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By : xoxoxo
  • From ANON - lainofthewired on July 26, 2007
    Before I forget...for the love of...it's "LOSE" not "LOOSE"

    Lose: to no longer have possession of something or no longer have a certain attribute, etc. "She will lose her virginity. He always loses his glasses."

    Loose: to not be firmly or completely attached. "He has a screw loose. He loosened his belt to remove his pants."

    That is all.
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  • From ANON - lainofthewired on July 25, 2007
    At least Sakura isn't selfish in the second half. But she's still oh so lovingly violent :D
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  • From ANON - Bounce on July 24, 2007
    This really makes me happy... I hate Sakura too by the way. I really wish that you would have made this chapter longer but i guess you really have been busy lately. Anwyay i hope you update sooner this time and hope the chapter is longer... I cant wait to see what happens when Sasuke finds out!
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  • From ANON - TsuTsu on July 23, 2007
    :3 bwee im loving this fic so much~! i usually dont review but i really want to see where this goes so *!ENCOURAGEMENT!*
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  • From serenagold on July 23, 2007
    Sakura has very little redeeming qualities. Its little wonder people hate her. At first, I didn't exactly hate her... sure, she was useless, and that offened my senseablities as a female, but I was waiting for her to step up to the plate and prove herself as an unexpected strenght. Then came the chuunin exams and Naruto and Sasuke were outcold and it was up to her to protect them. I was so excited at the prospect, only to be disappointed to discover that the only thing she managed to do was cut her hair. Bullshit! She should be a strong character in her own right, but the only thing she manages to do is let the boys handle the dangerous stuff and prove herself to be a worrying annoyance. That is why everyone hates her. Bitch.

    Of course, I suppose I should be more on her side now that she's developed into a capible shinobi in the second half of the series after the time jump... but now she lacks personality. I don't know. The most enjoyable Sakura seems time and again to be the one found in fanfics, and that shouldn't be right at all. :/


    Good chapter, btw.
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  • From Jin on July 23, 2007
    Really, I can either hate or love Sakura depending on the story. That's part of what makes her character interesting. Given the right circumstances she can either be a source of pain or joy to Naruto. In this story she's a mixture of both, which probably resulted from the fact that while you hate Sakura, you still want her involved with the threesome. You've done a pretty good job portrying her emotions so far. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2007
    Your hate for Sakura doesn't really shoe . . . XD

    Man, too short! I've been waiting FOREVER for an update! Ako's a liarrrrr!! Geez, I kind of started liking her.

    . . . Hee hee, I want to see Sasuke and Sakura's faces when they find out all the stuff Naruto did with Ako XD
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  • From venia on July 18, 2007
    well..i generally tend to avoid stories with original characters, but ako suits the plot nicely, so i'll just keep reading this.
    well, she was an impostor even if we somehow suspected it since the begining. Now all there is to see is, whether she is or not a victim (i can predict her story being developed, untill her reaching a main character's level of importance...which is why i dont like new char/s blah blah *ranting goes on* ...but don't listen to me, you did fine till now)Hmmm..she is not the total omg!evil bitch, but neither the innocent type of victim...i dont know, i need at least one more chapter to get it clear.
    what else?
    oh, I wasn't expecting naruto to actually lose his verginity with her XDXD *gapes*(Naruto, you got the wrong person damnit! you love them and you know it, stop emo-ing about how life sucks and stand up..please!) wait, what am i saying, he needed to forget, i know. it couldn't be otherwise seeing the emotional situation of deep s##t he is in....but still, i'm used to his optimistic, merciful side...nghh *frustration* i love him for that! *crosses fingers for a happy ending*

    by the way i enjoy when you describe scenes of 'madness'! XD yay, i dont know why, i'm so into psychologic suspence (like when naruto started laughing in the middle of fighting and made sasuke worry)because they convey strong emotions and you are there caring about the character, and you wonder 'what the hell is going on' and get scared, but then it's ok again and you relax. (dont overdo it though. they would look like actually crazy)I like sakura's hints of jealousy and possesiveness over naruto!
    last thing: sasuke leaving for a mission and having only one day, or better say one night. HELL YEAH! a golden opportunity for fixing things and getting to the sex too XD(seize the day, my friend...) hurray for team7!
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  • From ANON - Himitsu on July 17, 2007
    nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu you MUST write the next chapter!!! I loved it as usual, and I can't WAIT to see what happens, please continue!! :DDD
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  • From ANON - DXSlayer on July 13, 2007
    update update update lol
    seriously though this story is very good. its very well writing out and the stroy is interesting, with the exception of the naruto saske scene everything is very enoyable.
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  • From ANON - Bounce on July 08, 2007
    Omg great last chapter! I really loved the betrayal but hated it at the same time! 0how can she do that to poor naru-chan?! HE was so nice to her and he really liked her! Sakura needs to beat the shit out of her.! And I Know that was Sassori right? Oh gods i love sassori and dei! I love this so much please continue asap! The faster the more you get reviews so update!
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  • From Jin on July 08, 2007
    I saw this twist coming...well, mostly I did. I didn't suspect Anko's part in Ako's plans or the fact that Ako was Sasori's puppet (and is that in a literal or figurative sense? With Sasori you could probably go either way), but it was still very good. Well written.

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2007
    AWWWW man! I was kind of starting to like Ako! Poor Naruto!!! You've got to update, ASAP! Okay??

    Oh, and nice lemon ^_~
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  • From serenagold on July 08, 2007
    The smut? She was good smut. And the betrayal... even better!


    This was an excellent chapter. Short, but it accomplished eveything it needed to. I hope you take more inspiration from this chapter than you did the last when it comes to incentive updating. YOu gotta feel bad for Naruto; he finally lowers his guard and gets stabbed in the back. Great job with the chapter and keep up the good work!
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  • From on July 08, 2007
    I must admit I've been very skeptical of this fic from the very beginning, but the way you continue deepening the plot and avoid the easy (cheap) solutions has really started to rope me in. I really don't think I was expecting Ako to be bad. It was weird because I *wanted* her to be, but it was a spiteful, how-dare-you-mess-with-team-seven kind of wish. And then bam! She's trouble. Trouble, trouble, trouble. The Sasuke chapter, by the way, was beautifully harsh. The absolute social inadequacy that Sasuke portrayed worked very well (even if it made me raise an eyebrow of "now how is the author going to realistically rebound the relationship from that??"). I honestly squirmed, it was such a painful scene to be a voyeur for. I've kept my eye on this fic just because the writing (and because I'm a sucker for team seven) and I now can say I've bitten your hook and getting reeled in awfully fast. Thank you for your dedication and hard work. I hope that I get to see a new chapter in the future.
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