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Reviews for You Were Never Mine

By : Reyn
  • From ANON - mgp on December 25, 2006
    No, it's too short! Need more! Well, just need more Naruto bashing Sasuke. I get the feeling Naruto's acting overdramatic, like a girl... so I can't blame Sasuke too much since Naruto's a gender confused head case.
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  • From ANON - Ayanaxchan on December 24, 2006
    You're going to continue this right? RIGHT!!? I mean you can't leave it right there! and the last line in that chapter was killer, I don't know why, but I got all teary!!

    and Sasuke that bastard oohhhh he's soooo going to regret everything isn't he! HAH! I hope Naruto sleeps with someone else and Sasuke walks in and everything Muahahahah that would be great. But anyhow, how ever you write it I know it will be interesting, so you better continue this, ALRIGHT!!
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on December 24, 2006
    ...........;_;........Why......O God why........How Could you.....How could you do that to him sasuke.....How!!!!!!.....;_;....O god naruto....I...I'm so sorry.......;_;....Sasuke you,....you,.....you ASSHOLE.....I.....I HATE YOU!!!!!!.....I...(whispers)....I hate you....;_;....(can't stop crying).....O wait...(stunned)...O god please say it isn't so.....This goes far beyond just cheating....doesn't it....;_;....OMG.....Poor nauto......Sasuke....you,......you,........you got that bitch pregnant didn't you.......(gasp)......Not just any bitch.......(shocked)......You got sakura pregnant.....(crying a river)....OMG sasuke.......She.....she's your teammate....she's......yours and naruto's friend.....I.....I don't believe you.....That's fucked up.....Even for you.......;_;.......And to top it all off....you don't even have the nerve to go after him....God....please sasuke.....please.....Go after naruto.......Tell him you love him.....Tell him your sorry.......Tell him that you'll help take care of the baby.....but that's all....That you wont be with her.....Tell him it was a mistake and that it wont happen again.....Tell him you'll do anything for him to prove you love him.....And that all you want is him.....;_;....Please just do something.....Please....
    Two ours latter.......
    Sniff,......sniff,.......sniff, sniff,......Sniff........(dries eyes).....I'm sorry.......I'm ok now......really I am.....sigh......I really loved your story......It made me cry.....and it broke my heart.......But that's why I loved it......(smile).....Because it was real,....And It made me fell. ^_^ I can't wait for your next chapter.....^^...please may it be very soon....Lol......latter.
    Kisses ^_~
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  • From ANON - Tepee712 on December 24, 2006
    Not bad, its an interesting intro, but too short. Good job so far!
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  • From ANON - oraday on December 23, 2006
    Continue? Please? I'll give you virtual cookies!

    Okay, I really like this story. It made me feel! And I hate angst so it's weird I like this as much as I do. Plus, you write so well that it would be a shame not to continue this. Your plot bunny is still a baby. You have to make it grow into a huge raging beast of a rabbit! Maybe it'll turn out nice and cute instead of angsty...

    Well, I hope you write more for this. In the mean time, I'll go see if you have any other fics. I hope you do, 'cause then I'll get to read more of your wonderful writing^.^
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  • From ANON - minjin on December 22, 2006
    Your first chapter is just so awesome. I love angst fics!!! Poor Naruto!!

    Wow this story just captivated me, i will follow you until it ends. THATS FOR SUREEEEEEEEE

    Love the way you write, just perfect ^^
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  • From ANON - SharinganEyes on December 22, 2006
    ...wait...Sasuke's got a baby's Momma? oh wow, make sure you update okay, cause like I wanna see where this is going.
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