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Reviews for Pain

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  • From ANON - Atle on December 07, 2010
    It's really good but another chapter would be nice
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  • From ANON - HYin on December 24, 2008
    THAT WAS AWESOMEEEE!!!!!! Please write more!
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on November 04, 2008
    The 'Wow' Bit Was Out-Of-Place.She Should've Said Something More...Sexier.

    But I Like The Way You Depicted Naruto's Feeling & Whirling Emotions.Nice Writing Skills Indeed.

    Update Soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Simon on October 13, 2007
    Just make one more please... its hard to judge - you dont tell very much...
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  • From ANON - hieiashke on October 04, 2007
    well, it's just one chapter...
    What's the fun of putting Hinata in it is all she's gonna do is stand there, ne?
    update, onegai!!!
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  • From gaarafan64 on August 21, 2007
    please continue i like this story
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2007
    Why havn't you done chapter two yet? You got the positive respone you wanted, so where's the next chapter? Come on, we NEED the next installment. Please don't abandon it as a simple one-shot when it could be so much more. :(
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  • From Motherwood on March 02, 2007
    oh my fucking word...
    THE SECOND ONE!!!
    ASAP!!
    wii-chan would love this if it weren't about sakura...
    oh well!! we'll send it anyways.
    i seriously thought this was supposed to be a Naruto/Hinata!
    Why the hell is the first page about sakura?!
    it's good anyways.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2007
    AWESOME story!!! ^_^ It should be a crime if you don't continue this...
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    A novel premise! I'd like to see more.
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  • From ANON - Nick on January 01, 2007
    Awesome beginning please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nameramthgin on December 31, 2006
    Good story. Any chance at more chapters? If their is I might let you sit at the cool kids table. :)
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  • From ANON - Blackash Kitsune on December 31, 2006
    Keep it up. I want to see some more here.
    Chop Chop! (LOL, just kidding).

    But seriously, get me 20 more cc's of 'Pain'... STAT!

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  • From ANON - Jessica on December 30, 2006
    Please write anothor chapter! Normally I only go for maledom but I love the Naruto/Hinata relationship. I'm kinda shocked that I like this, but I did. Another chapter, please! I'll be your best friend!
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  • From ANON - ... on December 30, 2006
    make more please
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