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Reviews for You Were Never Mine

By : Reyn
  • From ANON - Wonderland on January 29, 2007
    Well I've always been a fan of the Naruto and Sasuke pairing, I have wondered how he would rebuild his clan if they were to get together. Maybe if they were to find an understanding woman. I would have thought that Sasuke would take more of an interest in the kid, if for no other reason than as an addition to his clan. Great story. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - FairyCelt on January 28, 2007
    I really love this fic...it's very angsty but offers some hope of a happy ending. I hope you plan on continuing this.
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  • From ANON - Gina on January 20, 2007
    The story is REALLY good!^o^/
    Love it already - you kan really sense that they in for a hard one!XD
    But... the chapters are to a bit short.^^;;
    I really like the way you discribe the characters, but you don't really get a feeling of the situation when the just end that fast.
    But DON'T take this in a bad way! I love the story! d^___^b

    And this is only my opinon, your doing a great job on this story so PLEASE continue!^^
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on January 20, 2007
    OMG. Lol I love this story.....Hell I love you. ^_^. God what is sasuke hiding......What isn't he telling us.....(blush)....Um...(Bush even more)....I mean nauto. Ha, ha. What isn't he telling naurto???....God sasuke. I hate you for cheating on naruto...But did you really do that...I mean I know your hiding something....If there is a slight chance that you didn't really cheat on him...And you possibly still have a chance with him again. I don't see what's holding you back. Who cares about pride when you can have naruto back?! If you do?!....Then you don't deserve him. If you pride mean's more to you...Then you obviously don't love him...Sigh...(frustrated) On the plus side though..(smile)..I'm glad that he doesn't plan to marry that bitch....(Grin)..God I hate her...sigh...God sasuke....why,....WHY?!!!! Wants to cry....Why?

    IEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I can't believe you finally updated. Lol I'm so happy. ^_^. I just wish your chapter's were a bit longer...sigh...O well. IEEEEEEEEEEEE Lol When's your next update....^_^....God I hope it's soon. I'm addicted to your story. ;_;. God why is it so good....Why?!! Lol Well hope to see you and your update soon. Latter.
    kisses ^_~
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  • From oraday on January 20, 2007
    Wah, so few words, so much conveyed. I didn't realize it was Ino that Sasuke had impregnated... Or at least, I'm thinking it's Ino. I had assumed it was Sakura... But it doesn't matter who it was, it just matters that Sasuke had to be a big enough bastard to do that.

    Beautifully written and I don't mind the shortness. Every word seems so weighted with meaning that it's just so befitting to write in small installments like this. I don't really think I could take more of the intense emotions you convey through Naruto's POV. Ah! This is just so great, regardless of the fact I don't really like angst. But, hey, I can definitely appreciate angst that makes a story as great as this^.^
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  • From marquesgue1 on January 16, 2007
    I'm intrigued... update when you can, I'd like to see where this is going.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From roely on January 16, 2007
    i love ur story!
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  • From ANON - Stagoya on January 07, 2007
    This story completely intrigues me. I'll definitely keep checking back for more updates.
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  • From ANON - animehead on December 30, 2006
    I really enjoy this story so far, I love the way it is written with the angst and all. I used to stray away form agnst, but since I started writing fanfictions, I don't mind it so much. Hell, I use it in my stories! Anyway, I can't wait to see what is waiting to unfold between these two. I'll be awaiting your next update.

    ~animehead
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on December 29, 2006
    Wow, how sad. That actually made me sad. Very interesting this peice. I wonder where this is going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2006
    wahhh waaaayyyyyy to SHORT!!!!
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on December 29, 2006
    God....Nooooooooooooooo.......You can't do this to me......Please.....O god please.....You have to update soon.......Pleas, please, please, please, PLEASE!!!!!!!!...;_;......please.....(crying).......God did......did you really......please say it isn't true...sasuke......Please!.....;_;....naruto......O god naruto.....your not.....god naruto your beautiful and Perfect in every way!.......If anyone is lower then a piece of shit it's.......IT'S SAKURS THAT'S WHO!!!!!!!!!!!!......GOD (Pooling her hear out).....I HATE THE BITCH.....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA........;_;....why can't she just stay out of naruto and sasuke's life........Please....Please I beg of you...just leave them the HELL ALONE!!!!.....I.....I just have a few questions.....Why is sasuke there?.....Why isn't he talking to naruto?........But more I'm importantly.......WHY DID HE LEAVE THE NEXT DAY WHEN NARUTO WHOKE UP.......(Crying).......WHY!!!!!!!....;_;......Does he have any idea how much that hurt's?!!!!!......To see the one you love, long for, cry for each night,...the one you trusted with you life......To see them again.....then have then disappear the next day from your life, without a sine...without a trace of them ever being there that day....Does he know how much it hurt's?....;_;...How much you think your going insane.....waking up to nothing?........DOES HE?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....Naruto.......
    .....Please update soon......I want......I want to know if naruto....If he will be ok......I want to know if sasuke will save him....(looks up to the heaven’s......and whispers to the wind and stars).....Please save him....;_;.....Please.....
    Kisses ^_~
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  • From ANON - Jahloveangel on December 29, 2006
    Yay! I can actually review on the site now! ^_^ (Couldn't before bc ff.net and IE hate each other. . .)

    It may have been short, but I still liked it. Stupid Sasuke. Who goes to someone's house, presumably to talk, stays so long the other person goes to bed, and then leaves? Poor Naruto. Btw, I'm really liking your characterizations of these two. They're mostly in character, but they also have a bit of your own style in them. Always good!
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  • From ANON - oraday on December 29, 2006
    Wah!!! This is so much angst; it makes me appreciate the fact that the chapters are short...

    Soo... You're gonna write more for this, ne? I need some resolution for little Naru. I hate that Sasuke should make him feel worthless. If anything, that stupid bastardy Uchiha should feel like the lowest of the low. Damn that bastard!

    Heh, sorry about the mini-rant. I'm just going to distract myself by praising your wonderful writing. I think this fic especially showcases your talent since the emotion in the story is so well conveyed; I don't think anyone could do that as effectively as you have. Plus, I really detest angst, but I do tend to brave it for well written stories. And great fics like yours (which are utterly few and far inbetween) actually make me love and crave the angst! Thus, I'm hoping you write more^.^
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  • From ANON - YaoiLoverKira on December 29, 2006
    To put this simply,

    If. You. Don't. Update. In. Two. Seconds. I'm Going. To. Go. Crazy.

    ^^

    ~*Kira*~
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