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By : ClaireBear
  • From yersifanel on January 15, 2007
    OMG. You write Neji in this capter as one of the most cute things ever, that was just hot, amusing, cool and well, I just like it, jajaja, nice one!
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  • From ANON - Angst on January 14, 2007
    Oh my, I think I need a cold shower after that. Wow, Neji and Sasuke, that was wow. Thank you for the read.
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  • From ANON - Angst on January 13, 2007
    Wow, that was a beautiful scene you created. I really enjoyed reading about the party. It was very well researched and very informative. The descriptions were also doubly good. Hmm, I was thinking. Kurenai comes off as very motherly toward Naruto I wonder if she woudl be able to help them hide Hinata.
    Also, I can't help btu tihnk Orichimaru has put two and two together.
    The brothel burns down the same night that his house is attacked. Plus Hinata hasn't returned to Hatsumo ( I know I'm mispelling). What if he has alerted the Hyuuga's to her existence and occupation. A further shame to the family. What happens if they went to investigate Neji?
    But before answering those questions, bringo n the wonderful lemons ^^
    This chapter really got me looking forward to them.
    Thankies for the chapter!
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on January 13, 2007
    Nice, way to go u got the culture stuff nicely cant wait for lemon
    ~Dim Song
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  • From yersifanel on January 13, 2007
    This chapter was cute! I like it a lot, It was a nice chapter to read, how Hinata and Neji are getting back to each other and how Naruto is getting closer to Hinata and Sasuke keeping his love for Neji, adorable!
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  • From ANON - Pam on January 13, 2007
    Good chapter! Next one will be a lemon, right? Heheh:
    Aww, Sasuke and Neji are such a sex machines, and I love it!
    Hinata and Naruto makes a good couple too.
    UPDATE SOON! I LOVE YOUR FIC !
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  • From ANON - Angst on January 12, 2007
    Yay, I love Itachi he's such fun to read. hey hun, are you still enjoyign writign this? Fanfiction shouldn't be a burden you should want to write this. Do what you instinctively feel is write, it may not please all your reviewers but you are your most important judge and critic if you like it it will be good.
    As for suggestions: Cross dressing? Disguise Hinata as a guy ( kind of ripping off of Neji, I know but still interesting. Though I could see why nejo might object. He may feel like it's making fun of his situation.)

    Perhaps some other form of disguise or the help of a teacher who accidently coems across the Hyuuga. Perhaps not knowing the situation but having a friendl;y conversation ( ie. Neji and Sasuke both threaten to beat the crap out of them and or financially ruin them for life. Or perhaps bribery using upcoming snippets from the makeout paradise series. ^^;Perhaps they try to disguise her as a foreign exchange student. It maybe better for Hinata to leave Japan and the influence of the Hyuuga and Orichimaru. Thereby they enroll her in one semester by hacking into the schools systems. Okay, I know most of my ideas are pretty far out there, trust your gut.
    luvs,
    Angst
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  • From ANON - Soft_touches on January 12, 2007
    Naruto needs to grow some balls. I can't wait for him to say those three little words to Hinata. Can you make her first time very special... Plleeaassee. Oh yeah is Neji ever going to be in a dress? Thanks for answering my questions, I know I ask alot sometimes but I LUV your story. Did you know the strongest muscle in the human body is the tongue! Lol
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  • From yersifanel on January 12, 2007
    Don't worry, the girls you describe are not normal, are bitchy-annoying-deadly-obssesed-cherry-girls, witch is diferent, I am a girl and I have seen persons like that and dislike them A LOT, it's just so annoying...I can't stand it.

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  • From ANON - silent pluto on January 11, 2007
    Wow, this story is so well put together, seriously.
    I'm a big naruto/hinata fan ^_^, and this fic
    is full of warm fuzzy feelings! yay lol
    Keep up the good work! Update soon, I wanna see
    if Naruto will ever spill his guts to Hinata, figuratively
    or literally. Whichever! lol
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  • From ANON - Angst on January 10, 2007
    Aww, that chapter was sweet. I like how you were able to portray Naruto's uncertainty and self-deerision. I wonder whot hat mystery girl was, the one who broke his heart. Probably no one important right? Thank you for updating so quickly.
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  • From ANON - Dim Song on January 10, 2007
    Awww damn, chp made me a little sad poor naruto owell hope it gets better
    ~Dim Song
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  • From yersifanel on January 10, 2007
    Awwww, that was cute. Come on Naruto! say it! Hinata-chans loves you too! do ityou little blonde!! (and btw, Sasuke and Neji's relationshio is adorable and HOT, yay!)
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  • From yersifanel on January 10, 2007
    Hinata is so damn cute! I can barely stand it, GOD!! *glomps Hinata*
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  • From ANON - Soft_touches on January 09, 2007
    Stop teasing people. For a second I thought that the scene in the shower with Naruto and Hinata was real but I figure that Naruto not a bold person to actual put his hand in Hinata pants. I don't understand how Neji could still be out-of-the-loop.
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