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By : ClaireBear
  • From yersifanel on August 31, 2007
    I think I'm in love with this 'family', yeah, that's it!.
    It's been a while, but I'm glad to see moew of your story.
    You know...I think I know what's going on with Neji's card...but I'm not saying it! I want to read and be sure of it...
    OMG! I just love those 4!
    Thanks for the chapter.
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  • From Twiggies on August 25, 2007
    Awh. Really great update.
    Sasuke and Naruto's game was quite amusing. xDD
    Naruto gave up when he saw vegetables? Poor him.
    And what about all the shopping they did, and all that to Neji? xD
    And the shoes, damn that was brilliant.

    The ending was so cute.
    They all must be very pleased once they wake up again.
    I really love this story, and all the chapter are so great, I don't even remember how many times I have read this story through. xD

    But keep writing, and update whenever you feel like it. :D
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  • From Twiggies on July 21, 2007
    Awww.
    You're right! This chapter was cute!
    The (more) feminine Neji is quite adorable. And I liked it when you addressed Neji as girl.
    I can only imagine how cute and sexy Neji's belly piercing is! Sasuke is a lucky guy!
    ''We are family
    I got all my sisters with me
    We are family
    Get up ev'rybody and sing'' Yaaay! xDD

    I really liked this chapter!
    I hope you write more! KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON! LOVE YA !
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 19, 2007
    Wow. I just spent nearly two days reading this story. It is so compelling and you create so many threads of concern. I love it!!!
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  • From yersifanel on July 17, 2007
    This chapter was adorable!
    I love every part of it because it was just so cute, Neji and Sasuke are al lovable and I like this couple so much!!
    and That's why every time I remember they are going to be appart ones again makes me cry!! *cries* I don't want them to be apart again *whimper* but I trust you! *clean the tears* and I know you have a very nice rest of the story ahead and I soooo want to read it.
    Also, I loved Tobi in the last chapter, he is a good boy *jeje* and came just in time...and now I want to know what Deidara and his team are going to do... hum...
    Yayness, thanks for the chapter.
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  • From ANON - soft_touches on July 13, 2007
    HeyHey. i can't wait to find out what's up with neji. probably something small that she blew out of proportion. well take your time updating.
    chicken n' gravy
    soft_touches
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  • From ANON - soft_touches on July 13, 2007
    HeyHey. i can't wait to find out what's up with neji. probably something small that she blew out of proportion. well take your time updating.
    chicken n' gravy
    soft_touches
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  • From ANON - Tyra on July 11, 2007
    Ooohh my God!
    The Hyuuga-stalkers! They're going to take Neji away, and propably Hinata too! ..Or are they? Scary..
    Hmm.. I'm not entirely sure why Neji's so pissed. Maybe it's because I'm not fully awake yet? xD
    I hope they are all going to calm down and stuff.
    This chapter was so good.
    I hope you update soon again! Keep writing!
    Love ya!
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  • From YamiKaeko on June 11, 2007
    I Love this story! How do you keep the plot going? I have trouble...maybe it has something to do with the attention span of Naruto...I swear if I had Blond hair and blue eyes I could be his twin...Anyways keep up the good work! Ja Ne!
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  • From Twiggies on June 10, 2007
    How cute chapter!
    Heh, Sasuke was scolding Naruto for having a quickie with Hinata when he was the one who had a few more quickies with Neji. xDD
    Neji's such an horny.. girl! Well, we all know that Sasuke's irresistable.
    -sigh- ..Three weeks.. Poor guys. Well, at least Naruto and Hinata stays together right?

    Keep writing and update soooon!! I love your stoorryyY!! xDD
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  • From yersifanel on June 10, 2007
    *Giggle*

    Neji is having another hard need of Sasuke again, how cute.
    ...I love those two I wish they don't have to be apart T_T
    Anyway, nice chapter!
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  • From yersifanel on May 30, 2007
    But..but...but!
    No...you are breaking my heart with that! Sasuke and Neji have to be together and, no, no. but how? Awww... this is confusing and sad, not again, they are going to be apart again? Damn Hiashi... he is ruining everything! *sob, sob* aww...

    I know you are right and I know you have a point saying that how on earl they are going to stay together but, I don’t want them to be apart, same with Naruto and Hinata… God, the Hyuuga are so screw up, all they do is to ruin the life of their children! Damn…

    *calms down* Anyway, I understand and… well, I wonder what you have in mind and… well I like this story a lot and now things are angsty again but, then again, if you like it this way and you have a plan for the story then go ahead! I like I said, the important thing here is if you like or not how your story is going.

    …But they are meant to be!! *is in denial, as you can see* Ha, don’t mind me, I’ll keep reading. Because I still love this story, really.

    *whimper*
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  • From Twiggies on May 30, 2007
    I can't believe you're doing this to me!! You made me cry.. Again!
    I can't believe that Neji and Sasuke are going to break up! It's so sad. I really.. can't.. believe it..
    Damn, I wish Hiashi would die..
    Well, anyway.. I hope you update soon again..
    I still love this fic, don't get me wrong. xD
    I'm just emotional and sensitive and I love happy endings. xD

    Keep writing and update soon.
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  • From yersifanel on May 30, 2007
    Just like a friend of mine will said,
    "OMIGOSH!!! They are uber cute!!" *cough, cough*

    Well, the ARE! Uber cute, yes, that's it. This chapter was nice, because they finally had each other and love each other and the silent promise of never leave the other is really something, I like it.

    So, you are going to makes changes? It's okay for me I guess (Well, I don't know what the changes are anyway, lol) if the story makes more sense and you like it that way better then go ahead! is you story and what matters the most is if you like it.

    (PS: ADC has been updated, finally!)
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  • From Katheirne on May 26, 2007
    *Hesitantly Raises Hand for Attention* will there be more soon? You have me hooked and I would love to see what happens next.
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