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Reviews for Playmate

By : MsKeller
  • From ANON - dana on February 02, 2007
    that was sucha cute chapter that i wanna die of sugar shock. i really like it and perhaps itachi was crushing on temari they should be about the same age i'm not sure. can't wait til the next update.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 02, 2007
    i got a hearty chuckle out of that one. man, i never would have come up with something so cute. oh, and i'd so give you my address for those cookies ^.~ lol can't wait for your next update, whatever story that may be ^.^
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  • From Zrina on February 01, 2007
    This is just fantastic!! The whole manger scene was too cute for words! I can't wait to read more! /hugs
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 01, 2007
    Love your story!!!!!! ^.^
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  • From waruwaru on January 31, 2007
    Ryahah!xD
    So funny! Update soon! ne?^o^
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  • From anapana83 on January 31, 2007
    This was a fun read. I'm glad they will not be in any specific order. You tend to get ideas later on and want to got back and yadayada. That last one was a GOOD chap. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ras on January 31, 2007
    Haha. I shall glompeth thee, especially when you wear Sasuke's smexy black condom outfit... or whatever. Just think of all the people who will want us to pose together... glomping you is my duty as a fangirl. Too bad meh stupid jacket is too big right now. Makes me look like a Naruto in an mpreg. Finally, they get some action. Figures Yondy would walk in on it. Haha. Sasuke's a trooper though the way he carries on. I would expect nothing less. *hugs*
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  • From ANON - lo on January 30, 2007
    Nice sex scene, I am very impressed. That was fun and funny.
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  • From ANON - dana on January 30, 2007
    another great chapter. i have been in that position before (have you) and let me tell you if they walk away you might as well keep going because who knows when you will get the chance again. are you going to have a flashback of what yondy says to the boys in another age or are you going to continue it later on. i can't wait to see.
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  • From ANON - Z on January 30, 2007
    I remember this as being really well written. Its been quite a while though and I forgot your writing style. In this new chapter, i found many many mistakes and it could have been written better. I'm not sure if it's your beta or if its you but perhaps its time for a better editor. I really like this story. I think its adorable and I'm not trying to insult your beta or anything. Promise. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 30, 2007
    omg, wasn't like, just yesterday that we talked about this? ah, that was wonderful. very hawt, and funny as hell. is kyuubi going to do some crazed mother shit next update? i can so see her kidnapping naruto. man, what a shame. which gets me thinking... naruto was 17 in this one, so why in the world would yondy think his mother could do anything to him? unless he's just a pansy... but then again, i know that father mentality, always looking out for your precious baby... *rolls eyes at her own father*
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  • From ANON - shinigamigrl on January 30, 2007
    Awesome idea and well written. I'm thinking about writing a chapter. I'll contact you by email a little later. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^
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  • From roely on January 30, 2007
    wow! that was good!
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  • From ANON - Sophade on January 06, 2007
    hhhhhhhmmmmmmmmm yummy the third chappy is really good ^^ teehee can't wait to see what wil happen in two year or so XD (if the try kissing each other at 14 what will it be when the hormones push them farther?? XD)
    hehe anyway I love the Idea! ^^ till how much will you go? 20? 80? XD

    wanna read mooooore ^^
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  • From ANON - Gonrie on December 30, 2006
    Yay!!! Please update soon! This story is sooo cute!
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