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Reviews for Hot Chocolate

By : Shosuro
  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 20, 2006
    ok, all in all that was completely awsome. Sex scene was absolutely incredible but um some of the sentences and grammar just didnt make sense. And what was with the line about beaten his sex like he owed him money...? Yeah I watched that episode of Dave Chepelle and that was just kinda tacky adding that in there ya know. Not flaming or anything cuz this story was awsome just reviewing ya know. Anyhoo, loved it, keep up the good work.
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