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By : promise2003
  • From MrsCake on December 18, 2007
    Yeah! Now Temari's in the club! Serves Shika right. Garra's one shrewd little devil. The Bistro scene was great! :-)
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  • From roxnroll on December 17, 2007
    That was really good. I'm feeling alot of Kaka/Saku love going on. I can't wait to read the update.
    Rox
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  • From Kaysan on December 17, 2007
    While it was all absolutely hilarious, I do feel incredibly bad for poor Sakura. Maybe a little for Kakashi. Hopefully, they get their night in the next chapter. And hopefully, the rest of the guys get what's coming to them. Sakura just needs to lay into each and every one of them. Can't wait till the 2nd! Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From ANON - A Reviewer on December 15, 2007
    This last chapter had me in a stitch; I could just see those two drunken ninja trying to sabotage a date, only failing miserably because they are drunk off their asses. It would have been funny if you made them slap each other like little girls, berating one another for being so loud.You really have an affinity for writing people's deeper emotions. Your stories are not shallow and one-dimentional and you explain all your characters motivations really well. This marks the status of a true writer, one who can get their readers to really relate, or at least understand, the characters. I've been reading so many simple plot-less fics lately that I've forgotten what a well-written story sounds like. Oh, shame on me! I forgo real novels and spend countless hours piddling time browsing the internet to find "good literature". I am pathetic. But, finally, my time-wasting has paid off. I believe that I have found an author worth reading! Go Lemon Drops!
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  • From ANON - clandestine on December 12, 2007
    Wow, what a fabulous piece of work; it's rare to find fics of this quality in the het section... you had me laughing out loud and the twists and turns are amazing... plus, SakuraHarem is a big bonus... I hope you consider a Team 7 moresome as well as KakaSaku, and maybe some GaaSaku...
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  • From ANON - mel on December 07, 2007
    I am so glad to see and update, and to know that another one is on the way. Very creative in having Gaara make a rat. I also liked the added part of Gaara finding Sakura attrative and letting him have some hope. Good job!
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  • From cloversandhoney on December 07, 2007
    So I'm not going to lie, this little bit of insanity is all-kinds of entertaining. Really looking forward to the update.
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on December 05, 2007
    I like your writing! I'm so glad you're still writing this. :)
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  • From goodchaos on December 05, 2007
    HA HA ROFL! OH MY GOD! XD I just found this! I can't wait for the Update! GO NARUTO!!! ^o^
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  • From rottenbiscuit on December 04, 2007
    OH MY GAWD, INO IS THE DEVIL!

    The good, perverted DEVIL. At first I was like... WTF INO? And then I thought, nah... this is the BEST WAY.

    I thought it was sweet that Kakashi carried Sakura over.

    And Hinata? We all KNEW she was a pervert. HECK, she's a SUPER PERVERT.
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  • From rottenbiscuit on December 04, 2007
    This story is sheer torture.

    Why must you tempt my fantasies so? XD
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  • From rottenbiscuit on December 04, 2007
    I was giggling at this entire chapter. I could Sakura plotting with Ino on taking him over JUST to look underneath his mask. But Ino actions are just hilarious.

    But man, is Sakura a PERVERT. Jiraiya aient got nothing on her.

    You have no idea how much I laughed out loud when he came up from the water. I swear I could be heard from the other room. I can't even begin to imagine what Kakashi thought happened while he was out. I feel so bad for Sakura getting caught though, it would've been really funny to have Kakashi lament on it all.

    Perverted Kakashi though.

    I could only dream fantasies on how this could all play out.
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  • From rottenbiscuit on December 04, 2007
    Ino must've thought about the underwear thing for a LONG time to go all the way to Gaara. Actually, I think he goes Commando too, or he wears panties. But I have never, EVER, thought that men may have pantylines or not. The things that escape your thought processes... right?

    But putting Gai in there was too much! XD I'm going to have nightmares! XD

    I can only imagine Ino going on a personal mission to discover what every man in Konoha wears after this chapter.

    But I think Sakura needed that swimming break more than her boys did... if you know what I mean. -wink wink-
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  • From rottenbiscuit on December 04, 2007
    I really enjoyed how you introduced this story. I found it hilarious to say the least. The frustration Sakura feels trying to explain her turn-on to Ino is priceless. You also raise a good point about panty-underwear hypocrisy (one which I DEMAND to change XD). Why can't a girl find underwear sexy?

    Great first chapter! I'll be honest when I say I wasn't that interested from the beginning (it just didn't seem like my kind of story from the summary)... but I loved it! XD

    Good thing I checked, otherwise I would've missed something!
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  • From sihayadib on December 04, 2007
    what the fuck?! You updated? Man... you really were in a writing mood. Nerd... I love you and enjoy the ensuing shitstorm in 3... 2... 1...
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