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By : nayru
  • From Onawa on March 13, 2007
    Well...Wow...That was spectacular for a "practice" run. I'll be looking for more of your stories!
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  • From NekoIzumi on February 23, 2007
    That was just incredible! And I am sure as hell that the oh so sweet Iruka-sensei is fully capable of hiding such a side from the world. Except from his Kakashi. But... damn that was hot! Hehe... I like the ide of a Kakashi sceaming to be taken. And dont they say that people who are dominant in their everydaylife are submissive in bed? ;) My lord... (or better not him by the way) That was amazing! Love it, just love it.
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  • From Hestia on February 02, 2007
    I don't know if I reviewed this before, but this is really sexy and romantic. I really liked it a lot! Thanks for posting this!
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  • From ANON - alicia on January 10, 2007
    that was so totally hot! *steamy* LOL
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  • From ANON - Reily on January 10, 2007
    This was absolutley delicious, I can't believe that this is your first lemon! I liked that you drew out the scene through the whole story it made it very steamy. I loved the possessivness of both of them it was all just fabulous and I can't wait to see what else you write!
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  • From ANON - ALD on January 10, 2007
    That was soooo hot! I can't believe that was your first lemon. One of the best I've read. Hope to see more stories from you.
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  • From nekochannya on January 09, 2007
    Like? What's to like about a hot, well-written lemon? I don't like it, no way! I LOVE IT! Its great... really arousing and sensual...nyan. Iruka for once dominating Kakashi... I was almost scared... When Kakashi requested he ride him... I was afraid you would let them do it the usual way... like so many others that start promising but then they turn to same old, same old... I love this! I was cheering Iruka on when he finally pushed inside his lover... I love possesive Iruka... >.> possessive ravens or brunnettes... are so hot... nyan!!! ^.^ And the ending! It was truly marvelous!!! I want to write lemons like yours... so raw, enticing and erotic... nyan!!! so... yes... you could say I liked it....
    Did I mention it was hot?
    DId I mention it was great!!
    Oh, by the way... I loved it... nyan!!
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  • From marquesgue1 on January 09, 2007
    Hehehe - what a way to remind your boyfriend that he's yours and your's alone. Nice =D
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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 09, 2007
    Great job for a first lemon! Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Hello on January 09, 2007
    Wow, I like a lot. Iruka a seme. heh.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on January 09, 2007
    Practice!? You don't need practice. A lemon with a story plus a dominant super smexy Iruka - one of the best Kaka/Iru one-shots I've read~! The writing flowed like a stream (except maybe the last few paragraphs?) You ROCK!
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