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Reviews for Hidden Beneath

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  • From maggiekebs on January 10, 2009
    Very enjoyable read. Please add me to your update list. maggiekebs@yahoo.com
    Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Damp on January 09, 2009
    The fluff was so fluffy! I was just going 'Aw!owww!!' While reading the scene where Naruto jumped onto Sasuke's back and then almost drowned! And then the image of Sasuke feeding a fox in the way that he did.... Truly fluff. -warm and fuzzy feeling inside- I can't wait for your next installment!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 09, 2009
    this is very cute and i can't wait to see what happens next with sasuke and naruto!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2009
    Cute chapter. Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Kaysha33 on September 17, 2008
    Hello,
    I just stumbled across this story and I couldn't stop reading. :-) It's really great. The idea alone that Naruto finds Sasuke (or the other way around) in fox-transformation is cool!!!
    Poor loudmouth cannot even talk ;-)
    I hope you write chapter 10 soon (writer's block??) Can't wait to find out what happens next.
    The idea of Sasu-kun and Uchiha-sama is great and very plausible. That way Sasuke was able to protect himself from the likes of the Snake-Sannin...
    Please, write more!!! I'd LOVE to read more!!! lol
    Love, Kaysha33
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  • From Dreamfool on June 23, 2008
    It started out slow but was well worth the wait. I love foxy Naruto and I can't wait to see Sasuke's sadistic plan to mess with Naruto, even though it won't really be sadistic.
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  • From ANON - darkelf205 on April 21, 2008
    Wow...I just found you story and I am extremely impressed. I love how you are portraying the characters, revealing new fascinating aspects of their personalities but still keeping them in character. The story is well written and I am really enjoying the read, thanks for writing it! Can you update me when you post another chapter?

    Email - darkelf205@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Ataya on April 19, 2008
    Hello,

    I appreciate your story, Hidden Beneath, more than you know. It is different from other fanfiction out there on the web. The plot is well structured, the characters are nicely rounded and you can actually UNDERSTAND what the story is about. I absolutly love this fic. If you are to continue it, it would be an honour to recieve updates. Feel free to e-mail me anytime. ^^

    ~Ataya~
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on March 28, 2008
    good story so far
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  • From serenagold on March 28, 2008
    Aw.. how cute.

    Its good to see that Kakashi didn't loose track of Naruto during their run. ^^
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  • From ANON - Damp on March 27, 2008
    Oh my gosh! I love how you depict Sasu-kun! Sooo kawaii.

    -Damp *Wow, I learned a lot of new words thanks to reading this ;) *
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  • From Raholea on February 25, 2008
    i've always liked a good, twisting plot, and this one has a nice flow while still not laying everything straight out. hehehe... and i wonder what havoc will be wrecked in the halls of naruto's mind. i am waiting to read more!!! onegai?????
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  • From noit on February 21, 2008
    In this chapter, I find the conversation between the Uchiha(s) and Kyuubi is really interesting.
    I find the innocent little Uchiha to be fun as well. At least this Uchiha is more complex and deep than the usual Sasuke that I usually read.

    I wonder what punishment he'll give the little fox. :)
    Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Oh ya... thanks again for the story.
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  • From serenagold on February 20, 2008
    Hooray! You've finally caught up and passed where you were up to when you originally wrote this story. I admit I was worried last time when it appeared Sasuke was about to discover Naruto's identity... then you up and restarted the story!!!!!


    I must say that after so long a wait, I'm excited again and eager to read what happens next. Sasuke's reactions were great and I love how his inner child personna self encouraged his current self not to harm him. Naruto's personal messy mindscape was a nice touch as well. ^^

    Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next update! Huzzah!
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  • From ANON - vic on February 13, 2008
    really like this story!
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