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By : AkashaEmily

From on February 14, 2007
I love you! I love you! I love that you put all that time into what kind of kittens the three are, that Naruto is, er, bi-confused, that this chapter was so long, that we're starting to get an idea of what's going on with the seal, that YOU'RE GOING TO DEAL WITH ITACHI IN THIS FIC, that someone is going to notice the missing peoples, that the cat people AREN'T Orochimaru (or they sure don't appear to be), and so many other things that make me just go SQQUUUEEEEEEE!!!!

I understand about projects, and I thank you for this chapter, and I wish you amazing speed in your studies (so you can write the next chapter to this fic XD). More people need to read this. Lots more. Your writing is well thought out and gets smoother and smoother the farther you get into the fic. *hugs fic*

I'm gonna admit--I stray towards the yaoi fangirl side of the spectrum when it comes to Naruto, and usually only read the romance fanfics. You have no idea how happy I am that I decided to read this general fic. It gives me courage to move a little further out of my fanfic comfort zone. XD

I will be waiting for the next update.
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From ANON - lonelylulaby on February 13, 2007
this story is the bomb and im very happy that you updated this one even though you are neglecting your other one, so thank you very muches.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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From ANON - jewel on February 12, 2007
great chapter, bummed to hear about the delay but what can you do right. I wasn't sure that I would like this story at first but I'm really getting into it. It's a lot more complex that the summary lets on. keep up the great work.
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From ANON - padoopadoop on February 12, 2007
I LOVE this story. I get really excited whenever a new chapter comes up, and I have started touting it to my friends. I am very glad you take the time you do with the writing - it comes across well, with no major typos or grammatical errors. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Drac on February 12, 2007
WOOT! So glad to see this story has an update. I realy love how you're handling all the characters. Please update again soon!

PS: The breeds make perfect sense. ^^
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From DrkLazarus on February 12, 2007
Holy wow...

This fic has wrapped me up and drawn me in. Wonderfully executed and with a beautiful linguistic style and characterization, this is a story to watch, for certain.

Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter, and I'm off to read the rest of your stuff!

~LZ
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From ANON - Damp on February 07, 2007
(This is going to be on long ass review I can tell.) Yea It's me again here to make your life a living hell ^O^. I have a few suggestions for the names... bakeru in Japanese means:to appear in disguise. Which is what Hinata and/or Neji just so happen to be in...They appeared...but are in DIGUISE!! You could even call Sasuke that...Or did you already name him?? Cuz when i went to look to see if you named him I couldn't find it...hasshou in Japanese means:appearance of auspicious omen. And isn't them appearing there some sort of good fortune?? I mean your making Naruto sick to a point of death right?? So it's a good thing that their there to watch over him...even if they don't want to. Hey, I looked up Neji's name and translated it in english and it means:screw(I was laughing me ass off on this one), helix, spiral. If you need anymore names then just put up a sign saying you want more names. IF YOU WANT...

Now...I need to give a guess at who's the cook with the two cats(You know who I mean). It's Kankuru who's the old man, and the two cats are Gaara and Temari (am I even on the right CONTENENT of this??) And the reason behind those three turning everyone(who are close to Naruto but blind to see his pain) into cats is because you want them to make everyone see that Naruto isn't the happy-go-lucky person he wants everyone to think he is (Am I even in the right CONTENENT in this??) And If you don't want to tell in up right in public then just give me hints...But if I'm wron them tell everyone I'm wrong and that I'm some crazy cooke bent on destroying the world!!!

Yes I know I know...You're getting tired of readin this ridiculus reveiw. But not I'm just going to praise you on you work. You really looked in the characters reaction on this. I'm impressed. Not many would have really looked deeply in Naruto and what HE would have done. Or the fact that you hid him so well. Your discription on this was very well detailed. And i LOVE detail. Keep on writing!! (If you know what's good for you!!! JK!!)
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From ANON - Damp on February 06, 2007
May I suggest something?? I was trying to find this story a few days ago and I was greatly confused with the description. Hence the reason why I couldn't find this story. Could you possibly change the description a bit so that next time I want to find this story i find it in a flash?? Or maybe you could change the title?? No maybe don't change the title...Then ppl will REALLY not know where to look for tihs story.
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From ANON - loneltlylaby on February 04, 2007
i raelly enjoyed the 2 chappies that i hadn't read and can't wait till you update again. i really wanna know what is going to happen to naruto, neji and hinata. will someone come to their rescue and will anyone realize that they are gone.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work. *.*
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From ANON - EbOnY-LyCaN14 on February 03, 2007
Oh man, you gotta update really soon, pleassssssse~~ This chap was one of the greatest. Poor Naruto, he deserves to be treated so much better, he has saved his villiage so many times, they need to stop being asses and smarten up! I hope Hinata and Neji will be ok! Who are these darn cat people stirring up this trouble? I wonder why Hinata did not know Naruto's birthday, I mean, she is so in love with him, I thought she would be the first to give him a gift... Oh, well, kitty names, umm... I am into unique names for pets, not over used names like fluffy and sweety and such. Using star signs and stuff works good, like, Gemini, or Gem, Star or Luna for a girl kitty. Or go Japanese with the names, like Hiroko, meaning generous, or Aiko, meaning little loved one for a girl. Akira- intelligent, or Kiyoshi- the quiet one, for a boy. Sorry, going on and on, but those are just a few names, so please, continue soon, I need to know the fate of Hina and Neji!! Pleaaaassse!??
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From ANON - Nellysan916 on February 03, 2007
Jeez...This is such an amazing story!
As I read it, I would constantly think of how possible it could be. Sure, some things require work but the emotion, the writing, the DETAIL. I was amazed by all of it. The last chapter in particular had be. The scene where Naruto was so alone and all, I was crying the whole time. Thanks for writing the amazing work. I reallllly hope to read more of it
Email me if possible! Thanks!
Soyanaro
-Nellysan
bahamut916@hotmail.com
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From on February 03, 2007
I loved the update! I'm starting to get anxious though to know who's the cat master, and what exactly are the ramifications of the seal breaking. I want somebody to notice that Sasuke is missing. I want to know what's going on, and soon! Please update! (though I understand about school.)
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From Draconayzia on January 30, 2007
ok, I'm loving this. Seeing the world through Sasuke's eyes as a kitten is hilarious! Please do update agian soon!
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From Godsx on January 26, 2007
The Sasuke-puffing-fur part was ultra-cute! Being a kitten suits Sasuke so well! The funny part that it suits him more than being a grown up cat!
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From ladygizarme on January 26, 2007
i'm really enjoying reading this story progress. the sleepover was cute, with hinata and naruto's show for the kids and sasu-kitty, and all sasuke's observations. i liked that you put in about naruto's self-encouraging phrase decorations, too. and i'm really finding it cuter and cuter how sasuke is still sasuke in his mind, but his actions seem to be more and more kittenlike despite his annoyance at his own actions :p nyaaa and he's realizing more of an affection for naruto and it is so sweet how it's happening, with his concerns and observations and even panic (and especially i giggled when he realized he'd been acting like hinata when naruto came out of the shower lol!) also, the big confrontation with EVERYONE showing up at naruto's house the morning after the sleepover was quite entertaining even though it also had its tense moments.

i can't wait to read more and i hope we find out more about naruto's "illness" soon!!
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