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Reviews for Inbred

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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on December 28, 2006
    good luck w/ur family but u no if didnt update like this u would'nt got much reviews so nicely done made me cry
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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on December 28, 2006
    update plz! 1 million star rating
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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on December 28, 2006
    update plz!
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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on December 28, 2006
    i love this.
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  • From ANON - Angst on December 27, 2006
    Wow, what you did with Neji and Hinata was a real shocker. Wow, my eyes nearly feel out of each part. Still you handled it real well. Why exactly is Neji mad at Hinata? Why is Hinata no longer a part of her family?
    I hope she will be okay, gah why did she have to go back! I want more! of course, seeing the update speed, I really don't have to wait that long do I? Maybe you should do that Nanowrimo shitzit, write one novel in a month.
    Thanks for the story.
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on December 27, 2006
    Wow still quick as ever i was in the middle of 16 when 17 popped up. ok hinatas story is great, not only does it make perfect plot and when neji finds out DAMN gonna be good
    ~Dim Song ( ur biggest fan)
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on December 27, 2006
    Hey
    yah I hear those chappies blow to do but u did a good job
    ~Dim Song
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on December 27, 2006
    ahhh thats cool i stopped at like 2:00 and dude i've got no life so don't feel bad oh and i love how u got kakashi and his look don't stop now im addicted
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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on December 27, 2006
    oooo man plz i need 2 c some naruhina ! expecially naruhina smut ! plz! update asap
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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on December 27, 2006
    plz in gods name update
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on December 27, 2006
    Dude, me and my friend were up all night trying to think how u'd pull the whole "neji" thing and u did good also the back story was great and how the hell do u update so quick its nuts!!!
    ~Dim song
    P.S ummm i kno i review alot and its to let u kno sumone luvs this story and cares
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on December 27, 2006
    DUDE!!! first, if anyone should be saying thanks its ME, second, your update time is unpresidented , lastly, the story is SOOO GOOD that neji twist blew me away keep it up ~Dim Song
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on December 26, 2006
    cool keep up the good work. This is one of the few storys im fallowing update by update becuase its that good
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  • From ANON - Angst on December 26, 2006
    I have to admit I was a bit wierded out by the rape scene. I kind of wished Naruto had jumped in sooner, like when he saw the guy pull out his thing. But that's like chapter two. Chapter three and on are pretty strong. I'm curious as to why Hinata was wearing the same clothes as that day, only two days after? How exactly did she get stuck in that mess in the first place.
    Neji and Sasuke are a hot item, I like the sexual tension and the mysterious issue driving them apart. I also like that you're exploring more than the pervy side of Naruto. I know I said show don't tell, but also explore. That means to look at your character and how he affects others. That was done greatly by the whole brother thing with him and Sasuke.
    Also, what happened to the guysy who assaulted Hinata and Naruto before, where are the police and the investigators. I would imagine Hinata alerted secuirty as to what happened and what could be happening, why else did the gaurd suddenly show up there?
    You have a lot of material you can cover with this story. Don't be afraid to explore the angst, drama and conflict.
    Have fun, writing. I'll keep reading!
    Angst
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  • From ANON - Dragonsbreath on December 26, 2006
    Well, I'm reading the story for the Nar/Hin part, so you might already guess that for me the story is missing something. :D
    Yeah well, anyway, this is not meant to rush you, more like my way to tell you I might not be the best judge on the story so far. I still like the story, especially Naruto ruffling Neji's feathers, which I guess might not happen that often after chapter 10. T_T
    Anyway, just keep going. ^^
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