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Reviews for Not So Happily Ever After

By : KungFuu
  • From ffpandayaoi on April 04, 2007
    Excellent! 4 wonderful chapters! MORE PLEASE!!!
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  • From ALD on February 03, 2007
    I like this story, so glad you updated. This chapter was pretty good and moved the plot along w/out being boring. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From MuseMistress on January 20, 2007
    I just have to say that I love your Gai. He's adorable.

    And that was the sweetest thing ever! One of the most romantic things I've ever read. I almost cried, damn you.
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  • From TheGingerLady on January 19, 2007
    Hahaha I love this paring and I love this fic! It made me smile and lough and brightend up my very gloomy day! Thank you! ^^
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  • From ALD on January 17, 2007
    Can't wait for the next chapter. I loved the part about Iruka's parents, it brought a tear to my eye. I'm glad they made up, but I kinda liked the bickering. Pls update when you get the chance. :)
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  • From llyoung on January 16, 2007
    Your story is great. I just read chapter 3 over on live journal. Thanks for including the link in chapter 2.
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  • From Hestia on January 16, 2007
    This is so fun! I love the autographed shorts! The skunk! Kakashi upset that Icha Icha techniques didn't work! Kakashi sleeping and spooning. The L word! Ok--there really isn't anything I didn't enjoy! Gai is the perfect comic touch too! Please update soon!
    Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - ALD on January 12, 2007
    I like it so far. Hope to see another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - kaoya on January 08, 2007
    Funny. Witty. Original.
    I loved it ^^
    It wasn't corny, you were literate and I thoroughly enjoyed it without getting pissed off at a missing story line and too much smut (yes, there is such a thing as too much smut =_= )
    You even stuck to the characters!

    Ehehehe

    Keep writing! xD
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  • From ANON - sweetwhite on January 04, 2007
    this is so great and cute!
    i love the way you portrayed their relationship!
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  • From ANON - Reily on January 04, 2007
    I really found this to be a fun and enjoyable read, I really hope you'll be able to work on it. I was a little worried at first that Iruka was going to be this poor weak little ninja that needs to be rescued but then you had him handle himself rather well in a fight, it's interesting to get these two sides. I can accept Iruka as a little rusty but I have a hard time with people who portray him as completely usless, if nothing else instinct and training would kick in. Anyway enough babbling I don't want to distract you from the next chapter you should be writting. ;)
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  • From ANON - Loveless on January 03, 2007
    I really like this story and itäs funny. so please update, don't be one of those authors that never finishes anything -__- bye
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  • From ANON - kiss_me_deadly on January 03, 2007
    It's too bad that updates are going to be irregular, because I already like this story. You have good character dynamics in the works and sound, believeable characterization. I can't wait for more, whenever that may be.
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  • From ANON - Mew.. on January 02, 2007
    teehee, it's really good..I was a little unsure about it at first, but I'm really glad I clicked the link..Poor Iruka, though! I'm not surprised that Jiraiya's "hypothesis" is pretty wrong....Kakashi's not quite the genius he claims to be if he follows Jiraiya's advice about women..... -_-;;;;
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