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By : ClaireBear
  • From on February 03, 2011
    I have read this story in one whole day and I never knew it was possible to fall in love with a story!!! I love the character growth the togetherness Sasuke, Naruto, Hinata, and Neji written beautifully!! I have to say Sasuke and Neji I love their relationship everything the interaction all of it I hope they have baby :-3 *wink wink* Please whatever do I hope this story gets finish someday. Man this pairing I never thought much of but after this and your others from before "An Indecent Affair" and "Viva Forever" (which I hope also gets completed someday) you have got my vote!!! Can I just say Naruto is the coolest best friend ever and thank you for not making ridiculously dumb and giving him brains geez!!! And also I love the way you have written Sasuke and to see he still a teme but you can tell he loves and cares deeply for Neji, Naruto, and Hinata!!!! Please update I can’t wait to see what happens. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks!!!!!


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  • From Inigeshi on April 06, 2010
    POKE!

    not to be rude but i've been waiting for an update for three years (little hypocritical of me, i know) but can i please get at least a little status update? is inbred going to be finished? if not what were your plans for the story? I was really loving this fic i just want to know...

    Inigeshi
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  • From NarutoVixin on November 28, 2009
    lovely the tale flows really well and i can hardly wait to read more of it i hope you can update soon as i realy want to see how a pair of males get their girls free of their family and if they both pop one little question lol
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  • From ANON - lindsay on September 12, 2008
    this story is fucking perfect. it just draws u in. dont give up on it
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  • From ANON - kaky on September 08, 2008
    I love the story still end it' s my favorutite couple but I think it'll be better if neji was a normal man because I think it's hotter but you create a good scene of violence so well done .AND KEEP WRITING
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2008
    Damn that was good, you should really forget about that other story and update this one. I mean you already did like 58 chapters might as well finish it. PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Tammy500 on January 17, 2008
    Wow love ya story, u gotta update lik nownownownownow, i hav read every single one of ur chapters and love them all, it would be soo neat if u like had a girl hit on sasuke and naruto and the girls lik walk in it would be so old school drama soooo cool
    love ya
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  • From yersifanel on December 01, 2007
    Hi there Honey!
    How are you? Long time no see.
    I read all the chapters, but I was unable to leave you a review.

    I really like this chapter, it was all cool.
    See you soon!
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  • From ANON - soft_touches on November 30, 2007
    yeah, that cleared everything up for me. I might just throw-up reading about Jiraiya / Tsunade. Is the group going back to America with Naruto? that would be funny.
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  • From DragonMan220 on November 27, 2007
    This was a wonderful chapter. I can't help but think Hinata will get a big hug from Tsunade the moment she either comes back to the US with Naruto or Tsunade comes to visit.
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  • From Twiggies on November 27, 2007
    Why does everyone else get sick but meeee??
    I'm actually one of those who want's sick, so whyyyy?

    Anyway!
    Great chapter once again!
    I only think it's good you're writing long chapters!
    Hehe, and this one was funny!
    Tsunade and Jiraiya are the best. Just the right parent's for Naruto.

    And everyone knows where Sasuke and Neji's studies always ends up! xDD
    Even Naruto isn't that dumb! xD

    I'm glad you updated again!
    And I hope you will be updating soon again and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - soft_touches on November 20, 2007
    Wow,i'm so happy! its almost been a year since you started... Anyway what is the meaning of the last paragraph? What does it mean? What does it mean? I hope Hinata doesn't have a crush on Sasuke or those two don't have some past history together. Til next chapter, I'll be thinking about it.
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  • From Twiggies on November 19, 2007
    Yaay! Wonderful update!
    Ah, Sasuke and Neji are always so hot.
    -Cough- And yes: Naruto's always hungry, just like Neji's always HORNY!
    It's proofed! xDD

    Aww, Hinata and Neji's bathroom scene was so cute!
    I can picture it in my mind so clearly.
    And what about Sasuke and Naruto's playing? xDD
    Well, that Monopoly ended on the floor.. just like the boys.. Well, boys are boys. They both just happens to be very eager ones! xDD

    You know, I am SO VERY RELIEFED to hear that Sasuke won't let those Hyuuga bastards do anything to Neji-chan~!
    And I am SO VERY HAPPY that you updated!
    'Cause you know how much I love this story!
    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    LOVE YA!
    Tyra~
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  • From ANON - stalkerocandies on October 24, 2007
    Oh, one more thing...

    The sexual "abuse and blurred lines of consent" (which I find neither abusive nor blurred) between Sasuke and Neji are soooooooo hot and obviously a big reason why the two of them are so drawn to one another. The way I see it, Neji's got a certain amount of testosterone along with his girly hormones thus creating his androgyny (because if he didn't, his family wouldn't have insisted he be raised as a boy, right, right?). And most guys like sex a bit rougher than many girls. Perhaps others would have been more comfy with SasuNeji's NC-17 scenes had there been a teensey bdsm warning on it although I'm not criticizing at all. *shrugs* I may have read this quicker if there'd been a bdsm warning, but hey--I found it. XD I ATE up Sasuke/Neji's chemistry with a great big ice cream spoon and didn't need dessert, thank you very much. ^.~
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  • From ANON - stalkerocandies on October 24, 2007
    Hi!

    LOVE this fic! I think I'm becoming a real fan of Sasu/Neji (since there's so little Kiba/Neji or Itachi/Neji...the latter being enemy slash which is anudder fave of mine) because of your fics. Please do keep working on your unfinished stuff, 'k? XD Okee.

    I am a oui confused and this is why. You wrote:
    In my first draft, Neji and Sasuke never break up but after thinking about it I wondered just how on earth they expected to stay together with Hiashi still around so they had to end it, sorry. 


    Now, to me it just seems totally illogical to let Neji anywhere near his family now that they've gone homicidal on him. On one hand I can see that Neji would think he'd have to go since he doesn't know that they've made an attempt on his life, but Sasuke knows. Shouldn't he say something to him?

    Not trying to burn you by any means, sweetie, this story is an epic and I've LUBBED it so far, truly, madly, deeply. *laughs* Just that one little nng. *blows you a kiss* BBFN
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