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By : nayru
  • From ANON - Dark_Kaomi on March 08, 2008
    I just wanted to send you a note telling you how much I love your Iru/Kaka stories. You write beautifully and so expertly. I hope to see more soon.
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  • From KareNeko77 on March 06, 2008
    "Nayru hates narrow-minded people…"
    And the open-minded readers all cheer for Nayru's sharing of uber-KakaIru porn hooray!
    Actually I think my mind detonated somewhere in the middle of chapter 2, so "open" hardly describes it (drools in bliss...)
    Totally wonderful.

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  • From ANON - Anise on March 05, 2008
    (4) That was an absolutely brilliant take on the 'punish me sensei' fantasy, definitely hot enough to melt any and all brain cells! ;)
    I completely agree with you that being seme or uke has absolutely nothing to do with who's actually in control and besides if Kakashi always has to be in control wouldn't that mean that when he's with Iruka that would be the one place he would feel safe enough to let lose, nobody wants to be in control all the time. I know I've said this to you before somewhere but one of my favourite things about your writing is that there really isn't any one position that the guys take, even if they prefered a certain position that doesn't mean that's how it's always got to be :)
    I can't wait to see what the next fantasy is, it would be hard to come up with something really original because everyone does stuff like the Hokages desk or the bath house, if you wanted to do something different it would be Ibiki's desk and the ANBU showers! I can't wait to see what you come up with ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 09, 2007
    Your depiction of these two is really wonderful, you manage to portray them as equals without falling into some of those stereotypes out there, like weepy Iruka. I loved how throughout the stories you kept having the tables turned on Kakashi, he thinks he's going to be the one who gets to have his way with Iruka but then Iruka very neatly takes over and has his way with Kakashi, it was fabulous! So now I wonder if the next chapter is going to be Kakashi's revenge, I bet it would be very hot and steamy but then all of these have been so far and I really look forward to more from you :)
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on December 08, 2007
    Thank you li'l fairy. This is great. A lovely different view of Iruka.
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  • From ANON - Vesca on December 08, 2007
    Ahhhh!! It's great! *hugs your porn* oh, but a jealous minx of an Iruka is just wonderful XDDD
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  • From ANON - anon on August 22, 2007
    aww... That was just too sweet. You write this couple really well! I'm glad. Kakashi is lucky though, huh? No one has approached Iruka yet. I wonder if his reaction would be similar to Iruka's or not.
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  • From ANON - Dragon up a tree on June 26, 2007
    No idea how i missed this AMAZING second chapter! I was salivating a little reading it. Kakashi is very flexible and easily distracted by Iruka. Dominant Iruka is fun...and kinky :D I shudder to think what he might do to Gemna (not that he doesn't deserve it. There's a saying among my friends and I: 'God help the sister that comes between me and my mister!' Although i suppose we'd have to change a few words to make it appropriate here...)

    YAY FOR THE MAKE UP SMEX!!! XD Hot and steamy and...sweaty...and hot...and smexy...i'm salivating again...i'm such a little perv...can't control it anymore really...where was I?
    Anyway, that was great. hope you add another chapter soon. I may have to join just so i can alert this.

    Dragon, aka, Dori-chan
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  • From ANON - Dragon on June 07, 2007
    This is Dori-chan and Well what do ya know, i can review without signing up right away!
    O.O...Possesive, dominant Iruka...bondage...smex...horny Kakashi (wait, that's not new -_-'')...this has got it all!!! NICE. I wonder if Kakashi would ever try to make him jealous on purpose now? Wouldn't recomend it given how inventive he can with his retaliations. I think i will join here...just when i'm at college and my mom won't find out about my account here. her blood pressures high enough! XD
    Wonderful, as always. Hope to read the next story soon! (crosses fingers) Hope hope!

    Dragon, aka Dori-chan
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  • From Glenndolyn on May 27, 2007
    Aww, when will it be Kakashi's turn to be on top?
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  • From Hestia on May 27, 2007
    Oh, excellent! I love the bite, the mark--great touch! I love the bit about the school teacher voice as well! Wonderful Chapter 2!!

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  • From Hestia on May 27, 2007
    I remember reading this a while back and really liking it. I can't wait for Chapter 2!! It's really hot and romantic--the best combo!
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  • From ALD on May 26, 2007
    What a great comeback. That was a great chapter, can't wait until the next one. I liked that you had Iruka hold out as long as he did, made it seem more realistic.
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  • From on May 26, 2007
    I love this story! Both chapters were soooooooo good! I cant wait for the next part.
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  • From saint2sinners on April 23, 2007
    I gotta say. i didn't like it. I loved and devoured it. I love jelous kakashi, it's my fav kakairu aspect, but i hardly ever see jealous iruka dn this was done briliently. the best jelous lruka i've seen.
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