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By : ClaireBear
  • From Sean on January 21, 2007
    OH SHIT! I could not have seen that coming. God that scene where they say 'good bye' i was choked up. ok anyway nice job keep it up
    ~Dim Song
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  • From yersifanel on January 21, 2007
    AWwwWW!! Poor Hinata! but at the same time, I know Kurenai is going to help, maybe with her help Hinata get out of the bad situation! Neji is going to be sad but er sister is safe, so that's a point in favor. I like how Kurenai wanting to help came to them and now I think Hinata knows that Naruto really cares about her! will Naruto say the magic 3 words to her? or will be Hinata the one saying them first? (even thinking we DO know they love each other, witch is THE cuteness)

    Nice chapter, see you later!
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  • From iLikeAngst on January 20, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter. I see that things have begun to happen in the plot again, a little break from the lemon. Though I feel kind of bad for Naruto, so close yet so far. It interesting to watch how everything ties in together. Without the lemon this sis still and enjoyable and intense story. I'm not dismissing the lemons though, I'm sayign you write both really well and that thios manages to keep the rhythm of a of movement, the plot is working toward soemthign even while the characters are seemingly just growing internally.
    Good job.

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  • From yersifanel on January 19, 2007
    This chapter was fun. Everybody is victim of Neji's wrath, jajaja, Anyway, I wonder what the next is going to be about, I love your story! is so entretaning.
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  • From iLikeAngst on January 19, 2007
    Hmm don't feel you have to rush huny, you shoudl enjoy yourself. i foudn the comedy was very good. It wasn't that short either, only short in comparison to your other chapters. I'm enjoyign this story as always, I want you to enjoy it too.
    Angst
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  • From Twiggies on January 19, 2007
    You really have to update soon again. Well, in this chapter there wasn't very much action, but I understand that not every chapter have lemons in them. xDD
    Heheh. But this was interesting too. Update soon!
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  • From iLikeAngst on January 18, 2007
    Sorry, discontent is the name I use as an author. I use a different name while reviewing. Don't ask me why. I just realized what you said about the last chapter. 17 pages o.0 I've written four chapters of my own fic and I don't think I've come near seventeen pages yet. You realy are a remarkable writer. As much as I praise the smut it's the ocmedy i love best. The whole blue movie things had me rolling. It took me a while to undestand the reference, I'm as clueless as Hina. I loved picturing that ending scene you always write comedy so well. It's also very realistic as in real life comedy , misunderstanding over-reactions etc. And you keep the characters ic which is pretty f'n amazing. You deserve more praise than my sleep deprived mind can offer. Thank you for this great story!
    ~Angst~
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  • From Sean on January 18, 2007
    ahhhhh... 1 for neji understanding and 2 for not murding naruto lol. But the whole "Blue movie thing was priceless i shit bricks. I bad for hinata now wonder what shes thinking...
    ~Dim Song
    P.s damn that was alot of words to write PSP
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  • From yersifanel on January 18, 2007
    Run for your life Naruto! eji is okay with you being with Hinata but not with you showing the habits you pick from Jiraiya! Run and hide!! LOL

    Wax? OMG! WHY? THE PAIN! *faints*...*comes back* Okay, I'm done, sorry, is just...after using wax.. you know, its very.. well...unpleasent to even walk, dear God... *fainst again* ...*comes back* Anyway, Sasuke so loves Neji, all to himself, I wouldn't se suprised if he is all possesive over Him, good! jajaja that's so cute, jjaja. This chapter was funny, interesting and cute, jeje. See you next time!
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  • From Twiggies on January 18, 2007
    Heheheh. This was good!
    I love the whole chapter. Please write more soon.
    Can't wait to see how big Narutos pruises are. xDD -giggle-

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  • From Silent Pluto on January 18, 2007
    Oh man that was hot!
    Naruto's Episode ^_^ was really steamy. Gosh Hinata's so shy
    it's unbearable! lol
    Great job! I give it two thumbs up!
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  • From Dragon55 on January 16, 2007
    Wuahaha, Naruto is evil. >:-D
    Well a really nice chapter and a nice start for the two.
    Nice work, keep going. :)
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  • From yersifanel on January 16, 2007
    AwWwWWwwww, that was Sexy and Cute! yup, I like it, somehow perfect for Hinata. And I have to say that Naruto's innner pervert was so damn funny and the counter with Jiraiya...RFLMAO!!1111!!!11one!!eleven!!
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  • From iLikeAngst on January 16, 2007
    wow, another great chapter. I loved it. I hope to read more soon.
    The person, otherwise known as angst/
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  • From Twiggies on January 15, 2007
    WOOOW ! This is fic is totally HOT !
    I love this Sasuke and Neji's thing. They're so cute.
    NaruHina isn't one of my favourites, but it do.
    Update soon, will ya? Thanks! KEEP WRITING.
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