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Reviews for Secret Love

By : yaoigurl06

From inukouga11 on January 16, 2007
*previously your gay stalker lol!* WOW!!!! NEIJI raped naruto!!!!! NOOOO KILL THE BASTARD!! *whew* ok i'm done! but i love the story.
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From BishounenKrazed on January 16, 2007
you made neji evil!! not that i care, but OMG!! that's just something that has never... i mean... whoa. but i like this story, keep it up. ^.^
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From perfect_blue_rogue on January 16, 2007
so it was neji that raped naruto! how dare he!! i'd like to see him get what's coming to him for once even tho he's really hot and naruto obsessed....damn it y'd he have to turn like that! -starts banging her head against her desk-
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From Fyra on January 15, 2007
Hey, awesome story! Can't wait til an undate. If it isn't too much trouble could you email me when you've put up a new chapter. I rarely have the chance to come on the site as much as I used to and I'd hate to miss out on a good story!
Keep up the good work!
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From perfect_blue_rogue on January 09, 2007
-laughing her ass off- ya know? if kakashi knew what sasuke and naruto were doing, what was he doing wondering around the hill in the first place?? -arches brow- btw love the story!
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From ANON - dana on January 07, 2007
ha ha ha ha ha they did it on a hill and everybody knows. what do you have planned for the clinging sakura besides naruto being pregnant i can't wait to see. are you going to include sasuke's brother or sai that would make my day. can't wait for the next update.
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From on January 07, 2007
I'm not necessarily fond of the whole Naru x Sasu pairing but I thought this story was cute. You had a bunch of grammatical mistakes in the chapter and sometimes, the plotline was a bit confusing to follow but all shortcomings aside, this was a decnt fiction. :D
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From ANON - sasunarulover62 on January 07, 2007
OK I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STROY I THINK YOU SHOULD DO A TIME SKIP OF 6 YRS WITHOUT THEM EVER FINDING NARTO AND THEN NARUTO COMES BACK WITH HIS 6YR OLD SON/DAUGHTER WICH EVER YOU PICK AND THEN SASUKES SEES HIM AND.... SO ON
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From ANON - HellzAngel on January 07, 2007
Really love your story very much. I love it when Naruto's pregnant. The first two chapters were very good and enteraining, and I can't wait until the next one. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Fred on January 07, 2007
omg! that was brillant! i luv when ppl fight over teh ukes! anyways i can't wait till the next chappy! update soon!...please...
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From ANON - chofosho on January 07, 2007
Kakashi is so perverted........

HAHAHAHHA
It's sooo funny!!!!!!

And Neji WANTS Naruto...
OHHHH
Do I smell a yaoi-love-triagnle?

NARUTO IS....IS...IS.......................tha P WORD?!?!

OMG

Just kiddin

WHO RAPED HIM????
I'LL GO BEAT 'im UP!! or her......

Inari is adorable!!!!!!!!

HAH
I bet Gaara wants Naruto too,eh?

I can't WAIT FOR THE NEXT CCHAPTERRR!!!

SO please, Please, PLEASE update SOON!!!!!

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UPDATE SOON
♥ CHOFOSHO
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From ANON - MurakiAsato on January 07, 2007
Only one problem, Inari was 8 and the Naruto gang were 12 when they all met so Inari should be 14 in your story.
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From ANON - chofosho on January 07, 2007
GAHH!!
I love it!!!
This is the first yime in a while that I've read someone using that flashback ftom the books/T.V. show!!

THANK YOU!

I really like where this is going and I'm about to read the second chapter..
I'm sure it will be awesome as well.

:)
I like the way you used Hinata in this chappie. She is still that qiuet little gal that has love for a little FOXY-boyy. And she was watching Naruto and things that had to do with Naruto, and you made her help out Naruto and Sasuke's relationship...

Some fics I've read make Hinata the BEACHH and that she gets jealous..and then SAKURA is all..oh I'm happy that you happy Sasuke-kun...

BLAHBLAHBLAH!! SAKURA, for one, is an obsessive BEACH
and Hinata, secondly, is kind-hearted...so...I'm guessing these fic writers have hit their heads on brick walls or something...?

Whatever.
I MOST DEFINETELY (I'm not sure if I spelled that right but I'm sleepy so I don't give a damn) LIKE HINATA MORE THAN SAKURA

I hate her

she is a Sasuke-obsorbed freak that needs to dye her hair a normal color

At least Hinata is understanding and uses a subtle approach when trying to get Naruto

When miss FREAKING-SAKURA basicly molests Sasuke with her stares and stuff!!!

UGHH! I'm sorry if I'm offending anyone but thats my opinion.

Anyways

Keep up the good work and update soon!!!!

:)

-Skips off to read chapter TWO!!-
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From ANON - your gay stalker (^-^) on January 06, 2007
I love it so far! plz keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON! And isn't it funny how the more a guy will act nice, the longer he holds out that he's gay? lol, i only say that cauz of your personal comments on your author's page XP.

I get hit on like twice as many times as my STRAIT best friend! He hates me for it, (and the fact i don't sleep with the 'hottest women on the planet' barf!)
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From ANON - Lil Naruto on January 04, 2007
AAWW Sakura's a bitch, that hubba bubba max lookin big ass forehead havin....I'm done update you got something good goin on here.
HEHE Sasuke made love to Naruto :3!*smiles*
But Sakura *mood suddenly darkins* she had no right whats so eva to hit Naruto, he should've slapped her back or at least Sasuke. Sorry don't like her neva did her forehead bothers me.
Well anyway update soon *sniffs* poor Naruto.
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