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