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Reviews for Hidden Beneath

By : darkskysong
  • From emp78 on May 25, 2007
    This story is so different; I like it. Please hurry with your next update!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 14, 2007
    Lines next to his nose? Itachi.

    This is really good. Keep going.
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  • From serenagold on May 14, 2007
    Excellent story! One hell of a cliff hanger though! I can't wait to find out what happens!
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  • From ANON - Beachan18 on April 13, 2007
    SasUKE please~! :P

    Too many Uke!Naruto fics out there~! Uke!Sasuke needs love too~!
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  • From Dragon7 on April 13, 2007
    My Vote. Is for NaruSasu uke Sasuke because their are way too many uke Naruto stories out there.
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  • From Dragon7 on April 13, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON
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  • From Hen on April 12, 2007
    Ooh, good cliffhanger! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From Hen on April 09, 2007
    This is a very well written work. I look forward to reading the rest.
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  • From ANON - mary on April 08, 2007
    please keep going.....its a good story!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on April 08, 2007
    I'm not sure why this story doesn't have more reviews . . . I find your writing style very entertaining, easy to follow, the characters are well done, and you have an intersting plot mission going on. I'm not sure where your going with it right now but the chapters are enjoyable to read. I like your idea of Kakashi and Naruto using henge to travel in the form of a dog and fox and then Naruto using his Sexy Jutsu (couldn't remember how to spell it in Japanese-sorry) to mask his identity in the different villages. So just what do you have in mind? Is Naruto and Sasuke going to meet up? Your last chapter leads me to think so. I seen you have a Sas/Nar and Nar/Sas listed as a pairing . . . so does that mean you intented to have this as a slash story? Not that I mind that at all, I really enjoy slash pairing myself. I'm just asking wondering if the story wouldn't get more reviews on the male/male genes instead of being listed as general. Well thank you for sharing the story, I hope you stay with it and that I'll see more from you soon. Take care and thanks again.

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  • From Dream2010 on March 05, 2007
    I think your writing is good. Sometimes it's a bit difficult to follow. Maybe you can do a chapter summary at the beginning of the chapter.
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  • From anapana83 on February 19, 2007
    This story has defintely caught my attention. I want more! I'm down for some surprises. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Carmen on January 21, 2007
    Hoi! Please update the fastest as u can! btw, if u like the pairings: Ita/Naru and Oro/Naru(as rape) please read my fic! 'Never Willing' is its title! :) I loved the story! I cant wait to see what comes next :P
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  • From ANON - pwnd on January 06, 2007
    well as ive heard from somewhere in here b4, thier are authors who barley put details in there that keep people using there minds to fill in the missing spots, and then there are people who put way to many details in that start to make it a little boring or hard to follow. i like your story but you could use a few less details even though you weren't bad at all infact most of those details were greatly put in but like i said you could go without as many.. anywho plze update soon it was good anyways =D
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  • From ANON - Carmen on January 06, 2007
    Oh! I think it's really interesting! :) i love it! mueheh! plz, update soon ;_; or else im gonna cry until u will!
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